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The Cast-offs.
- Rosalie Redd
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Below is a stream of conscious commentary I type up as I read the story. There will be details from the story included in it. If you have not read the story yet and don't wish to have details of it spoiled, read no further.
The Cast-offs comments
Valentina DuMont, exhausted from just finishing class, and her roommate is just waking up. April May gets a call from her father, and Valentina is stuck listening in due to her exceptional hearing. Dropping off Holly tomorrow, who is Holly? Ask if Bailey and Momma are coming along, ouch, chicken pox, poor little Bailey. Oh, Holly is her service dog. Why does April May need a service dog? That answer about Bailey, is Bailey a transfemme, a changeling, or is there some other reason April May answered that way about her being a little sister?November 17th, 2007
Whateley Academy
Whitman Cottage.
Lyth Ath Tel'Ora, I'm calling her Lyth from now on. Why is she staring at a red-haired girl? Unprovoked attack by a crazy girl, blind teleport to avoid ex-boyfriend, and ends up in the Grove, Lyth has had some bad luck. Crying on her bed in her dorm room, she might need to see a counselor just to help her deal with that visit to the Grove.At that moment.
The Quad, Whateley Academy
Seesh, losing a boyfriend after they manifest, then manifesting herself only to be attacked by her father; someone give this girl a break. Hhm, her changes almost sound like Lyth is turning into a dryad. Bullying, poor girl is going through these unwanted changes, and the other kids think it okay to make things worse, it sickens me. Wait, beings like her dwelled, and she almost lost herself completely by blending in.
Shit, she is going to have trust issues for a while after that. Afraid of going to Whateley because people she knew before go there, and she doesn't want them to see what she has become. Good grief, give your friends a chance at least.Blurry, cloudy shapes appeared to her in a vision, and these somehow familiar beings warned her that those who had taken her in were using ancient magics to influence her to become as they were.
Ashleigh Hedgeworth, this girl has issues thinking of Fey and Tansy that way, just because they have more noticeable figures. Jealous of her sisters and the figures they might have by now, a rage simmering inside over this, she has serious issues. She can harm herself to cause harm to others, and does so to a freshman girl just because she has a better figure than her, this girl is a psycho. Oh god, I just remembered who this girl is. Pin Cushion, the psycho who is obsessed with her brother, the creep who psychically manipulated Inaba and raped her, then died while fighting Paul Bunyan and his ox.A little while later…
Melville Cottage
Freshman showers
Lyth is the one whom Pin Cushion used her power on. I wish that psycho would be locked up instead of at Whateley. Her roommate is Jolene, and I already don't like her; she doesn't even notice her roommate is in pain and only cares about finding some boys to have sex with. Lyth can only wear clothes made of plant-based fibers, which is worse than the no synthetics issue that Sidhe have.
Valentina getting her blood drawn, and paid for it.Across campus, at Doyle Medical.
Okay, what the heck? Are the rules of how powers work changing, and are they just learning it as they go along? Is this something that was possible in the past, but has never been seen before, or is Valentina unique somehow in this aspect? Great, the researchers call her in, let the girl rest when she needs to!When the researchers learned that she disproved assumptions about the nature of the Body Image Template, they were beside themselves. Not only had her Template been altered by Regen cloning, but she had gained a form of shifter power, a power thought impossible for someone with an Image Template to possess.
Sunlight sensitivity sucks. At least you have a mostly human appearance now. Hemovore, I wonder how many of those are at Whateley. Nearly bumps into Raptor, introduces herself with her codename of Sanguine. Ack, Pin Cushion is one of the last students you want attention from for any reason. That psycho wants to go after UpBeat, Downtrodden, and Inaba, she needs to be locked up for everyone's good. That is why she is after Raptor, good grief, there is no escaping her if you oppose her even once, from the sound of it.
Val is finally in her dorm room and overdue for sleep, April May is reading a book with the lights off thanks to her powers. Absinthe shows up to drop something off for Sunshine, aka April May. Berlin, MCO, I hope it isn't bad news. April is blind and reads using her power, they sent her a book that isn't in braille, the Berlin MCO showing they are still assholes.A short time later,
Whitman Cottage.
Val reads the read for her, a clerical error, codename already in use, request she make a new appointment to get a new MID. *string of curse words bleeped out*
Why do I get the feeling she is an anti-mutant bigot, and this is a trap to lure April May to their office to disappear her. Yes, go with her, Val, for her safety. I hope they can have a fun day of shopping and other things.Agent Leslie McAddley.
Administrations and Logistics Department.
Joy Saundersen, oh crap. An eldritch brace on her arm, run!Interlude
The night before.
