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The Mark of Miss Scarlet! by Bek D Corbin

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13 Jun 2023 00:00 #2872 by DanZilla
The Mark of Miss Scarlet! (Part 1) can be found in the Gen 1 section or by using the link below... and please remember our authors are doing this for the response they get... please leave comments where you can for appreciated stories or if you have anything to bring to the conversation of written word and readers.

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13 Jun 2023 06:11 #2877 by Dreamer
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13 Jun 2023 10:30 #2878 by mhalpern
Interesting start...

Micro scenes and bad ideas are freely adoptable
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13 Jun 2023 17:07 #2879 by Bek D Corbin
For the record, this segment of this story was posted, bit by bit, in the Microscenes column back in the old Crystal Hall site, now sadly lost to the deep dark recesses of the Internet. But the next two segments are original.
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13 Jun 2023 19:30 #2880 by Dreamer
I knew I remembered reading most of this before, still fun reading it all again. Can't wait for the next parts.

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14 Jun 2023 06:49 #2883 by Hardric62
Oooooh, more Bek, more Scapegrace. Let's see this all.

Micro-scenes from the past mainly? Eh, just means we got to see how long it percolated to become a new one.

Guess JD nailed Volsung's Ex-Proto-spirit. Good for him.

Ah, Ulrike's origin story from before Nefarious Three too. Noice.

And I think the spike price for the AI cores is actually not pure woof, and it all Bek's fault actually. I mean, we are in Late Year 1,

Silicon Valley: I don't remember Snowfish being there, but Nacht jad a Spring Break including Sunny, Misty and Gloriana. And something that made Glorie want to rush her for the Capes. Mayhem is just what was needed to cheer up her situation.

Cincinnati: Been a while since Diabolik's attack, but I don't doubt new stuff has been dumped on poor Stacey's lap again. Hope her MtF change is fully done by the end of this year.

Denver: Loose Cannons? Loose Cannons. I never tire of their Ohmigod-this-would-make-a-killer-RPG-campaign story.

Durnham: Alright, I got nothing for this one. Foreshadowing another story brewing somewhere in North Carolina maybe?


And thus Vivian's quest to one-up her millionaire sister continues. Stay tuned for the next parts I'd say.

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14 Jun 2023 18:40 #2884 by Apple3141
Isn't Durham Silver Ghost's hometown?

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14 Jun 2023 19:16 #2885 by Bek D Corbin
No, Durham is in North Carolina, and Stacy is an Ohio girl

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16 Jun 2023 22:37 #2889 by Schol-R-LEA
Here's an unrelated question: Would Asha be at Whateley in the Gen 2 stories?
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16 Jun 2023 22:42 #2890 by null0trooper

Here's an unrelated question: Would Asha be at Whateley in the Gen 2 stories?

That question has come up. Imagine Twitch, Karma, and Asha... Why is Bek twitching like that?

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19 Jun 2023 17:30 #2901 by Bek D Corbin
Actually, Null, Asha is 6 in Gen1, so in Gen2, she's be 15 or 16 depending on her exact birthdate. Her reaction to Twitch and/or Karma would be <roll eyes> 'KIDS' <sigh>
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26 Jun 2023 00:03 #2931 by DPRagan
Nice to see more Gen 1 stuff, For "Scarlet" and Jessie the hard part is to remember that they are middle school aged and sized.

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04 Jul 2023 00:00 #2941 by DanZilla
The Mark of Miss Scarlet! (Part 2) can be found in the Gen 1 section or by using the link below... and please remember our authors are doing this for the response they get... please leave comments where you can for appreciated stories or if you have anything to bring to the conversation of written word and readers.


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04 Jul 2023 03:38 #2942 by Dreamer
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04 Jul 2023 04:00 - 04 Jul 2023 04:06 #2943 by Schol-R-LEA
Bek once again has shown us what a real Gambit Pileup looks like. What a mess!

Viv's plan struck me as having far too many moving parts, even if the core idea was relatively simple - which despite her claims to the contrary, it really wasn't. While she's seeing the importance of setting aside her sibling rivalry, she's still largely motivated out of envy, and that's not a good starting point for success.

Plenty of tidbits of lore to chew on. Nice!

I also liked Jessie's ad-libbing of a 'contract dispute' between Miss Scarlet and Tek Raider. It actually would make sense as a bit of misdirection, and did get the Stupid Seven to dogpile Viv - which was part of Viv's plan, after all, even if 'Miss Scarlet' decided to take a few digs at 'Tek Raider' in the process.

Ye gods and little fishes, though, there are genuinely a lot more Science Heroes (and wannabees) running around than I'd ever have guessed. I know Bek loves Weird Science stuff, though, so it's all good. One does wonder if any there are any as-yet unrecognized Devisors or Gadgeteers in their midst.

I suspect that we'll be seeing more of Jeannie Yes in the future. Cleopatra Fox? Not so much.

I am curious about how Dr Macabre got back on his feet so quickly, though clearly he's somewhat worse for wear after his time in the Monster Maker. Or is this someone just pretending to be Cobb for some reason? Also, what is he doing there in the first place? Did he (like Doc Atlas, Magnum, and Kid Galahad) simply figure that the riddle meant something there was important enough to either go after or (in the case of the latter two) protect? Or did he decide to hit the exhibition for reasons of his own, possibly in regards to the Atlantean relics? I'm not sure if we'll find out or not.

This all seems a bit contrived, which makes me think Bek has something up their sleeve still. I mean, I could see why all of these types came out of the woodwork in the Silver Ghost stories, what with Madcap's singular power drawing them in like flies. Similarly, the Gorias Stone is the sort of maguffin that would get every two-bit mystic rushing into the melee for a chance to grab it. But this? This almost feels as if something bigger is afoot, like they've all been brought there for some reason - sort of like in "The Road to Whateley", but unlike there (where a ladder-climbing MCO agent sets things in motion), we've yet to see the one calling the shots. I wonder if those AG cores are even really there in the first place, or if Viv is herself being manipulated.
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