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Born in Fire

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01 Dec 2021 08:38 #887 by Astrodragon
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Oh, quantum entanglement communication is indeed a real thing.
Doing it with a scrying bowl at room temperature might be a bit harder
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01 Dec 2021 16:19 #889 by cprime
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Minor typos -

Thulia smiled to herself as she watched Thulia

I think the first 'Thulia' should be 'Tanau'. Also

decided not o wake her

'o' should be 'to'.

Other thoughts - It's quite interesting to see where Thulia came from, and the experiences that made her the creature we know.
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01 Dec 2021 19:52 #893 by mhalpern
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Minor typos -

Thulia smiled to herself as she watched Thulia

I think the first 'Thulia' should be 'Tanau'. Also

decided not o wake her

'o' should be 'to'.

Other thoughts - It's quite interesting to see where Thulia came from, and the experiences that made her the creature we know.
Warning: Spoiler!

I was thinking it'd be by way of her mother,

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01 Dec 2021 19:59 #894 by Astrodragon
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Two points to clarify :

(1) No, I'm not screwing around with contiuity. As shown at the end, the parasite was introduced after Thulia had left the Cult's base.

(2) Thulia's heritage is not really defined in the story so far - it will be, but not quite yet.
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01 Dec 2021 20:00 #895 by Astrodragon
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Morgana as a regen clone? It's an interesting idea, but no, its rather more complicated than that
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01 Dec 2021 20:48 #896 by Cryptic
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(2) Thulia's heritage is not really defined in the story so far - it will be, but not quite yet.

My guessis her heritage is kind of like Sin's Fae, just derived from refugees that escaped to/native residents the PoF when put through the mystical blender.

Morgana as a regen clone? It's an interesting idea, but no, its rather more complicated than that

Oh, I remember the hint you dropped to answer a question on the last version of the boards, but I will keep it to myself.

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02 Dec 2021 01:37 #897 by mhalpern
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CTA would make them closer to genetic sisters I'd think

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02 Dec 2021 01:42 #898 by Astrodragon
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CTA would make them closer to genetic sisters I'd think

More like half-sisters

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07 Dec 2021 07:03 - 07 Dec 2021 07:04 #909 by Valentine
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I'm fairly certain that referring to Thulia as a "teenager" is more a reference to her racial maturity level than to her actual age (at least in earth years).

It is interesting to see the story from another side. I can't wait for more.

I wonder if the CTA will slow her maturation process or extend her life.
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07 Dec 2021 08:53 #911 by Astrodragon
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Calling Thulia a teenager is basically what she would be if she were human. It's a lot simpler than trying to work out conversions of different years and so on.

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14 Dec 2021 01:25 #967 by Astrodragon
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Part 2 of the story is now up to read and comment on
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14 Dec 2021 02:55 #969 by cprime
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Random observations, part 2
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Looking forward to part 3.
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14 Dec 2021 04:26 #970 by Dreamer
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SPOILER ALERT
Below is a stream of conscious commentary I type up as I read the story. There will be details from the story included in it. If you have not read the story yet and don't wish to have details of it spoiled, read no further.

Born in Fire Part 2 comments
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14 Dec 2021 09:34 #972 by Astrodragon
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To Dreamer :

<Bruce knows about the sexual services having a bunch of perverts doing the request, why do I get the feeling before he worked for Thulia he worked for Tanau?>

Bruce did indeed use to work for Tanau, she loaned him to Thulia when she saw she'd need a reliable and loyal imp.
He still calls occasionally at times to Tanau when he thinks Thulia is going to get into a serious mess

<A bow and a 'battle bikini' to go hunting, yikes, she needs better armor that covers more.>

But...but..it's a BIKINI! Of COURSE its armour! :D
Hunting rules are common wherever you dont want people to overhunt, and limiting the type of weapons is also common.

Look up Jednorog on google, no, they aren't Bison... :D

How the horns magic works when they are taken is different from the way the beast itself can use them.

<And the plan works, now just how did Manx's team figure out where she was to go rescue her and Rob?>

This was in the original story (Blood Sisters 2) - the first thing Manx did on escaping the cell was to radio for backup.

And as always thanks for the comments!
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14 Dec 2021 10:34 #973 by mhalpern
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i kinda wonder if the customer was the school, or a member of the staff, that would explain the required quantity, Caitlin alone could probably burn through them in a few projects

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