Lancaster, NH
Someone get that thing off this girl and banish or destroy the entity trapped inside it! 2 dead in a way that makes police officers vomit from seeing it. There has to be a way to stop Ambivalence and save Joy.Suddenly, Joy was no longer in control. Only Ambivalence.
Nikki watching Leanne and Koehnes as each waits for the other to start something; Jade is off with Wondercute, Wallflower is with Hank, Billie is sitting on the ceiling, Toni is doing homework, and one-handed handstands, while Ayla is reading a newspaper. Rats, heavy snow, and a red flag flying.Once again, November 17th
Poe Cottage.
Dang, that family just makes trouble for everyone. Nikki knows Steven, a creep to the Venus Inc. girls is a good way to blacklisted by all the girls on campus. Dang, Ayla's sources of information are spot on for what happened with Steven.“That would be Ashleigh Hedgeworth, no doubt. My family has had run-ins with her family over the years. Hedgeworth Enterprises has many divisions that are in direct competition with the Goodkinds, however it seems their latest efforts have been to try a hostile take-over of Richmond Industries. Given that the Richmond twins are on campus, it seems highly likely that her parents put her up to harrassing them.”
Inaba is starting school next semester. Ayla knows she is an avatar of a lunar spirit with rabbit features, just how good is Ayla's intelligence network?
Oh, crud. Inaba, avoid Jade and Wondercute at all costs.Ayla put aside the paper. “Four, and in each case they have had a… negative experience with Jade. The same holds true for five of the catgirls."
Tori Richmond is being tailed by Tiffany Cobb, a shifter who can take on a rat form. Telepathic communication with her brother James Richmond, and he has had it with Ashleigh. Aww, Aquerna always has the best stories to tell.The Quad.
Lost both their parents and who they were, what happened in that accident, and was it really an accident? Ouch, having to sleep more to escape the turmoil in his own head, I can relate.Ever since the accident and the big changes to their lives, she had lost more than just their parents, she had lost who she was. She was having trouble dealing with it, but James seemed to be having an even worse time.
Driving along a snowy road in an SUV, Tori and James in the backseat, why are they speeding, or at least not slowing down due to road conditions?February 6th, 2007
Somewhere in the Adirondack Mountains, New York.
That is not an accident, that is a murder attempt on the whole family that killed only the parents. I wouldn't be surprised if the Hedgeworths are behind it.Her parents screamed, and everyone started to panic as another car took the inside lane, and shoved their SUV to the outside edge of the road. He remembered gunfire, and his father turning the steering wheel over sharply. His sibling closed her eyes and hugged him tightly. Then there was silence, the sensation of tumbling through the air overwhelming them. There was an impact and pain, and then nothing.
They had to drag themselves through the snowy woods, injured, for miles. Break into someone's summer home and collapse, waves of pain as James' body changed, Tori begins to change as well, the pain is more intense the closer they are to each other, what the hell. Tori wakes James up through their connection, then goes to find her, stupid nightmare memory.
Aww, James watching a catgirl eat.A short time later, the end of lunch service.
Crystal Hall
Aww, she likes him. The nightmares continue, can't get used to it all, used to what? Did they somehow turn into each other? Is that what the physical changes from the nightmare memory are about?James blushed as the catgirl looked over and winked. Looking down at his sandwich, he intently concentrated on it as the girl finished and left.
Okay, now I'm even more confused as to what is going on and the source of their nightmares. Darn it, Tiffany Cobb was spying on them the whole time.His sister walked over and hugged him. “It’ll be okay. We’ll get through it. Everything will get better eventually. I’m starting to get there, but there are still times that I remember him… but you and I agreed we would do things this way, and people wouldn’t believe it if we told the truth anyhow.”
Megan Stone hiding in a tree from Springbuck, why does he want to be a thorn in her side? Crud, wind shifts, and he picks up her scent. Ugh, an incel who won't take no for an answer, and now thinks he needs to teach her a lesson, this creep needs a beatdown. Great, he rams the tree and causes Megan to fall, even with her feline agility, she hurts herself on the landing.November 18th, 2007
The Quad
A girl with long white hair slams Springbuck with a punch that knocks him backward, a black haired boy causes him to fall to his knees with his power, and Raptor dives in to slash him across his back. UpBeat is the girl, Downtrodden is her brother, so they are bully busters, no wonder Ashleigh is targeting them. Ah, so Springbuck is being paid by Ashleigh. Tori and James know the Hedgeworths are most likely responsible for what happened that killed their parents. Is Tiffany Cobb's actual codename Ratface? If so, she sucks at picking codenames. Tori, with Springbuck involved, Saber was going to get dragged into this anyway.
