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Sunday, 25 June 2023 21:19

Heaven's Light 5: The Light Between (Part 8)

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The Light Between (Part 8)

Book Five of Heaven's Light

By Erisian

 

Earth. Deep blue skies filled with clouds and sun.

Returned from the desolation and horrors of Hell, Jordan finds herself again surrounded by friends, kitty, and a peaceful campus with idle moments seemingly to spare.

Yet relaxation and inner peace remain elusive, as unanswered questions flit across thought and dream. After all that she has endured a quiet life as a simple school student feels like a mighty jest - one with a waiting and deadly punchline.

For time, even for angels resurrected in the light, does not so easily stand still.

 

 

Note: It is highly recommended to have read the previous four books before reading this one! It all starts at the link below, thanks!

 

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Friday, 16 June 2023 23:07

Heaven's Light 5: The Light Between (Part 7)

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The Light Between (Part 7)

Book Five of Heaven's Light

By Erisian

 

Earth. Deep blue skies filled with clouds and sun.

Returned from the desolation and horrors of Hell, Jordan finds herself again surrounded by friends, kitty, and a peaceful campus with idle moments seemingly to spare.

Yet relaxation and inner peace remain elusive, as unanswered questions flit across thought and dream. After all that she has endured a quiet life as a simple school student feels like a mighty jest - one with a waiting and deadly punchline.

For time, even for angels resurrected in the light, does not so easily stand still.

 

 

Note: It is highly recommended to have read the previous four books before reading this one! Thanks!

 

 

Wednesday, 07 June 2023 01:44

Heaven's Light 5: The Light Between (Part 6)

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The Light Between (Part 6)

Book Five of Heaven's Light

By Erisian

 

Earth. Deep blue skies filled with clouds and sun.

Returned from the desolation and horrors of Hell, Jordan finds herself again surrounded by friends, kitty, and a peaceful campus with idle moments seemingly to spare.

Yet relaxation and inner peace remain elusive, as unanswered questions flit across thought and dream. After all that she has endured a quiet life as a simple school student feels like a mighty jest - one with a waiting and deadly punchline.

For time, even for angels resurrected in the light, does not so easily stand still.

 

 

Note: It is highly recommended to have read the previous four books before reading this one! Thanks!

 

 

I was nervous. I'll admit that. Maybe even a little bit frightened. This was my first time breaking the law, well breaking the law with intent. If everything went right and according to plan I'd be a criminal, of the international variety. It sounds impressive doesn’t it?

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“... and that's the story.” I babbled looking at three women in front of me, the fourth person was still behind me holding a knife to my throat. However I was now inside the villa and not much had changed in the main room since I was last here, the entertainment centre was newer and larger, oh and someone had put down some canvas that I was standing on. Which explained why I had told my story so fast and in such a high pitched voice that likely all the dogs nearby had run for the hills.

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When people talk about Karedonia depending on who they are various images pop up in your head. Massive engineering project and Wonder of the Modern Age, shining example of how a supervillain can turn over a new leaf, hellhole of human rights abuses, the place to do cutting edge research, newest resort hot spot in the world, wretched hive of scum and villainy, the money laundering capital of the world (a fact much in dispute among other tax havens), pioneer in deep earth mining, a brave social experiment...etc etc. Basically Karedonia is a bit of everything to everyone. What they don't talk about is how to find it. Most people don't need to worry about that bit, they just board a plane and it's the pilot's problem, or a boat and it's the captain's problem, or have their minions take care of it. You get the idea. 

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I had alot to think about, in a short time I had been kidnapped, become a mutant, died at least three times, changed sex, my mother had been killed and I relived it in her head or my head, been told I was a prisoner on a submarine, the only person who seems to have any redeeming qualities is one of my kidnappers, oh and apparently I smell.

 

 

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Wednesday, 31 May 2023 22:09

Heaven's Light 5: The Light Between (Part 5)

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The Light Between (Part 5)

Book Five of Heaven's Light

By Erisian

 

Earth. Deep blue skies filled with clouds and sun.

Returned from the desolation and horrors of Hell, Jordan finds herself again surrounded by friends, kitty, and a peaceful campus with idle moments seemingly to spare.

Yet relaxation and inner peace remain elusive, as unanswered questions flit across thought and dream. After all that she has endured a quiet life as a simple school student feels like a mighty jest - one with a waiting and deadly punchline.

For time, even for angels resurrected in the light, does not so easily stand still.

 

 

Note: It is highly recommended to have read the previous four books before reading this one! Thanks!

 

 

 

 

Thinking about things from the benefit of hindsight I'm realizing the thing is I don't know how my story begins, with Mom's long career in supervillainy, or with me and my sister, or when I was attacked?

 

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  • Best of Show (Part 3)

    • Dan Formerly Domoviye Dan Formerly Domoviye 1 month ago
      Oh god! I hadn't thought of that. OH GOD!!!
       
    • Oz1eye Oz1eye 1 month ago
      It's tomorrow when he needs the bathroom that I feel most sorry for him; chilled loo roll anyone?
  • How I Spent My Space Abduction

    • null0trooper null0trooper Yesterday
      I'm glad you enjoyed it!
       
    • Teri Ann 2 days ago
      This was so entertaining, thanks Null0trooper. Such wonderful youth ambassadors, Belfry and Icejack.
       
    • null0trooper null0trooper 2 weeks ago
      I'm glad you enjoyed the story! You hit the nail on the head with the question of how the galaxy might ...
       
    • null0trooper null0trooper 2 weeks ago
      Thank you! I left the actual abduction off-camera so I could let Whateley's space lore be. Okay, I ...
       
    • Monica Rose 3 weeks ago
      Really enjoyed this story. I was a bit confused about how the guys ended up where they were, but I ...
       
    • Tim Harris 3 weeks ago
      As I read this, it reminded me of some other stories I have read that deal with the Galactic Academy.
  • Sprite 2: I Think I'm A Clone Now (Part 3)

    • Dan Formerly Domoviye Dan Formerly Domoviye 1 month ago
      THere are no stories involving Tink beyond graduation. I am keeping most of my G1 characters out ...
       
    • Wendy K 1 month ago
      Yay. Rose Blossom has been found. I wonder if she was there when Tink was at Whateley. I'd like to ...
       
    • Wendy K 1 month ago
      Yey. Rose Blossom has been found. I wonder if she was there when Tink was at Whateley. I'd love to ...
  • Sprite 2: I Think I'm A Clone Now (Part 4)

    • Amethyst Amethyst 1 week ago
      Thanks Yeah, with Blythe, it could go one of two ways: really well planned, or batshit crazy. If she ...
       
    • Amethyst Amethyst 1 week ago
      Thanks dragonfish
       
    • Cybergirl007 1 week ago
      Great chapter Can't wait to see the trap Blythe has in mind Peter being a Devisor and Gadgeteer might ...
       
    • dragonfish 1 week ago
      love it