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Pop Goes the Weasel (Part 3) by Amethyst

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18 Mar 2025 00:00 #4156 by DanZilla
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18 Mar 2025 00:38 #4157 by mhalpern
She didn't get her application corrected. that's unfortunate.

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18 Mar 2025 00:42 #4158 by Amethyst
Nope, she didn't. But she does seem comfortable as a girl and a lot of the reason for placement in Poe is for peer support. While Carmen could probably use some, she can likely manage without it. We'll see how she gets along with her roommate, maybe they'll at least become friends.
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18 Mar 2025 01:40 #4159 by mhalpern

Nope, she didn't. But she does seem comfortable as a girl and a lot of the reason for placement in Poe is for peer support. While Carmen could probably use some, she can likely manage without it. We'll see how she gets along with her roommate, maybe they'll at least become friends.
yes but it would have made it easier to protect her from the Amazons, given her experiences she's particularly vulnerable to being taken in by such a group and ending up in a similar situation that she just got out of. it took external factors and the egg donor getting violent to get her out even when she intellectually knew she needed to do so.

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18 Mar 2025 01:46 #4160 by Amethyst
It's also possible that this will keep her from getting too much attention from the Amazons since she isn't in Poe. She did have a lot of outside forces helping her escape her situation, and her egg donor getting violent, but maybe Whateley is a good place for her to find her courage. For support, she will likely be seeing a therapist at the school after what she's been through as well, which may be good for her.
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18 Mar 2025 03:26 - 18 Mar 2025 03:26 #4164 by null0trooper

yes but it would have made it easier to protect her from the Amazons, given her experiences she's particularly vulnerable to being taken in by such a group

About a third of the Amazons are residing in Poe, no getting away from them there. There's one other thing about the Amazons: aside from Laura, they have shown no interest in girls with GSD. (Maybe Valentina is color-blind?)

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18 Mar 2025 03:28 #4165 by Amethyst
Yup, they most likely won't be interested in a four-foot seven shrimp of a girl with fairly major GSD,
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18 Mar 2025 03:30 #4166 by Rosalie Redd

Yup, they most likely won't be interested in a four-foot seven shrimp of a girl with fairly major GSD,

typical Amazon: "The ferret girl? Nah, she's flatter than a Kansas Highway."
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18 Mar 2025 03:31 #4167 by Amethyst

Yup, they most likely won't be interested in a four-foot seven shrimp of a girl with fairly major GSD,

typical Amazon: "The ferret girl? Nah, she's flatter than a Kansas Highway."

Rofl. Cruel but true.

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18 Mar 2025 03:32 #4168 by Dreamer
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18 Mar 2025 04:05 #4169 by mhalpern

Nope, she didn't. But she does seem comfortable as a girl and a lot of the reason for placement in Poe is for peer support. While Carmen could probably use some, she can likely manage without it. We'll see how she gets along hewith r roommate, maybe they'll at least become friends.

.... I've been diving through the wiki a bit, Tresse is also due to be a winter term arrival at Whateley for Whitman. What a coincidence....

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18 Mar 2025 04:12 - 18 Mar 2025 04:18 #4170 by Amethyst

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Thanks for your commentary, Dreamer. As always, it is a joy to read. You were wondering about Lily and Gwen becoming models, well, it's something that has been hinted at, and more should be revealed in the next Maiden Starlight story. Your reactions to Carmen's mom were much as I expected they would be and I kinda went all in on her because, as someone who has been in abusive relationships, I wanted Carmen's abuse to feel real to the readers. Her mother is an incredibly flawed and selfish woman and unfortunately, many abuse victims try to excuse and justify things, and to just not rock the boat, just as Carmen did. I think I did a good job at making her mother detestable, Domo told me he wanted to punch her so many times, and Dan thought she was one of the worst abusive mothers he's read about, so it's not just you.

This was supposed to be a hard journey with a bit of light at the end, but I tried to break it up between the abuse to not make it too much at once. Carmen has been through a lot, but she'll pull through eventually and maybe she'll find herself at Whateley. At the very least, she now has a supportive family and a couple of friends. As for Dr. Deville, she is one of my favorite non-MC characters and she will be back in other stories, if not Scamper's future adventures.
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18 Mar 2025 04:14 #4171 by Amethyst

Nope, she didn't. But she does seem comfortable as a girl and a lot of the reason for placement in Poe is for peer support. While Carmen could probably use some, she can likely manage without it. We'll see how she gets along hewith r roommate, maybe they'll at least become friends.

.... I've been diving through the wiki a bit, Tresse is also due to be a winter term arrival at Whateley for Whitman. What a coincidence....

Yes, Tresse will be heading to Whateley as well and might even be a Whitman girl as well.
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20 Mar 2025 21:11 #4176 by Naldru
Scamper mentioned that Lily Pond wouldn't know about being her half-sister. Given that Scamper's mother had hatred for both Lily Pond and Scamper, it would have seemed appropriate for Lily Pond to have been notified about the addition of another person who might wish harm to her.

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20 Mar 2025 21:52 #4177 by Amethyst
True, it would probably be good to warn her while the psycho is still in prison.

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