Ashleigh, just because someone is a known troublemaker and frequent detention-earner, it doesn't mean they will work with you. Eww, she is using sex to get Springbuck to work for her, I thought she had some standards. Ashleigh, you learned a horrible lesson from your mother. Oh shit, she followed her mother to something she shouldn't have seen, is this one of the reasons she is so messed up? *tries not to throw up* Her mother is evil!Melville Cottage
Ashleigh Hedgeworth’s room
The trauma of witnessing that horror with her mother involved warped Ashleigh's mind; it doesn't excuse her crimes, but it sure does explain why she is so twisted.Ashleigh had run back to her room, sitting in the dark, crying and utterly terrified. She wet the bed for the next two weeks, and her father beat her for it.
Great, so she is going after the Richmond twins, tormenting them, all at the behest of her father. Crap, nevermind, she considers it fun. The Bad Seeds have some members who might go along with your plans, but I doubt you will like the price they will ask. You leave Lyth alone!
April May has a right to be nervous, turning down Val's offer to go with her because of her sunlight sensitivity is nice, but you need a friend with you. Dang, her father, is there to drop off Holly and leave. April May needs her family now. All those things for Holly, and April May needs help putting things away. Val gets to meet Holly and is told about things back home. Aww, Holly likes Val, that is rare for an animal.November 18th
Whateley Front Gate
An email about rules for service animals, familiars, and non-combatant associated entities was sent out across campus. And Ashleigh considers it taking away her rights, the psycho. This is great, if she harms Holly, or any other such animal, familiar, etc., on campus, she can be expelled and prosecuted. Who is the girl lounging on top of Ashleigh's bookshelf, watching her?Across the Campus
Beck Library
Ah, Megan Stone, does one of her powers make her hard to notice, I forget. Yes, Megan, the Richmond twins don't realize how truly dangerous Ashleigh is.
The thing that was once Joy Saundersen, crap, don't tell me it is too late to save her. Whatever is inside that eldritch brace has left her little more than a feral creature.November 23rd, 2007
Berlin, New Hampshire
ARC, she was sent to ARC because whatever has latched onto her is that bad. How did she escape?Joy sat in her room, banging her head on the padded walls. She had been in ARC for what seemed like forever, but in reality it had been only two and a half years. Thoughts came unbidden to her. Horrible thoughts. Officially, her diagnosis was Depression, PTSD, and severe schizophrenia. She was once a normal, happy girl...
But that was before the car crash.
Above it said two and a half years, it would have to be 1 and a half years if this date is right. A drive to a fun day at the circus, a slick road, a semi truck with a load of lumber, forced off the road, slamming into the semi and flipping over several times, good lord, this is the kind of thing I have nightmares about. Joy was impaled on a broken piece of wood. How did she just blackout and wake up in the hospital? Why do they think she wasn't injured in the accident?August 8th, 2006
Methodist Hospital
Peoria, IL
Crap, mother and sister in surgery, low on blood of their type. She says the board went through her stomach, the doctor cuts her arm with a scalpel, but it heals as fast as he cuts. They used her blood, shit! Oh god, this is why they treat regenerator blood as a biohazard, this is nightmare fuel. Her poor sister and mother. Depression and PTSD, Joy wishes for death, but her regeneration is too fast to let her; no wonder they sent her to ARC. Otherwise, her regenerative blood could spread with each attempt she makes on her life.
Who freed Joy when she was in that mental state? She goes out of her cell, and a figure is lurking ahead of her.
Who is this insane individual who can turn others into zombies so rapidly after they are killed? This is beyond creepy to watch.Saturday, November 18, 2006
Arc, Black Section
High Security Prisoner Storage Vault
Alarms are going off as Joy wanders without purpose.
Shit, someone who is near-unkillable with her broken mind and an artifact dangeorus enough to be locked up in ARC. It called out to her in her mind, a mysterious golden cuff. It possessed her. And all this happened when Fey and others were at ARC and helped deal with Maelstrom, crap. It has been so long that I forgot Maelstrom can do that to those he kills.Thus it was that she stumbled into the mystical artifact lock-up.
Genevieve Hedgeworth is waiting for her daughter. The gargoyles' heads turned towards her!November 23rd, 2007
The Gates of Whateley Academy.
Only permitted on campus with prior clearance, glad to see Mrs. Carson takes such measures with some of the more dangerous parents.The fact that such high-level magical guardians were in place at the front gate truly impressed her, They might even be a challenge for her, if she ever decided to forcibly enter the campus. That was not her intention this day, however and seeing the Headmistress flying towards her seconded that thought.
A day of shopping with her daughter, sure that's all you are here for.
