×
New? Arriving? (09 Aug 2021)

Required Reading:

If it is stickied, it is stickied for a reason. Please read it.

× This section is for Second Generation stories, predominantly from the student body from Fall of 2016 to Spring of 2020.

Making a Noise in the World Discussion

More
30 Mar 2022 19:42 #1544 by Mister D
It's turning into an excellent introduction to the Phoenix underworld, and what it's like to be a small fish in a larger pond. :D

Like the stories about Miami, no other author has started to flesh out the landscape in Phoenix, so you've got lots of space to play with. :D

Definitely looking forward to the next chapter. :D
The following user(s) said Thank You: Dan Formerly Domoviye

Please Log in or Create an account to join the conversation.

More
30 Mar 2022 20:02 #1545 by Dan Formerly Domoviye
Thank you!
I wanted to explore the world of Whateley a bit, setting it up in a city that has been briefly mentioned seemed like the best way to do it.
(Knockoff by Elrod, introduced Doc Morris and a few other characters who will appear later)

Not sure when Forte 4 will be done, got a few other Whateley projects going on right now, but I promise it will be a good one.
The following user(s) said Thank You: Dreamer

Please Log in or Create an account to join the conversation.

More
01 Apr 2022 13:06 #1551 by Rosalie Redd
The little Were is my fault, blame me.
The following user(s) said Thank You: Dan Formerly Domoviye

Please Log in or Create an account to join the conversation.

More
18 Apr 2023 00:00 #2768 by DanZilla
The following user(s) said Thank You: null0trooper, Dan Formerly Domoviye, Wavehead

Please Log in or Create an account to join the conversation.

More
18 Apr 2023 05:58 #2770 by Dreamer
Replied by Dreamer on topic Making A Noise In The World
SPOILER ALERT
Below is a stream of conscious commentary I type up as I read the story. There will be details from the story included in it. If you have not read the story yet and don't wish to have details of it spoiled, read no further.

Making a Noise in the World: Outro comments
Warning: Spoiler!

Thank You for the story comments appreciated and help me know they are being read and liked. :-) Note: My story comments can't nor are trying to replace reading the stories, simply my way of enjoying them and letting the authors know I enjoy them.
The following user(s) said Thank You: DanZilla, Rosalie Redd, null0trooper, Dan Formerly Domoviye

Please Log in or Create an account to join the conversation.

More
18 Apr 2023 20:22 - 20 Apr 2023 20:03 #2771 by Dan Formerly Domoviye
Hey, thanks for the long commentary. It was definitely worth the wait.
My responses to some of your comments are below.
Making a Noise in the World: Outro comments
Warning: Spoiler!


Thanks for the commentary!
Last edit: 20 Apr 2023 20:03 by Dan Formerly Domoviye.
The following user(s) said Thank You: DanZilla, Dreamer

Please Log in or Create an account to join the conversation.

Time to create page: 0.081 seconds
Powered by Kunena Forum