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She was kind of created when someone made a joke about a student who everyone tries to keep away from Imp.Imp is gonna have FUN with this one, she's already adopted her old first line of defense, make it very easy for others to underestimate you, granted she wont full her for a second.
"Sorry but art class is full, you can't take it this term. Maybe you can try to get in next term, buuut it has a waiting list."
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I'll think about it now that I'm back to writing full time.
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I've seen a few references to the telephone number 999 in stories ("Stomping Grounds" segment of "Stepping Out" and the "Dastardly Daughter"). I was just wondering what percentage of the readers know that 999 serves the same function as police/fire/medical emergency as 911 in Canada and the United States. Would there be any point to having some links to Commonwealth usage that would confuse Americans? (boot/trunk, lorry/truck, bonnet/hood, etc.)
Personally, I was fond of the 0118 999 881 999 119 725 3 emergency number.
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Below is a stream of conscious commentary I type up as I read the story. There will be details from the story included in it. If you have not read the story yet and don't wish to have details of it spoiled, read no further.
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Ten-year-old Pippa removed the back page of her math textbook, applying clear glue to the specially prepared page from her math book, and attached the new page in place of the old one. So, all this to get back at Christopher for pushing her down and taking her pocket money, I wonder what the specially prepared page is? Oh, all this to frame him for cheating to have her revenge.Liverpool, England
December, 2004,
Wednesday
But Christopher shows up with 3 friends and corners her, finds out about her revenge scheme and she insults him for needing four to beat up a girl. Has to have his friends hold her in place so he can punch her, a bunch of cowards.
Pippa has to breathe through her mouth due to her nose being badly plugged and swollen, the creep broke her nose! She didn't tell on him and his friends, yet Christopher is bragging about it, and no punishment from the staff so far. Breaking into the council flat and Christopher's flat, she gets her revenge alright. The entire building is up in flames and it will show the fire started in Christopher's flat.December, 2004
Friday
Pippa uses a picture of her dad to practice darts, oh boy, I'm going to want to give her father a fate worse than death once I learn why she hates him, aren't I. Ditched her and her mother when she was six, now that is a good reason to hate him. Crooked nose, so couldn't afford to see a doctor, and her broken nose healed wrong, ouch. Hey! Redheads are not soulless!Liverpool, England
Friday, November 9th, 2007
After School
Going to Liverpool, has a knife, and steals to help her survive, poor kid never had a chance to be better. Wacky Races and she roots for Dick Dastardly, it figures. Whoa, analyzing his car's design like that, has she started to manifest as a mutant and a Gadgeteer for a power? More and more thoughts like that over the last month, yup, she has manifested as a mutant.
A cute guy, 16, in nice clothes, comes right towards Pippa and knows her name, I would be wary too. Richard, says he thinks she is cute, not sure if he is lying yet. A party and tempts her with marijuana, all this British slang for things is interesting. Pippa takes him back to her place, a chatty fellow. Pippa plays pranks on kids that pissed her off, yikes.
Richard says she needs nice clothes for the party, and he will buy them for her, calling her stuff little kid's clothes, she is 12. He sells weed at school and talks of sharing it if Pippa is his queen, ugh.
Why do I feel very scared for Pippa right as he says that? Bring her friend, oh no, not two girls in over their heads.Laughing, he shook his head. “You're safe with me. I won't do nothing you don't want.”
Pippa tries to convince Lilly to go to the party, but Lily is right, it is sketchy and they don't know these guys. Great, sharing his weed and promise to buy them clothes along with alcohol at the party is too much plus peer pressure so Lily is in.Saturday, November 10th, 2007
Church St. and Richard waits at a clothing store for them. He lit up when he saw them, I really don't like this situation. Oh boy, in those outfits, Pippa and Lily are going to look older than their real ages and guys will think girls dressed like that are asking for it, stupid, but unfortunately true. Pippa is trying to act cool for Christopher, but she is a little girl, only 12, not even a teen yet.