She is that big a threat. *gulp* And she is the one who Mrs. Carson had a battleship backing her up to deal with last time, okay, she is an extreme threat. Evil Eye, darn, I would have realized sooner if I just remembered her codename. Fey and Tennyo, those two are more than enough to deal with Evil Eye. Good, they only had to deal with her for 5 more minutes until Ashleigh arrived, and they left.Carson glared but didn’t take the bait. “The sophisticated act won’t get you anywhere, I know of your history. Circe filled me in.”
“Ah, yes. How is my old friend?” The interloper questioned.
Rosalyn Dekkard is assessing the kids she is escorting today. Saber, Sanguine, Raptor, Sunshine, UpBeat, and Downtrodden, I wonder why they are going today. Hehe, Val having that effect on Rosalyn, watch yourself, Rosalyn.Thirty minutes later, in front of Schuster Hall.
Donna Feidler is right, these kids need better disguises so they don't stand out. Ah, so most of them are going to the mall, while April and Val are going to the MCO office to deal with the MID and the new codename mess with April. I hope the MCO appointment isn't long so April and Val can enjoy the mall. 7 PM is a lot of time for trouble to spring up. 9:30 am appointment, boy, they have a long time to enjoy the mall and trouble to find them.
Idiots try to bar their way due to Holly, April knows all the laws pertaining to service animals, don't screw with you, MCO creeps. Irritated, yet they have to let her in or break the law. Ugh, tries to throw the intern under the bus about the communication not being in braille.
In other words, don't try to blame Absinthe for your screwups or deliberate acts of bigotry. Corona, a good codename for a light wielder who is blind.Valentina cleared her throat. “If you were about to try to throw that girl with the green hair that delivered the letter under the bus, I suggest you rethink that. An intern wouldn’t be in the position to handle such an important communication, beyond the task of delivering it. Now I’ve heard that there are many good agents in this office, but likewise I’ve heard there are also those that are not so inviting to my kind. It’s my understanding that the girl you are trying to throw under the previously stated bus is close to the director of this office, and handles complaint forms from Whateley Academy. Now if you don’t want her to learn that you tried to blame this on her, I would suggest putting your prejudices aside, and actually do your job.”
Good, they are finally done with this BS and dealing with bigots. I wish the good agents had been around to read the bad ones of the riot act.
I'm with Val, I wouldn't be able to resist doing such a thing to get to the bigots. Ack! Donna likes 1950s music, the torture!Valentina gave a habitual nod, and responded. “Yeah, but you handled it much better than I would have. If it had been me, I would have had to resist the urge to flash my fangs and ask ‘can we hurry it up, I’m getting hungry’…”
Bwahaha, I can't believe Val said that line after sitting by the others after finding them in the food court. Oh, good, Rosalyn knows the rumors about Pin Cusion having it out for a couple of them, mutual alliances being a good thing to have. Yikes! That is what happened to Rosalyn, aka Blackrose, old training team. I knew BMA could be dangerous, but someone dying from an awkward fall. Safety in numbers, trust her on this, a lot of students at Whateley have had to do this due to bullies and worse, teaming up.The food court, near the Walmart entrance.
Yes, pet Holly, she deserves all the pets. Raptor knows about the ones Pin Cushion has already gathered to her. Awkward, that is some way for a girl to manifest her powers for the first time. April is so upbeat despite it. Raptor, aka Annalea or Lea, has had it rough; the organization behind turning people into cryborg mutant-killers needs to be stopped. Valentina or Val, and her tale of woe, she turned into a 'monster' and fled into the sewers of New York, meeting the woman she considers her sister and drinking her blood.
Huh, I wondered about her appearance.gained the ability to shift into this form. The scientists think that my subconscious influenced the change with pop-culture references like Morticia Addams, Lily Munster, and Elvira, among others.
The way Tori stalls before saying brother, there is a lot they aren't saying about what happened to them. The loss of their parents, the changes and pain, how they survived in that cabin, and then leading the rescue party to the SUV. Tori needs all the support she can get right now; Holly is a very good dog. Megan, aka Meg, tells the tale of being a small kid and picked on, her mother working at the LaBrea Tar Pits Museum, and what the bullies did that led to her getting the spirit of a Smilodon.
Boy, that is a sharp sense of smell and taste. Val's mother has a new kid and has moved on, I remember that, ouch. Megan's father, I wish more of these kids had good, loving parents who could accept them no matter what.“I’m unfortunately stuck with a very strict diet. I’m a hemovore. I can handle water and the occasional liquid dairy product, but that’s about it. My digestive system can’t handle regular foods. It’s fine though, my taste buds changed as well. Things like this cherry water are okay, but blood actually tastes good to me, and I can tell the differences between species and even blood types.”
Crap, Ashleigh and her mother are here, all because Genevieve sensed something interesting was going to happen here. Crap! Very old magic approaching, I knew trouble would find them.Nearby, at the Starbucks in the food court.
