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New Year's Escapade (Part 1) by MaLAguA

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26 Nov 2024 01:00 #3869 by DanZilla
New Year's Escapade (Part 1) can be found in the Gen 2 section or by using the link below... please remember our authors are doing this for the response they get... leave comments where you can for appreciated stories.

New Year's Escapade (Part 1)
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26 Nov 2024 02:49 #3870 by Dreamer
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26 Nov 2024 03:21 #3871 by cprime
Might as well try to drop a few thoughts in (near) realtime as I read through the next installment in Vic's winter break.
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I realize I haven't chimed in much, but a belated thank you to MaLAguA for sharing Vic's winter break with us, both at Silent Mountain and now in Portland.
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27 Nov 2024 01:47 #3872 by MaLAguA
As always, thank you dreamer for the comments that keep me going ^_^.

Truth be told, I was a bit unsure about this piece, but I think it was needed to close the arc. I just hope I kept it interesting since I don't think non-action drama is my forte.

We'll see how Vic's time in Portland goes, while staying at the Kythe household. We shall see how things go and how many troubles
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27 Nov 2024 01:53 #3873 by MaLAguA
Thanks cprime for the comments ^_^.

Yeah. Vic's goal was something he had never really thought about, just focusing on what might end up not being on the table anymore.

As to Dereck's part, no doubt the two will end up butting heads on more than one subject.

I honestly wasn't sure about the Syndicate meeting... but it felt relevant to the situation. As stated by Laureate and the director of the division, the kids' evaluations was a matter that shouldn't have been elevated to that level, but peer pressure was need to bend their arms.

And yeah, Caroline and Vic's interactions are pretty much what's keeping him fine with how things are... Sophie's attitude probably not as much.

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29 Nov 2024 01:36 #3876 by ghoti
Maybe, maybe not. It's the author's call. Anna's not a male in the next generation, after all (at least, I assume she's not) despite hosting Ratatoskr.

Canon says if your hallow isn't big enough, your spirit has to change you to a form it feels comfortable with, but assuming a hallow is big enough, you may get changes or not, major or minor, etc. Also we don't know the mentality of whatever species the spirit is, etc, etc.

I personally wouldn't do that to a character like that, especially someone who's already trying to cope with changes not to his liking already along with a lot of the other upheavals of a life like that...but as I said it's up to the author.

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