Great, he is getting the black dress for Pippa and the tight white dress for Lily, alarm bells are going off in my head about this whole situation. He kissed her on the cheek to make her forget to try on the other clothing, arrgh. Pippa, this guy is attractive, makes his money selling illegal drugs, and is going after a girl for her looks as she might already be developing an Exemplar figure without noticing yet.
In love, Pippa, this is a crush. Sat on his lap, kisses on the cheek, and squeezes her tight, that promise earlier is looking more flimsy by the second to me. Her crooked nose grew straight, that isn't possible without medical intervention I thought, further proof of the Exemplar trait manifesting in her.
Order anything they want, more buttering them up for what I fear is to come. Brag about avoiding the authorities, good grief. Lily the good girl who lies to cover for Pippa, this will catch up to her if it doesn't stop soon. Now Pippa is letting Richard kiss her on the lips! Crap, it is that kind of party. Pippa is nervous as is Lily after seeing what the party is like, get out now!
Great, Richard urges them inside, introductions to everyone. No chance to relax or say much, just drugs and drink foisted upon them, I knew this was bad. Crap, things get heated fast and very uncomfortable for Pippa and Lily. Pippa has the sudden urge to leave, but Richard starts kissing her and feeling her up, I want to kill him now.
*eyes go red with rage* She is saying no! I knew he lied earlier, he is forcing himself upon her! This is rape, he is going to rape her! Her anger surges up, pulls herself forward by Richard's shirt, and bites his cheek hard enough that he is spurting blood. And she is still biting and clawing at him as he falls back onto the floor. Someone pulls them apart, but she is attacking anyone in range, crap! Don't tell me she is a rager.
She tries to go for Lily, running on pure instinct it seems, but is attacked by a large man and bites him on the wrist to force him to let her go. More of the guys are coming for her and she flees for her life from the flat. Please let Lily be okay.
Pippa wakes up in bad shape, arms covered in bruises and puke, dress ruined. Memories of the night come back to her, the horrors Richard and his friends inflicted on two underage girls. She starts crying, wondering how she could walk into such an obvious trap, and only stops as she wonders what happened to Lily. Oh crap, the revenge she has planned for if they hurt Lily, dead men walking.Sunday, November 11th, 2007
Early morning
She's in the storeroom of an apartment and took apart the lock even while in a rage, dang. Great, lost all those things at the party. And her Gadgeteer or maybe Devisor, not sure yet, trait kicks in she uses the tools and spare parts to gear up.
Dang, she hemmed and fitted coveralls and made thick-soled slippers for herself. A weapon hidden in the pocket on her sleeve, smart design. A few blocks from her government flat, and a walk home in her condition, the look on her face makes people stay silent and give her space. The fire in her eyes, yikes.
Her mom was worried and called the police. Pippa, you are going to have to tell your mom what happened sometime. *eyes bug out* That is a nasty little weapon Pippa made. Those guys brutally attacked a girl who one of theirs tried to rape, I hope she ends them all. More pictures and ideas, oh boy, she is going to need Whateley to help her with that.
Crap! Richard played it too close, never saying his last name, making sure Pippa and Lily never saw the address of the party before going inside. Uh oh, it sounds like Pippa is designing a railgun or something similar. Oh, spring loader, not a railgun then. Still a brutal weapon she has come up with.
*sigh* Her mom is trying to be a good mother and talk with Pippa, but Pippa says there is nothing to talk about. Please, open up to your mother before it is too late. I'm glad she was able to buy everything she needs, I just hope she and Lily get out of this alive and intact. Yup, Exemplar strength and doesn't even know it yet. Works on a project, yet lies to her mother, but mom isn't fooled.
Lily is home, sick, and went straight to bed, what happened to that poor girl? Uh oh, does she have Diedrick's as well because of the way she is thinking and driven by revenge, yikes. Crap, she scared her mother by impaling the screwdriver into the arm of her chair. Finally, her mom gets Pippa to see reason, she has to go about this smart and clever or she could end up in jail, especially if they figure out she is an unregistered mutant even if she doesn't know it herself yet.