A couple thousand years, crap, what was she known as in the past?“Perhaps I would, if you would be more honest with me. We celebrated your thirty-sixth birthday this spring, but I’ve been hearing stories around school about you fighting the head of the Mystical Arts department during World War Two. Also, there is the whole thing about you and the Headmistress getting in a fight, and you being shot by the Battleship New Jersey. That story has been floating out there a long time… but the ship was decommissioned in 1991. I can't believe you fought her when you were a teenager. If the stories about you fighting Circe are true, you are more likely at least 136 years old.”
With a chuckle Genevieve looked to her oldest daughter. “You are a couple thousand years off, but close enough.”
Ewww! Ashleigh, that is beyond sickening. Blood sacrifices of young girls regularly, her mother is a monster. Demon Azazel! Shit, this is far worse than I could have imagined.
Okay, she is far worse than any of the previous stories led me to believe. Ancient, evil, and twisted.Ignoring the eye-rolling, The elder Hedgeworth continued. “In exchange for a thousand years of servitude, he healed me and brought forth my dormant mutant powers, enhancing them while doing so.”
And for the next thousand years, I traveled the world in his service, doing his bidding. After he released me from his service, I continued my journey. I mingled with so many famous people, and witnessed so much of history. I was at the Sermon on the Mount, witnessed the black death as it spread across Europe. I saw the rise of the Catholic Church, and saw the Crusades. I shared a bedchamber with Napoleon as he planned his conquests, and predicted the persecution of religious minorities by Isabella the First and Ferdinand the Second.”
Ashleigh was astounded. “You slept with Napoleon?”
A smirk crossed Genevieve's face. “Napoleon, Beethoven, Eleanor of Aquitaine, Leonardo DeVinci, Henry the Eighth, Otto von Bismarck, there have been so many.”
All those children over the ages, lost to her because they don't share her longevity, how has she not lost her sanity from the repeated loss? Jean D' Arc was a descendant of hers and she dealt with her, crap. And she could sense all that about Fey and Tennyo, she is crafty, ancient, powerful, and twisted, just what we don't need right now, with the plans to deal with the Bastard looming in the future.“Your little sisters are the five hundred thirteenth and five hundred fourteenth children I have birthed. I loved each one, and I love you.
Carson thanks Fey and Tennyo for their help; Tennyo's family is away on CIA business, while Fey's dad was called to Washington. Now, for Carson to fill in the girls about Evil Eye and the past encounters Circe and she have had with the wicked woman. Because these two might face Evil Eye in the future.Office of the Headmistress
Whateley Academy
She would storm Whateley to steal the sapling for her schemes if she found out.Seeing the girl’s apprehension, Carson continued. “Miss Reilly, she is rumored to have mentored Darrow early in his career. She must NEVER find out about the world tree sapling.”
Ashleigh asks why her mother revealed all her secrets to her now.Starbucks Coffee
Berlin, NH
Ashleigh around for centuries, nooo! Emmanuel, the son of Francis Fitzgerald, and one of the few children not to inherit the mutant gene from their mother. Born in 1920, he is still alive and in a memory ward of a senior citizen facility. That is why immortality is a blessing and a curse, you outlive the ones you love.“That is true, however there are always exceptions. With your regeneration as high as it is, as well as being an exemplar, your aging will probably slow down by a considerable degree, so you will likely be around for several hundred years. Given that I don’t age, we will be together for a long time. Plus, I have a task for you, one that should benefit both of us in the long run.”
Rosalyn suggests they pick a name for their mutual protection group and make it official. Aww, April can't be a part of a combat training team, but she can be a part of their mutual protection group since they are all friends. Yes, listen to Rosalyn, don't let a cute girl with puppy-dog eyes and a genki girl rope the rest of you into a name that sticks and confuses others.Across the food court.
They all lost something, even Megan lost her innocence about her father and who he is. So this is how they get the name Cast-offs, highly appropriate for this group. Oh, good, Val and Saber know about Ashleigh and her mother being in the food court, also being there before they arrived, so not stalking them.
Ashleigh is curious about the job her mother has for her, uh oh.Meanwhile, across the food court.
Crap, the innocent soul being twisted by this monster into a weapon against Inaba. Good, the wards and mystical security prevent her from doing something stupid like trying to break into Whateley to steal the World tree sapling, even if she found out about it.“Don’t be afraid, It’s nothing dangerous. There is a girl that will be arriving during winter break that I’ve been… helping with some issues with her appearance. There is a final magical treatment she’ll need. However if she gets it before she arrives at the school, it might be used as a reason to prevent her from entering. Additionally, Since I’m not allowed on campus, the wards and mystical security would keep me out.”
