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Sins of the Father by Domoviye

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23 Aug 2022 00:03 #2187 by DanZilla
Sins of the Father (Part 1) can be found in the Gen 1 section or by using the link below... and please remember our authors are doing this for the response they get... please leave comments where you can for appreciated stories or if you have anything to bring to the conversation of written word and readers.

Sins of the Father (Part 1)
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23 Aug 2022 03:23 #2188 by Dreamer
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23 Aug 2022 14:02 #2190 by mhalpern
nice chapter

Micro scenes and bad ideas are freely adoptable
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23 Aug 2022 18:51 - 23 Aug 2022 19:11 #2191 by Dan Formerly Domoviye
Thank you Dreamer, as always your commentary was as much fun, if not more than actually writing the story.
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22 Nov 2022 01:00 - 22 Nov 2022 01:00 #2491 by DanZilla
Sins of the Father (Part 2) can be found in the Gen 1 section or by using the link below... and please remember our authors are doing this for the response they get... please leave comments where you can for appreciated stories or if you have anything to bring to the conversation of written word and readers.

whateley.academy/index.php/read/story/sins-of-the-father-part-2
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22 Nov 2022 04:42 #2492 by Dreamer
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Below is a stream of conscious commentary I type up as I read the story. There will be details from the story included in it. If you have not read the story yet and don't wish to have details of it spoiled, read no further.

Sins of the Father Part 2 comments
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Thank You for the story comments appreciated and help me know they are being read and liked. :-) Note: My story comments can't nor are trying to replace reading the stories, simply my way of enjoying them and letting the authors know I enjoy them.
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22 Nov 2022 06:00 #2493 by Rosalie Redd
Actually Dreamer Project Damoclese was something I invented for Raptor's origin. The mysterious group attempting to make cybernetic hunter-killer agents.
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22 Nov 2022 08:22 - 22 Nov 2022 08:27 #2494 by Dan Formerly Domoviye
Thanks for the commentary. I agreed with you in quite a few places. Jane is SCARY.

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