Ouch, what her mom said to her, you would have to have a heart of stone for that not to get to you. Take some time and think, they need to pay, but make sure it is in a way that can't be pinned to you. Pippa finally thinks about all that has happened in the past few weeks, her strength, the images in her head, she knows she is a mutant now.
Pretty mutant and mad scientist, that is an interesting way of describing Exemplar and Gadgeteer. She knows about the MCO and what will happen if she doesn't report she is a mutant, good. Thinking on it, a bad buy, but so bad at it, no one cared, this is how she figured out her codename of the Dastardly Daughter. Oh god, she even has a goofy laugh. And goes to tell her mom, that was fast.
Pippa heads to buy some more clothes but is ambushed by Richard and a friend, at least Richard looks properly messed up after her attacks. Omar, the guy she bit the wrist of, almost died, serves him right. *Restrains self from punching monitor to get at Richard* He threatened to do that to her mother and Lily, they need to die.
A party, they plan to gang rape her, these sickos need to be stopped for good. Electro weapon is more brutal than a thought, yikes. Richard is smoking, and the driver is dead and smoking as well, good. Onlookers come out of a house to check on them, Pippa pretends concern for Richards as her 'brother' to distract them and escapes. 100 pounds from Richard's wallet and his phone to sell, he shouldn't have come after Pippa.
A purple trench coat, she is hamming up the Dastardly Daughter theme. Purple bucket hat, rats, couldn't find a helmet. Ski goggles in place of driving goggles, boy, her costume stands out.MCO Liverpool Office,
Monday, November 12th, 2007
Morning
Anyone who isn't a fan of Wacky Races is going to be confused by her costume. Mom asking her to behave, hey, it is the MCO, a lot of those agents deserve whatever headaches come their way.She was wearing a red turtleneck sweater dress under the coat, and it looked really good with the black tights and ankle boots. Her red gloves were a real find and matched the image she wanted perfectly.
Exemplar 1, may become a 2 once a bit older, but not certain. Mut-L-E robot dog, oh god, my sides hurt.
She even has temper tantrums and blames Mutlee for everything down. Devisor 3 and suggestion to get her checked for Diedrick's due to the tantrum.“NO! You stupid thing! How dare you break and humiliate me!” Her foot came down on the controller smashing it to pieces. “THIS ISN'T FAIR!”
Her mom knows all this is part of a plan, even the tantrum. Crap, she runs towards Lily hoping to hug and Lily thinks Pippa was paid by the creeps to bring her to the party, saying she ruined her life. Lily kicks her, knocking Pippa down, and says to leave her alone, but Pippa doesn't blame her for any of it. The men at the party and Richard's friends are all going to die for this. And I agree with Pippa, monsters like that need to be stopped or they will keep doing this shit to other girls, other innocents, without care.
Siphoning gas from a car into a cheap Jerry can, she needs it for the weapon. Boy, that maintenance room might as well be her secret storage room now.That Night
Agent Waters greets Detective Harris, here about the double murder of Richard and his buddy, it was self-defense! Mentioning a small girl who fled the scene, Agent Waters brings up Dastardly Daughter and shows a video from her testing, but doesn't think it could be her if Mut-L-E is the best devise she could make. Rats, they figured out she might have downplayed her abilities and she has genius-level intellect. They are onto her, but don't know the circumstances of those 'murders'.Liverpool, MCO
Tuesday, November 13th, 2007
Noon
Oh boy, she has the phone back, opened, and with a new password she made up. Agent Waters and Detective Harris show up right outside her flat's main door. Pippa Minx Mischke, a unique last name and that is the only time I will type it out, too hard to remember for me. Want to know why two men attacked her on Sunday, now how did they find out that detail?After School
See her bag, do the authorities not require a search warrant in the UK to search private property? No devises on her even in her coat, and didn't take any to school.
If they are anything like U.S. MCO and U.S. police, no it isn't.“Go home, Pippa. But remember, if people are after you, telling us is your best chance at staying alive.”
