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Pop Goes the Weasel (Part 1) by Amethyst

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17 Sep 2024 00:00 #3773 by DanZilla
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17 Sep 2024 02:14 #3776 by mhalpern
of all the people that would probably benefit from being a receptive empath at minimum, they are an internal energizer instead. Carlos needs to get out

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17 Sep 2024 02:21 #3777 by Rosalie Redd
I don't think you want to be an empath around such a toxic person, the negative energy would be even worse for her.
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17 Sep 2024 02:23 #3778 by Amethyst
Yup, Carlos needs to get out, but he's been hit with a lot and it's a really confusing and overwhelming time for him. He doesn't really have anywhere to go either. Like Rose said, I wouldn't want to be an empath around his mother.
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17 Sep 2024 02:27 #3779 by mhalpern

I don't think you want to be an empath around such a toxic person, the negative energy would be even worse for her.

you want to be able to have a built in lie detector with someone that manipulative

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17 Sep 2024 02:29 #3780 by Rosalie Redd

I don't think you want to be an empath around such a toxic person, the negative energy would be even worse for her.

you want to be able to have a built in lie detector with someone that manipulative
empathy just reveals emotion, not intention.
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17 Sep 2024 03:02 #3781 by Dreamer
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17 Sep 2024 03:10 - 17 Sep 2024 03:49 #3782 by Rosalie Redd
Dreamer, you asked about the New Mexico MCO. Remember that Lamprey's mother was brought in to clear out corruption in the Taos office.
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17 Sep 2024 03:32 #3783 by Amethyst
As always, thanks for the amazing commentary, Dreamer. I see that this story has hit as intended so far :)

As Rose indicated, the Santa Fe MCO is bad.

You were trying to remember who Arthur Pond was. He's the CEO of Pond Industries and the father of Lily Pond, aka Tresse. Last we heard about him was at Christmas (later in the year that this story takes place) when he arranges through an intermediary to hire Vera Webster (Maiden Starlight's mother who is now a Project Damocles cyborg) to kill Lily.
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17 Sep 2024 05:09 #3784 by mhalpern

As always, thanks for the amazing commentary, Dreamer. I see that this story has hit as intended so far :)

As Rose indicated, the Santa Fe MCO is bad.

You were trying to remember who Arthur Pond was. He's the CEO of Pond Industries and the father of Lily Pond, aka Tresse. Last we heard about him was at Christmas (later in the year that this story takes place) when he arranges through an intermediary to hire Vera Webster (Maiden Starlight's mother who is now a Project Damocles cyborg) to kill Lily.

Ahh so a Karmic ending for the sad excuse for a mother soon after she tries making noise...

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17 Sep 2024 22:30 - 17 Sep 2024 23:04 #3785 by Amethyst
If Arthur doesn't get taken down by his daughter first... Lily not Carlos.
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18 Sep 2024 01:30 #3787 by mhalpern

If Arthur doesn't get taken down by his daughter first... Lily not Carlos.

Sure but Lily's in school iirc and Carlos seems like a likely severe case of Protagonist Syndrome

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