Crap, Inaba and the school are in serious danger if this plot succeeds. Too late, Evil Eye has already placed the spell and knowledge of how to pass it on into Ashleigh.“Yes,” her mother replied “If I were to try to cross the threshold into the campus, there would be some very dangerous results for me. But, back to the task. I need you to simply act as a courier, taking the final spell past the wards and guardians. It should be undetectable within you. You will know when and how to give it to her.”
Rosalyn, April, Annalea, and Val were at the tables, while Megan, Tori, and James went to get more food. A packed food court, and suddenly a loud crashing sound as the exterior glass doors shattered. Wait, shambling, shit, it is Ambivalence, everyone, run!Meanwhile, roughly fifty yards away…
Sanguine is right, Rosalyn needs to get April and Holly out of there and call the school. And Rosalyn is right, help evacuate people and escape yourselves, that creature is too powerful.
Genevieve, you call this interesting, you are nuts.Nearby.
Okay, that description almost made me puke, only the Bastard would have something like armor mimics made. I knew that thing was bad, but this goes beyond even nightmare fuel. Darn it! Don't fight the creature, girls, listen to Rosalyn! Ugh, using this as a chance to study them as they fight so Ashleigh will know how to better deal with them in the future, you make me sick, Genevieve.“My dear, things are about to get interesting. Do you see the bronze-colored bracer on the girl’s arm? That’s what’s known as an armor mimic. It is said that long ago, before I was around, there was a great war with a monster known as the Bastard on one side, and the Humans, Sidhe, and others on the other side. In this great war, the Bastard had many skilled artisans and mages producing weapons for him. One such creation were the mimics. A sentient piece of armor, they are a parasite. They take over the wearer and use them as a host, consuming them. The fact that girl looks to be keeping pace with the damage inflicted to her body means that she must have regeneration greater than yours. A Mimic will bond to a host, sending tendrils into their body, manipulating it. As they control it, they slowly drain it of all nutrients and minerals. Nobody knows if the host’s consciousness remains, as they have no control over their body, and to the best of my knowledge, no telepath has ever been able to breech the parasite’s mental shielding.”
Sanguine has some good advice for the team's tactics against an unknown foe. All that work and the damage has already healed; they need to flee.Back in the food court.
Evil Eye asks Pin Cushion about the team starting with the twins. So she is filled in on what Pin Cushion knows, starting with UpBeat. James can cause mental fatigue and physical fatigue, now, those are some serious debuffs. Ack! The mimic turned into a lance and got Saber in the shoulder. Targeting Raptor over that, so petty.A short distance away.
Sanguine in bat form and in the fray, Pin Cushion sure knows a lot about her. Sanguine is thrown into the ceiling, now she is down, I knew they should have run. Now, about Saber, she suspects she is probably an Avatar.
Her mother says to think about this when recruiting. Pin Cushion thinks they are doomed, but is told not to count her chickens.“Well, they have overlapping powers. Lack of ranged attacks. Too much redundancy, not enough variety.”
Darn, they were starting to overpower it, but that darn mimic made Saber lose her grapple, and UpBeat kicked at. Crap, Saber's knee is dislocated. Raptor slams their foe, narrowly avoids a counterattack, and takes to the air to distract them. A distraction by UpBeat lets Saber get their foe into a grapple again, only for her to lose her grip. Their foe uses Saber to attack Raptor, now, both are unconscious, UpBeat is the only one left standing.
Crap, UpBeat has hit her upper limit on absorbed kinetic energy. UpBeat readies to be killed, only to be rescued at the last moment.
Man, she is really out of it, I hope their stays in Doyle won't be too long. Langley Paulson, so that is who rescued her. We rarely get to see him in his armor. Elyza Grimes is there, casting a healing spell on Tori, while Caduceus deals with the others.Looking up, she saw the zombified girl laying across the parking lot, a silvery man stood over her. Overjoyed, Tori mumbled. “It’s the Silver Surfer. We’re safe.” Then she collapsed to the ground, totally spent.
Liz Carson, Lillian Dennon, and Langley Paulson, now that is a powerhouse lineup. Bound and a call for ARC to deal with her, I hope they can get the armor mimic off her. Carson is upset that Evil Eye did nothing when she could have contained the armor mimic easily.
Boy, swearing a sorcer's oath just to get Carson off her back on the matter, she really doesn't like dealing with Mrs. Carson, does she. Poor Holly, that armor mimic is so unnatural it would scare humans if they had an enhanced sense of smell.Raising her hand and holding it out in front of her, Evil Eye invoked a sorcerer’s oath. “I do swear by the law of Soloman that I had no part in the creation of this Mimic, the bonding of it to this girl, or any part of it being here. It was long ago, but I grew up in a village smaller than this charming little hamlet. I came here for… nostalgia, it’s not often that I get to enjoy a quiet day in the country. That being said, It’s time my daughter and I left. We have shopping plans in Boston. I will have her back to the campus Sunday night.”