Electro-weapon hidden in her gloves now, smart. Boy, she has a lot of places to hide things on her they didn't even think to check. Going through Richard's phone, she should have suffered longer. But now she has a list of names and locations, time to end these scum who probably pull this shit all the time.
Omar at home wondering what went wrong.Before Midnight
I knew it! The whole group behind this needs to be destroyed. Opens his door late at night, overconfidence will get you. Electro-weapon punch to the stomach and down he goes. She wraps wire loosely around his neck, then goes to trask the place looking for something.The slags all learned their place the first time and were easy to control afterwards.
Wire tightening around his neck, okay, that is a nasty weapon. She tricks him into unlocking his phone but lets the wire crush his throat anyway. Brutal way to die.
Crap, the Dastardly Daughter only feels cold about killing Omar, she needs help and fast. Sends out a message to set up a trap for the rest of Richard's group of friends. And now we know what the Jerry Can and gas was for, a devise set up to torch the place and kill them all at once in a fire.
Peter knocks and enters Omar's flat only to find Omar dead, everyone wondering what happened. Only to get hit by devised napalm! Okay, she is terrifying when seeking revenge and shows how deadly a devisor can be when seeking revenge.
Oh boy, is she drunk? The way she is acting makes me think she is drunk. But the driver doesn't take her to the club, ends up in a dark alley, and says it isn't a taxi only to get a crossbow bolt through the stomach.Friday, November 16th, 2007
Late evening
Another offer to let him go if he gives her his phone password and she shoots him through the chest. More people from Omar and Richard's phones, she is taking out the scum who prey on underage girls.“You wouldn't believe how hard it was finding your jarg taxi, Camara. I know all about you, get girls who are bladdered, then if they're young maybe share them with your friends.”
Great, woken up by the police pounding on the door with a warrant to search the place. The warrant is even in order. Detective Harris and Agent Waters once again. A search of her room is useless, working on Mut-L-E Dash 3, oh boy. Mom is home and annoyed they think Pippa could be responsible for the murders. I'm sorry, but I'm with Pippa on this, rapists are monsters imo.Saturday, November 17th, 2007
Early Morning
Detective Harris doesn't believe her, great, they are going to keep an eye on her now. Southern Asians make up the majority of her victims, hhm. People are never happy about how long an investigation takes, they expect it to be fast like in TV shows and movies. Good, the MCO should have to deal with idiots calling them as well. Wait for a slip-up, I doubt that will happen if Pippa keeps being careful.
Pippa has to get clever now to deal with the rest of her targets, or risk the police and MCO catching her.Saturday, November 17th, 2007
Maintenance Room
Late Evening
*has a mental image of what she can do with that to kill someone* Gah! It is like Drillhead from the Puppetmaster movies all over again.Grinning, she worked out the basic design of a flat devise with several small legs and a simple drill in front of it. One of the cameras from the phones she had stolen would work well enough to let her guide it.
Hhm, I still wonder why only her bangs turned ginger and not all of her hair. *eyes bug out* That is how the devise is going to target her intended victim in the laundromat, I hope it doesn't go after someone with a similar voice. 5 more stores and restaurants, please let them target the intended victims.Monday, December 3rd, 2007
After School
Tuesday, December 4th, 2007
Mid-Morning
Those were your friends and business associates, I wonder if these creeps do stuff beyond getting girls hooked on drugs, like the slave trade. His voice triggers the device and he has to hang up on the call as the clicking sound bugs him. Okay, that devise was even more brutal than I originally thought it was going to be.Mr. Kamran, owner of Perfect Fit Tailors, was a nervous man.
Please let none of those deaths be innocent bystanders who were around when the devise went off. They knew Dastardly Daughter was behind the attacks, but no proof. They have the phones from the latest victims, I hope they can prove what scum they were with them.Late Afternoon
Pippa was in school when the attacks happened, no one can identify Pippa as being at any of those places with enough certainty to get a warrant for her arrest. Brought in for questioning, Detective Harris and Agent Waters once again. Ah, Pippa has turned 13 since the story started. Detective Harris, you can only prove that is a coincidence without evidence otherwise. And Mom now wants a lawyer for Pippa, questioning someone without a lawyer and hoping to get further before a lawyer is brought in, is it any wonder most people don't trust the police.
