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Sweet Smell of Summer by Domoviye

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09 Sep 2023 00:01 #3035 by DanZilla
Sweet Smell of Summer can be found in the Gen 1 section or by using the link below... and please remember our authors are doing this for the response they get... please leave comments where you can for appreciated stories or if you have anything to bring to the conversation of written word and readers.

Sweet Smell of Summer
 
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09 Sep 2023 05:07 #3043 by Dreamer
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Below is a stream of conscious commentary I type up as I read the story. There will be details from the story included in it. If you have not read the story yet and don't wish to have details of it spoiled, read no further.

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09 Sep 2023 05:52 - 09 Sep 2023 05:57 #3044 by Dan Formerly Domoviye
Thank you very much Dreamer.
I won't go over things line by line tonight. But here are some of the highlights.
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Thanks again. Your commentary is the highlight of my night when I post a story here.
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09 Sep 2023 11:00 #3045 by mhalpern
well I mean if an underdog gets taken by triangle, that card might be useful to get the two factions fighting each other as a distraction,

Micro scenes and bad ideas are freely adoptable
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09 Sep 2023 21:38 #3046 by Dan Formerly Domoviye

well I mean if an underdog gets taken by triangle, that card might be useful to get the two factions fighting each other as a distraction,

Hadn't thought of that.
My muse is now working on this problem.
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15 Sep 2023 16:52 #3053 by Mister D
Excellent story. :D

Lots of ways the seeds could grow. :D
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15 Sep 2023 19:16 #3055 by Dan Formerly Domoviye
Thank you very much.
This was a fun little story to write.

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