What is the secret of the Richmond twins? Will we find out soon, or will it be many stories from now? Tune in next time for possible clues.Doyle Medical Center,
Whateley Academy.
The next day
This was a great way to get to know so many different characters and for them to join together as friends, and for mutual protection. I loved learning more about the characters introduced in their own stories and the new characters as well.
I knew Pin Cusion was bad, but not this bad. Nor did I realize why she is so twisted; her mother makes her look like a saint. she never had a chance at a normal life, or even sanity, with a mother like Evil Eye. I can only hope that her schemes against the Cast-offs backfire and Evil Eye's scheme for the poor friend of Inaba backfire as well.
The MCO seems to think they are the law sometimes, they need to learn all the laws before they try even bending them. Not knowing the laws about service animals, even I know the basics of those. I hope April doesn't have to deal with any more idiots trying to bar Holly from places she is allowed as a service animal.
The Richmond twins; I'm most curious about their secret and why they are so scared of the Hedgeworths finding it out.
Genevieve, from previous stories, we knew she was evil and manipulative, along with being at least a century old. What was revealed in this story blew that all away. I could have never imagined she was thousands of years old and made a deal with Azazeal to serve him in exchange for saving her life and power.
Joy, I know she was probably just made to be a threat for the story, but I can't help but wish they could do something for her.
I can't wait for future stories with each of the Cast-offs and their foes.
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- there were hints as to who Bailey might be in the story. If you can deduce it. As to why April needs a service dog, it was mentioned in her last appearance, she emits bright light from her eyes, like looking into the sun. Its so bright that her eyes can't take in light to see.
Lyth Ath Tel'Ora, I'm calling her Lyth from now on. Why is she staring at a red-haired girl? Unprovoked attack by a crazy girl, blind teleport to avoid ex-boyfriend, and ends up in the Grove, Lyth has had some bad luck. Crying on her bed in her dorm room, she might need to see a counselor just to help her deal with that visit to the Grove.
Seesh, losing a boyfriend after they manifest, then manifesting herself only to be attacked by her father; someone give this girl a break. Hhm, her changes almost sound like Lyth is turning into a dryad. Bullying, poor girl is going through these unwanted changes, and the other kids think it okay to make things worse, it sickens me. Wait, beings like her dwelled, and she almost lost herself completely by blending in.
Blurry, cloudy shapes appeared to her in a vision, and these somehow familiar beings warned her that those who had taken her in were using ancient magics to influence her to become as they were.
Shit, she is going to have trust issues for a while after that. Afraid of going to Whateley because people she knew before go there, and she doesn't want them to see what she has become. Good grief, give your friends a chance at least.
-This sound at all familiar? We MAY have seen her before...
Her roommate is Jolene, and I already don't like her; she doesn't even notice her roommate is in pain and only cares about finding some boys to have sex with.
- Your beauty is beyond compare
With flaming locks of auburn hair
With ivory skin and eyes of emerald green
Your smile is like a breath of spring
Your voice is soft like summer rain
And I cannot compete with you, Jolene
Okay, what the heck? Are the rules of how powers work changing, and are they just learning it as they go along? Is this something that was possible in the past, but has never been seen before, or is Valentina unique somehow in this aspect? Great, the researchers call her in, let the girl rest when she needs to!
-When Sanguine assumed her new, Female "mistress of the night" appearance via the regen cloning, she gained a variation on Everywoman's shifter powers. Which is highly unusual, since Exemplar BITs usually preclude the shifter ability, thus Sanguine as an Exemplar Shifter is an almost unheard of thing.
Val is finally in her dorm room and overdue for sleep, April May is reading a book with the lights off thanks to her powers.
- not reading via her powers. Braille is a language created for the blind, consisting of different patterns of raised bumps on paper that constitute letters.
Someone get that thing off this girl and banish or destroy the entity trapped inside it! 2 dead in a way that makes police officers vomit from seeing it. There has to be a way to stop Ambivalence and save Joy.
- Cant remove it. Even if you chopped off the arm it is attached to, it has sent its tendrils throughout her body. if might regenerate its bracer form from the tendrils, or even spawn as a second mimic.
Oh, crud. Inaba, avoid Jade and Wondercute at all costs.
- easier said than done.
Aww, James watching a catgirl eat.
- a very particular catgirl. one that he'll see more often now.
The nightmares continue, can't get used to it all, used to what?
- All I'll say is that you might be onto something.
Is Tiffany Cobb's actual codename Ratface?
- Yes, it is... which is ironic, because she was a candidate for Venus Inc. Didn't work out for her.
Ashleigh, just because someone is a known troublemaker and frequent detention-earner, it doesn't mean they will work with you. Eww, she is using sex to get Springbuck to work for her, I thought she had some standards. Ashleigh, you learned a horrible lesson from your mother.
- how much of it is from her mother, and how much of it is just that she's a masochstic nutjob that lusted after her brother and was already operating on less than full faculties?
Ah, Megan Stone, does one of her powers make her hard to notice, I forget. Yes, Megan, the Richmond twins don't realize how truly dangerous Ashleigh is.
- not her powers, just who thinks to look up to the top of a massive bookcase to see if there is a 5 foot tall catgirl reclining there?
Who freed Joy when she was in that mental state?
-nobody, her cell was damaged.
I wonder why they are going today.
-Black Friday sales.
Hehe, Val having that effect on Rosalyn, watch yourself, Rosalyn.
-Well she is exotically hot, and Rosalyn has a weakness for hot girls.
Ack! Donna likes 1950s music, the torture!
-Well, that's the era she's from. She's still catcing up after her time stuck in that other dimension. I was going to write a scene where she was in a bookstore, looking for modern history books, but I cut it.
That is what happened to Rosalyn, aka Blackrose, old training team. I knew BMA could be dangerous, but someone dying from an awkward fall.
-Yeah, I wanted to address the established canon that Rosalyn had changed after having her heart broken.
" predicted the persecution of religious minorities by Isabella the First and Ferdinand the Second.”
- apparently someone did expect the Spanish Inquisition.
Jean D' Arc was a descendant of hers and she dealt with her, crap.
-it was once implied in one of Bladedancer's stories that Joan of Arc was a Handmaiden of the Tao.
Carson thanks Fey and Tennyo for their help; Tennyo's family is away on CIA business, while Fey's dad was called to Washington.
-Nikki's Dad was, in fact, in Washington D.C. meeting with Raptor's Aunt and others about the Project Damocles Cyborgs.
Emmanuel, the son of Francis Fitzgerald, and one of the few children not to inherit the mutant gene from their mother.
-Specifically, his full name is Francis Scott Key Fitzgerald, or as he's most commonly known, F. Scott Fitzgerald, the author of The Great Gatsby.
Crap, the innocent soul being twisted by this monster into a weapon against Inaba.
-We'll see what that means for Lamprey, exactly.
Ugh, using this as a chance to study them as they fight so Ashleigh will know how to better deal with them in the future, you make me sick, Genevieve.
-Reprehensible, but militarily prudent.
Sanguine in bat form and in the fray, Pin Cushion sure knows a lot about her. Sanguine is thrown into the ceiling, now she is down, I knew they should have run. Now, about Saber, she suspects she is probably an Avatar.
-Ratface may be dumb as a post, but she is observant
“It’s the Silver Surfer. We’re safe.”
-I included this joke, based on the appearance of the picture of Paulson in armor on the Wiki.
I hope they can get the armor mimic off her.
-not very likely.
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Yes, I know one of the characters had a former girlfriend turning into a branch of the Sidhe that stayed on Earth and became more connected to plants. But I can't remember which story she was introduced in! Darn memory messing with me. Was it one of your stories? If not, could you at least tell me the author whose story she is introduced in so I can narrow down my search from hundreds of stories and their chapters, please.Lyth Ath Tel'Ora, I'm calling her Lyth from now on. Why is she staring at a red-haired girl? Unprovoked attack by a crazy girl, blind teleport to avoid ex-boyfriend, and ends up in the Grove, Lyth has had some bad luck. Crying on her bed in her dorm room, she might need to see a counselor just to help her deal with that visit to the Grove.
Seesh, losing a boyfriend after they manifest, then manifesting herself only to be attacked by her father; someone give this girl a break. Hhm, her changes almost sound like Lyth is turning into a dryad. Bullying, poor girl is going through these unwanted changes, and the other kids think it okay to make things worse, it sickens me. Wait, beings like her dwelled, and she almost lost herself completely by blending in.
Blurry, cloudy shapes appeared to her in a vision, and these somehow familiar beings warned her that those who had taken her in were using ancient magics to influence her to become as they were.
Shit, she is going to have trust issues for a while after that. Afraid of going to Whateley because people she knew before go there, and she doesn't want them to see what she has become. Good grief, give your friends a chance at least.
-This sound at all familiar? We MAY have seen her before...
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Oh, god. It has been so long, no wonder I forgot. Julie Robinson, the former girlfriend of Kayda, who turned into a Canotila due to her mutation. That is who Lyth is. God, she has been through hell and back since then.
wasn't she a teleporter? i forget what her abilities were
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