Hours-long interrogation, good grief. Her mom asks her outright if she murdered 17 people, Pippa says she didn't, she considers it self-defense when they keep coming after her, oh boy. Her mom is begging Pippa to let someone help her for once in her life. Crap, she just puts on her costume and leaves, worried about her mom getting hurt.Pippa's Flat
Late Evening
Agent Waters gets a call from Detective Harris. Every one of the victims is part of a grooming gang, they are worse than I thought. Richard, Omar, Peter, and the other teens bring the girls in, this is beyond sickening.
So they came to Britain to prey on local girls and flee when they were targeted by someone with righteous fury. Waters needs to see the texts to know if they can go after Pippa, I say leave her alone, she brought down true monsters.Some of the wealthier men left the country to return home
They know about Lily and think they can get her to talk if they tell her what they know. So now it is up to Lily to tell the truth about the incident and realize she and Pippa were set up.
Pippa walks along, her mind in a very dark place, someone help her! Her anger is so hard to control now, she likes the power she has now after being small and weak for so long. Power armor, oh crud, no, don't make that for that reason, Pippa. An ambush with a cricket bat by someone in a van and Pippa is down. Stripped and bound, it is part of the same grooming group, these scum need to be put down.
Great, Lily's mother is drunk and Lily went out with friends who 'need' her. Oh crap, please don't tell me she went willingly back to those creeps because she is hooked on the drugs already. A call to Pippa's mom and Pippa is gone, Lily is in danger, and this is all kinds of messed up. A package to the warehouse tonight and they need the blonde, crap. Okay, Agent Waters is one of the good MCO agents it seems.
Thrown onto a hard concrete floor, Pippa needs a hero and fast. A whole can of petrol and threaten to light her on fire if she tries any mutant tricks, psychopaths. 6 in total, teens and adult men. Pippa has some insults in her. Crap, they have Lily and broke her. Brought her to I.D. Pippa.
A knife to Lily's throat to get Pippa to behave, they have people who want Pippa because she is a devisor, and threats to mutilate Lily for every outburst or person she kills. Yeah, they all need to die. A few hours to reach their location, surround her in petrol, and threaten harm to Lily if Pippa doesn't behave. Ouch! Effective, but very painful way to break zip ties. Time to make something to get her and Lily out of this alive and intact.
Agents Waters and Detective Harris watch the warehouse, but they are waiting on warrants and backup which will take an hour at the earliest if they get a miracle. They wait and then people run out of the warehouse followed by thick black smoke, what did Pippa do?
Dastardly Daughter has a small utility blade and a cigarette lighter, a seat belt and buckle for a weapon, and the fabric of the seats as a blanket to protect from any immediate flames. The ones guarding the van stand well away from it, the fumes would get to you after a while. Uses the cigarette lighter to set the petrol off, uses the seat cover blanket as a shield, and jumps out over the flames.
Everyone panics, some say they need to get Pippa out of the van, and someone shouts to call 999. Pippa is a brutal fighter, seat belt to the head until the teen drops his cricket bat, then she takes the bat and hits him in the head. Crap, she gets to the hallway with a row of offices where Lily is being held, but Pippa is spotted. Reckless charge and she gets stabbed in the stomach, keeping the knife in to prevent herself from bleeding out.
Agent Waters to the rescue as he shoots the man who stabbed Pippa and picks her up, Detective Harris has Lily and is leading them out of the hallway. Agent Waters has first aid training to do that so quickly. Lily cries into Detective Harris' chest while Pippa goes unconscious.
Dastardly Daughter is a little worried, oh boy. Agent Waters knows she isn't cartoonish and incompetent now. Oh, good, not charged with murder due to circumstantial evidence and no good witnesses to the attacks. Needs to keep her nose clean for the next several years, aww.MCO Liverpool Office,
December 28th, 2007
I hope those who fled back to their home countries that the countries have extradition treaties with Britain.And since the police have arrested everyone involved in your kidnapping, and are digging deep to find everyone involved in part thanks to the media uproar, you can rest assured that justice is being done.
A week in critical care, yikes, she came close to dying. Accepted to Whateley Academy, arriving on January 7th for the start of the Winter term, yay! Everything including tickets, well, it seems this branch of the MCO has the good ones in it. Please don't make a show at Whateley, you will attract the wrong kind of attention.
Gloves that are a weapon with inbuilt heaters as well, perfect for winter. I was wondering who the elf was that Pippa was chatting with. Miss Abyss from Detroit, I hope they become friends. Junior High in Whitman and Miss Abyss is Freshman in Poe.Whateley Academy
Shortly before lunch
January 7th, 2008
Oh boy, things are going to be interesting with those two as friends.“I think I understood that. It's sound. Maybe I can teach you proper English,” she said and snickered.
“Them's fighting words. Don't you get up in my case about how I speak when you sound like a drunk who can't open her mouth,” Miss Abyss said.
Dastardly smiled, she was going to have fun with this girl.
A good story, though once she met Christopher/Richard I knew he was lying through his teeth. Growing up without her father from an early age, angry, bullied, and vengeful, Pippa needs to see a counselor at Whateley for help dealing with her temper. Poor and stealing to get by, not be a burden to her mother, she has a lot to be angry about. I just she can grow past it and learn to make some friends at Whateley.
As for Richard, he knew what he was doing with every word and action involving Pippa. I wonder how many other girls he has lured in for the grooming group. What he tried to do to Pippa, what he already did when she broke free and attacked, I'm glad she killed him as he would have kept doing this kind of thing to more girls in the future.
I hate that Pippa was driven to kill for revenge, that she felt it was the only way to gain justice for herself and Lily. But I can understand it all too well; the feeling of the authorities either being incompetent or corrupt, thus the only way you will see justice is at your own hands. It is a temptation I'm sure more than a few people have felt, especially in the past 7 plus change years.
I'm just glad that Pippa got out of this alive, that Lily is alive and can get help to recover from what these monsters did to her, and that those involved will be brought to justice.
I can't wait to see more of Pippa and how others will react to her Dastardly Daughter persona at Whateley in the future.
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She was kind of created when someone made a joke about a student who everyone tries to keep away from Imp.Imp is gonna have FUN with this one, she's already adopted her old first line of defense, make it very easy for others to underestimate you, granted she wont full her for a second.
"Sorry but art class is full, you can't take it this term. Maybe you can try to get in next term, buuut it has a waiting list."
I only see that working while she's still in Junior high, at longest, once she's a frosh there's no chance, after all, they may be able to keep her from Imp, but few have ever been able to keep Imp away from anything, her first combat final at the latest would be the end of such a game.
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I've seen a few references to the telephone number 999 in stories ("Stomping Grounds" segment of "Stepping Out" and the "Dastardly Daughter"). I was just wondering what percentage of the readers know that 999 serves the same function as police/fire/medical emergency as 911 in Canada and the United States. Would there be any point to having some links to Commonwealth usage that would confuse Americans? (boot/trunk, lorry/truck, bonnet/hood, etc.)
Would I do something like that??
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Thanks for the commentary Dreamer, I've read and reread it several times this week. These are always fun to read.
Edit: Sorry about the weird spoilers, for some reason it cut off the spoiler halfway and nothing I did would fix it, so two spoilers had to be used.
Warning: Spoiler!This was an important scene to have. I needed to show right from the start that Pippa is vengeful and angry, and what better way then arson?Pippa has to breathe through her mouth due to her nose being badly plugged and swollen, the creep broke her nose! She didn't tell on him and his friends, yet Christopher is bragging about it, and no punishment from the staff so far. