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Hiding in the Shadows of the Crescent Moon (Part 1) by Rose Redd
Hiding in the Shadows of the Crescent Moon (Part 1)
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Oof, poor Sammie has his first friend turn into the school's Queen Bee who is most likely an Exemplar who manifested with a figure like that at her age so suddenly. And for Suzy to look in his direction and frown, why did she frown?Natchez, Mississippi
Natchez High School
Uh oh, aches and pains in his limbs, nauseous all morning, and on a Saturday when his parents are out. *eyes bug out* His parents are in the Klan, his father is the Sheriff, local Grand Wizard, and chairman of the local Humanity First branch, this poor kid got born into a nightmare situation.The next day,
at the house of Samuel Haskins
His father is a monster.Not that he believed in anything that his parents did or said or believed in. No, he kept his opinions to himself. When he was six, his father beat a black girl severely right in front of him, for “daring to look at him.”.
Expansion for Wizards of Neverwhere, don't tell me that is the Whateley Universe's counterpart of World of Warcraft. Ugh, bumps into Suzy Summerfield, former best friend, helps her up and she responds like that. Manifesting didn't do any good to her manners. Wait, she started to mature around her eleventh birthday, did she start manifesting that young and just never get tested to see if she is a mutant or is her figure not due to being a mutant?
Poor Sammie is in love with his former best friend, who now wants nothing to do with him. Pebbles on the window, a note underneath a flower pot, a message about tomorrow being a beautiful day to go fishing—uh oh, is she sincere, or is this a trap? They meet at the old shack that had been their fort—yup, this feels like a trap to me. Great, in love with her and not thinking she could bring some of her popular 'friends' to ambush him.
Ready to go fishing the next morning, his dad in Sheriff uniform, channel cats, catfish, I hope they don't get as big as some river and lake catfish can. Off to the old shack, a nice place for a hideout for kids to hang out. Whoa, it seems Suzy has done more repairs and cleaning since they were last there together. Wait a minute, all these things here, this seems more like the place a runaway would hide than a kid's hideout.
Suzy lifts him in a big bear hug saying she is sorry over and over while crying, oh boy, what has happened to her? A lot to tell him, this is going to be huge. 3 football players and two wrestlers who would have beat him up later for merely bumping into Suzy if she hadn't put him down at the mall are a bunch of hormonal thugs.
She started to manifest at 11 as an Exemplar and might be a Gadgeteer also, no wonder she was overwhelmed.“I should have handled things differently, I know that now. But I was scared. I was barely eleven, and I was maturing far too soon, and far too fast. In addition, I had flashes of intuition and learning just came easier to me. I barely had to study anymore. I had to hide my true self. I was the first girl in our class with breasts. I was the first to have their period. I was maturing way faster than everyone else. I somehow knew that if I didn’t put distance between us, you would be hurt.”
Exemplar 4 or higher at least from what she is describing.
Crap, if his father wasn't chairman of the local Humanity First branch, she might have tried to stay in touch with Sammie. Idiots lying about taking Suzy's virginity and she is going to give it to Sammie, a hell of a reunion/make-up between these two.“I have absolute recall over anything I read, I took several IQ tests online anonymously. I’ve scored over three hundred on every one. I knew that if I stayed close to you my appearance would get you targeted by other boys as we got older. Then there is the matter of your family… For both our sake, I thought that out of sight-out of mind would be best. Still, I should have told you why. Maybe we could have kept meeting in secret? I’m not sure. But I regret hurting you.”
In the afterglow of it, Suzy has to tell Sammie something that may scare him, eep. With awareness and increased attention to detail, she has been observing Sammie, she knows he is starting to manifest as a mutant himself, the symptoms he had were the first obvious sign.A short time later.
Shrinking, changes in facial features, is he a changeling or is it something else?“Subtle changes in your facial features, your skin, your bone structure, your irises are ever so slightly getting lighter, while the whites of your eyes are slightly darker. And not just your face. Your body is changing. You’ve lost several millimeters in height, as well. You appear to be shrinking slowly. I’m afraid you are manifesting slowly as a mutant. You need to get ready to leave, as soon as you can. I’ll get together as much money as I can, I advise you do so too. Pack a ‘get-away’ bag, and be ready to run as soon as you can, in case your changes speed up.”
Suzy is in tears, she knows what will happen if his father, any of his friends in Humanity First, or the Klan were to find out about Sammie. She has advice for Sammie on where to go and plans on how to help him, but Sammie is shaken, saying he needs to go fish since he told his dad that is what he was doing. Oh, she caught some of them this morning and they are in the fridge, she is a genius.
Yeah, the very picture of Americana, of the bigoted, hateful side that tries to remain hidden. Mothers Against Mutant Aberrations, both of his parents have probably committed crimes for which they need to be in jail. Poor kid is living a nightmare with those parents.Later that evening.
Sammie is called a freak by his father.The next morning.
His eyes changed since breakfast, good grief, he needs all the luck to get out of this now. His own father catches up to him and beats Sammie up badly, this monster needs to be taken down. Sammie can crawl off, gets to the road, and passes out, his father comes back with a shovel believing he killed Sammie only to find him gone, sociopath to do that to his own son for twisted beliefs.Looking at the boy’s eyes, he saw the light green tint to his sclera and the light grey irises that had replaced the boy’s formerly brown eyes.
Picked up and taken to the ER, Sammie is in bad shape and they put him in an ice bath to cool him down but it just stabilizes him, I hope this means no burnout. Half an hour later his dad shows up to act as the 'concerned parent', ugh, I hope Sammie wakes up and tells them everything including what groups his father and mother are members of. Great, new ER chief who doesn't know the Sheriff's reputation. Great, he was in a state called burnout due to the beating, I hope his father is caught and his control over this town is ended. Asking how long until they can take him home, you sociopath, I hope something happens to end your threat. Sammie's heart stopped! I hope Suzy does something about Sammie's parents.Merit Health Hospital
Natchez, MS.
Several days later.
Adams County Sheriff’s Office.
Natchez, MS.
Oh, please let something bad happen to this monster before this story is over. Richard Haskins has failed as a father, as a Sheriff sworn to protect all people in his jurisdiction, and as a human being imo.Lists of known pedophiles and violent criminals. Of course the files he had the most interest in were the blacks, the natives, the Asians. Anyone he could pin the beating on.
Governor Clement calls and knows about Richard's 'hobbies' as he calls them. The press is painting Sammie as a victim of anti-mutant hate and the voters are eating it up, meaning Clement doesn't want that. Step down as Sheriff, once the media dies down send Sammie off to school somewhere far away, and one of his deputies is picked to replace him as Sheriff. Oh, Richard isn't going to stand for this.
He is delusional, he believes mutants just pretend to be human until they manifest from the sound of it. And plotting to murder his own son while he is helpless in a hospital bed, I hope the security guards end him when he attempts this.That monster that had fooled him into believing it was his son was dragging him down into dangerous territory. If it woke and told it’s story his people would not report it… but the media, on the other hand would. Richard knew his men, or at least he thought he did. But what if he was mistaken? What if one of them was sympathetic to the creature? There was a lot to think about… How could he silence it while under guard at the hospital?
Eyes covered by bandages wrapped around his head, cold and hot at the same time due to ice bath and burnout. Oh crude, all those physical changes, he is becoming a girl and is pale with a slight green tint to his skin already.Later that night
Merit Health Hospital
Natchez, MS.
The beating and injuries, his body trying to heal from those have greatly sped up his physical changes.While his skin had gained a light green tint, his nipples and areola had become a dark green. Not only that, but both had grown in size. Looking at the ever so slight swell to his chest, he figured out what was happening.
What the!; the nurse couldn't see Sammie while he was in shadows in a corner of the bathroom, they had to turn on the light to see him. Oh crud, Sammie doesn't know they will help him, fears they are on his father's side, and distracts the nurse and guards so he can sneak into a supply closet. Scrubs and hospital slippers on, experiments with fading into the shadows intentionally. Code Yellow, Sammie, you shouldn't have done this, away from the security guards and hospital your father or his friends might find you.
Hours of hiding in the shadows in the supply closet, a mad dash to the stairwell, and slowly descending to the bottom floor, how were there no security guards watching the stairwells? Several blocks from the hospital, he passes out in a dirty alleyway. Dark when he awoke, he arrived at the shack just before sunrise. Sweaty, filthy, and a slight fever, crude, you may feel safe being free, but if that burnout flares up again you are in deadly trouble.
He has been asleep for two days, oh boy. Soft drinks in the fridge and a coded message from Suzy, he finds the real note. Suzy is being watched and tailed, she knows about Sammie's father being fired unofficially, and the new sheriff is one of his father's Klan buddies, shit! A rumor that Sammie is a dangerous criminal who needs to be brought in, the Governor should have made sure none of Richard's buddies was given the job of sheriff. They plan to kill Sammie if he is caught, double crud.Two days later.
Suzy owns the property the hidden shack is on and has shell companies, dang. Since when have corrupt officials cared for a warrant. Stock market speculations, and only a thousand dollars for Sammie, Suzy has used her powers well. She knows about Whateley and tells Sammie about it, he has to get there to be truly safe from Humanity First and the Klan. No trains, planes, or buses, how will Sammie get to Whateley?
Sammie burns the letter, and then finds food in the fridge, Suzy thinks of everything. So much food in such a short amount of time, Sammie is eating to fuel his changes, how much more will he change besides becoming female? Another day for the fever to pass and his changes into a girl are almost complete, at least on the exterior. 9 inches of height, and 30 lbs of weight, that means she is 4'9" now, ouch. Poor new girl is going to have it rough for a while. No way to contact Suzy either, I hope the FBI finds out about this case and arrest every member of the Klan, Humanity First, and Mothers Against Mutant Aberrants involved.
Sammie sneaks into a Walmart and uses her power to hide in shadows in a corner of the automotive department until it closes. No boys will fit her, she needs her measurements to find clothing that will fit. 4'9", 32C, 22-inch waist, 32-inch hips, she has become a shortstack who will need to learn how to keep boys away. All these new clothes and the most dreaded, the panties, I wish she had someone to help her. The cloaking field limited to six inches out from her body, is still very useful. Oof, most people don't realize the bakery crew at stores show up hours before the other staff, at least Sammie avoided being caught.That night.
The way Richard Haskins thinks about anyone who isn't white and baseline is beyond disgusting. Use of that term for a changeling, so help me, I've had to restrain myself from lunging at the monitor in hopes of somehow breaching through to their reality and strangling this monster. Uh oh, Sammie left evidence at the Walmart including fingerprints. Richard, I hope before this is all over some form of justice falls on you.Across town.
Later that day.
Her physical changes have advanced, more curvy, light green-tinged skin mottled with patches of brown, her ears are starting to take on a pointed shape, and the biggest change only has a few days to complete her change on the outside into female. Black hoodie and sweatpants, in that state at that time of year are going to stand out. Sneak onto a ship at the river so she can get out of the state, yikes, her father might realize this and already set up people to search that area. Shit! Steps on a stick and gets shot by her own father with a shotgun, her cloaking field dropped, worst case scenario.Meanwhile, at the shack.
Richard, you can keep lying to yourself but Sammie was your son. Sammie is injured, but snuck onto the ship without Richard noticing, I hope the people on the ship aren't bigots like Richard.
The bullet only grazed her shoulder and she is still bleeding, Richard was trying to kill her in cold blood. Crap, so much lighting on a riverboat. Storage closets are Sammie's friend, and she finally ducks into an empty cabin. I hope no one checks inside. In the bathroom, she can clean and bandage her wound, but now her emotions hit her, her own father tried to kill her. Oh boy, all these fears, no longer anything of himself left, female, is she even human anymore? Sammie needs help and fast.
Hhm, I wonder if her BIT is based on a fantasy creature. Great, falls on her ass, and more fears well up, would she see Suzy again, would Suzy love her as a girl, is she a lesbian now? Oh great, hit a sandbar and 3-4 hours for a replacement ship to arrive.Standing back up, she looked in the mirror. The black hair with magenta streaks, the pointed ears, green skin and green tinted eyes. She certainly looked like some sort of fantasy creature.
Good, he deserves all this. Highstanding member of two hate groups, probably involved in various hate crimes and probably murders, and tried to murder his own son turned daughter, he deserves every bad thing coming to him. Hitting the road in the RV, he still plans to kill Sammie, I hope the local authorities take him and Doreen down. These two are as twisted as you can get without being mass murderers, cannibals, or serial rapists. Calling Sammie armed and dangerous, you sociopath, I hope everyone involved goes down.The Haskins home,
Natchez, MS.
Sammie is trying to sneak around to find food on the abandoned ship. Crap! They found her hiding place, they took her stuff, and at least one of the staff doesn't believe the stowaway is a mutant. Sammie runs to escape, but the police are there with dogs, why can't she catch even a little break!?! Oh good, she got off the ship undetected and to shore, but now what?Meanwhile, on the ship
Samantha Everheart is there to talk to Hartford.Whateley Academy,
Schuster Hall
Suzy, thank you for reaching out to Whately for help to save Sammie, but Samantha Everheart can trace any call no matter how many VPNs or proxy servers are used.“We have a possible obsidian alert notification, albeit it’s coming from an unusual source. An anonymous e-mail has reported that a young mutant boy is in danger, and has been directed to the school. I’ll forward it to you. I was initially going to place it in the low priority investigations list, however, A.P.B. has been issued for an escaped mutant sought in possible assaults in Mississippi. The name is identical to our potential alert, however this subject is female. Further research has discovered that our mutant escaped from a hospital in Natchez, Mississippi. I pinged the IP of the initial e-mail. It bounced through various VPNs and proxy servers, tracking it through New York City, Riga, Latvia, Buenos Aires, Argentina and Bangkok, Thailand before tracing the source to… Natchez.”
Great, so bigotry of all sorts and not just towards mutants is still active and festering in the deep South.Although there were heroes in Mississippi and Louisiana that would be notified of the alert, Amelia Hartford had little faith in them. Backwater hick territory in the deep south bred prejudices and low intelligence. Many H1 chapters had sprung up in the region, which was not surprising given how minorities were treated historically.
So at least one if not both sides of Sammie's family are bigots going back a long time, just great. Not knowing how far along Sammie is in changing into a girl or her other changes complicates things.She shook her head. Bedford… the middle name of General Nathan Bedford Forrest, notoriously known for both his serving in the Confederate army, and the Klan.
Sammie hid in the back of a pickup truck, at least she avoided the dogs and police. Sneaks into the bed of another truck at a local bar, hides under the tarp, and gets to Memphis, sneaking out once again when the truck stops to avoid being caught and explore her surroundings.Near Tunica, Mississippi
She has stayed here in an abandoned house, crying her eyes out again as her period has started, I hope she is found soon. Rob a pharmacy for supplies after it closes to deal with the issue, oh boy, the security cameras in those places tend to be better than most.Three weeks later.
Memphis, TN.
Oh boy, what does this mean? Aylene DeVoe is watching through closed circuit footage from one of her businesses, knows the falling objects mean something and follows to the parking lot camera view. She catches a glimpse of Sammie and thinks of her own time when she first manifested, marginally taller than Sammie before she manifested herself. A skinny, short geek-type girl who went from 5' to 5'10" with a curvy figure that boys and some girls noticed. Dark blue eyes and hair, interesting.Interlewd
Sammie, run! This sick woman wants to own Sammie and owns a brothel, she needs to be in jail away from the rest of society.Her discovery of her siren powers, heightened pheromones, and ability to change her reproductive organs allowed her to seduce anyone she wanted.
It sounds like on her latest store raid Sammie got ambushed, tased, and abducted. Locked in this kind of room, if this Aylene DeVoe has her in such a cell she is sicker than I thought. A tall blonde woman with red eyes, just how many mutants are in Aylene's employ? Dragged into an elevator, taken high up in a skyscraper. The way Aylene talks to and about Sammie makes me shudder in revulsion.Some days later.
Siren powers and heightened pheromones, this is rape by powers and to a minor, I would kill Aylene if I could to save Sammie from this happening. What the, this nurse can grab someone like a Vulcan mindmeld and do a full body scan of their entire body and everything in it including the age of organs, that is useful and right now scary. Sammie feels compelled to tell Aylene things, this is an abuse of powers to the extreme. Tells about the bullet grazing her shoulder, the nurse knows she is a changeling due to the recent changes to her body.
Nurse Ratched, how appropriate. New pet, put her to work, you enslave girls with your power and make them work in your brothel, death is too good a fate for you now! Goblin, a room in the basement made to look like a cave, talks about some clients' fantasies, this woman needs to be trapped inside her own mind and forced to experience everything she has ever done to others using her powers over and over until she feels true remorse.
What did Aylene do to Sammie, that sick woman abused her and raped her mind and body, if Aylene isn't maimed or dead by the end of this I will be upset, that kind of monster is even worse than Sammie's parents. No, Sammie, you haven't lost your attraction to Suzy, Aylene's powers messed with you. Healthy and STD-free, I would rather be dead than in this place. A micro-explosive collar that explodes if you disobey or try to escape, Aylene would have demons looking at her and saying "What the hell!" Nurse Ratched is as sadistic as Aylene, the girls trapped here need rescuing, and Aylene, Nurse Ratched, and anyone else running the operation taken down.Some time later.
Samantha Everheart has seen the footage of Sammie running from a store in Memphis, I hope they have more leads than that. Cyberkitty and Blue looking into it, says to inform allied heroes in the area with the information, I hope this all results in Aylene's entire operation being taken down.Meanwhile, at Whateley Academy.
Great, Humanity First saw Sammie in Memphis and informed Richard about it. And Doreen doesn't consider Sammie her child anymore, so many monsters in this story.Interstate 55
near Coldwater, MS.
So, Aylene's codename is Delilah and she prefers to only go by it. Ugh, Ratched aka Claire has a crush on Delilah and she won't include Claire or her fantasies.The Hedonist’s Paradise brothel
Memphis, TN.
They are both so toxic, I can't take much more of them right now.Ratched scowled. “I’ve told you before, you bitch, it’s not a crush! I love you! You sleep with all the other girls, but not me.”
”Stop pushing your feelings on me! I don’t like you. You have the audacity to be taller than me, You have bigger tits, and better curves. I also know all about your sadism. You love to torture your clients, and then heal them. I am not some whimpering sub, no matter how aggressive my pheromones make my lovers.” The blue-haired woman screamed.
Claire might be right, it seems Aylene only likes those she can control and manipulate to do what she wants. Great, now in the room disguised as a large cave and Sammie is trapped there by the collar.“You can’t deal with the fact that my healing neutralizes the effect of your pheromones on me, or that I can resist your vocal tricks.” The nurse screamed.
Claire wants to let all the girls escape so Aylene might give her a chance, but she knows it wouldn't work that way. Eww, someone please save Sammie from this place and all the other girls soon.The older woman looked at her. “If you were to die, she would be suspicious, but if you escaped…”
Wait, seems I was wrong, Claire let Sammie get dressed and removed the collar safely. Heavy duty sedative to knock out Claire for hours, Sammie hides for hours in the darkness of the back rooms and then slips away to freedom, I hope she can remember the address and tell Whateley about this place. At a vacant strip mall, Sammie breaks into one of the stores and curls up into a ball to start crying, vomiting everything out. Oh god, not attracted to females anymore, thoughts of males in her head, please let this all be the aftereffects of Delilah's powers and nothing more, Sammie doesn't need any more trauma.
The Hedonist’s Paradise brothel
Memphis, TN.
She won't even let them kill themselves to escape the nightmare she has trapped these poor girls in, I can't think of a punishment worse than death that would be severe enough for Delilah now. Heh, trust that Claire Draymond, after all they have been through and how she helped her, didn't betray you. Delilah, you are an arrogant fool. Claire has plans to console Delilah once Sammie is out of town, these two deserve each other.The collars were supposed to prevent escape, and she managed to use her persuasive powers to keep the prostitutes from committing suicide.
Searches for Sammie blocked by someone from the Vatican, it seems Hartford got ahold of Paige Donner. The Chief and no way to I.D. by voice, so we don't know the Chief of what. Crap, this person knows that by who is blocking them Sammie has become involved with Whateley Academy. I don't like the description this bigot has for Whateley Academy. Richard is now even more determined to kill Sammie, he has gone full psycho from being a sociopath before.The Haskins RV
Memphis, TN.
Sammie hiding in a boxcar, an escape method Ratched had suggested to escape Memphis. Please let Sammie find more allies and get to Whateley sooner rather than later, but in the process see her monster parents taken down along with maybe some of their allies as well.On a train bound for somewhere.
Poisoned the local flock more than once, who is this man/monster? A congressman is upset this man isn't setting up his project in the congressman's district but in Vermont. A weapon against 'out of control' mutants, and the man talks about Damocles and the tale of the sword.Washington DC.
The Lincoln Memorial Reflecting Pool
Great, probably another MCO black project they can deny if found out, too many bigots in that organization.“To be a king, one must always operate with danger and uncertainty over your head.” the elder man stated. “Mutants are dangerous and unpredictable. The rest of us must maintain vigilance and keep them in check. Do you want such a target in your district, Congressman?”
Murder the congressman and make it look like an accident, I was right, this guy is a monster. And talk of the original eleven, lost five, a couple candidates, he is talking about Sammie. Illegal experimentation on mutants, I'm going to be sick.“Honestly? He’s an idiot.” after a few seconds he spoke again. “No, nothing too flashy. A car accident or the like should be sufficient.” Getting up, he looked around. “We have had some setbacks, of the original eleven, we have lost five. We will need to step up production. I might have a couple candidates, they are hunting a mutant that is likely headed for the school.” The old man closed the phone and left, scowling at the pigeons.
Several days in that boxcar, and Sammie is worn down and hungry. A tall man behind the counter waves her into a convenience store.Raleigh, NC.
North Carolina Railyards
Nice for her to have another ally even if but for a short while.“Don’t worry, the cameras are off. My son is a mutant, You seem nervous. Is something wrong?” the old man asked, as he ran his fingers through his graying hair.
Finally able to get supplies and new clothes again. In the bathroom, she changes her clothes but keeps the bustier to keep from bouncing all over the place, ouch. Now to find a safe place to sleep for the night and hope no one stumbles upon her.
A condemned house with rodents she can hear, and sleep comes. But the nightmares, god, I want to give her a hug right now and strangle her parents for giving her these nightmares.A couple hours later.
Oh, crap. Her parents are closing in on Sammie's location, please let Whateley staff get to her in time. No, what is nauseating is that you can think that way about your own child simply because they changed in a way they have no control over.Just outside Charlotte, North Carolina.
Okay, please no more of these two until the next part of the story, the bile is starting to try to force its way up my throat the more I read about the way they think and were raised.Growing up, her father would give sermons about the evil that hides among us, and how Satan had created them to test our faith. Destroy the evil, lest it destroy us. The creature had once questioned her about how her father could be a minister and yet be in the Klan. Everyone knows that the Jews own the printing companies and edit the Bible to reflect what they want.
Marrisa Dawson, Tansy's mom, we haven't seen her in a while.Whateley Academy.
She is a good woman to rush on these documents to help out Sammie. Oh, good, they know about the father's Klan connections and Marrisa has planned ahead. Yes, Sammie will get to the school safely and hopefully, the feds can be brought in to deal with her parents.Notices for emergency emancipation, petitions for guardianship, and petitions for restraining orders. She had been initially surprised when Amelia Hartford had pulled her aside and asked for her help.
Stay hidden, stay safe, and despite her GSD there has to be a way to hide. An internet cafe in disguise with the hoodie, she can't message Suzy due to her father. Darn, trains are out, no planes, or buses either due to the need for frequent stops to get food and resupply. Oh no, Sammie, traveling in the trailer of semi trucks can be very dangerous due to shifting cargo during transport.The next day.
Raleigh, NC.
Russel Marks is taking off to deliver cantaloupes to Richmond in four hours and Sammie hiding in the corner of a truck, none of the cantaloupes are ripe, rats. Once the truck stops she slips out and into the warehouse, eating her fill of fruits and vegetables, avoiding guards, and into a bathroom for a sponge bath. Now if only something could slow down her parents' pursuit.
Adolphus Kreig, why does this name sound familiar, and yet I'm sure he has never shown up in a story before? He is being experimented upon just to become something to destroy mutants, this kind of mindset I will never understand. Oh, great, he is a descendant of Nazis who escaped Germany.Meanwhile,
St. Johnsbury, Vermont.
A top secret laboratory.
And he is completely insane. This is Damocles, it needs to be wiped from the face of the Earth!The Jews, the blacks, everyone that did not fit the Aryan idea. He was a sleep agent, an agent of change. A change for the better, a change for the future. A change that would bring upon the next Reich. Yes, the pain was worth it.
He is being mutilated and doesn't even care. Thinking of his Nazi grandfather and his stories of butchering innocents for being different from him. Captain Goldstein, Adolphus murdered his own commanding officer for being a Jew, this is a true monster in every sense of the word. Murdering a whole village with explosives, barbaric. Great, he has been turned into a cyborg with the intent of wiping out any that don't fit his 'Aryan' ideal.
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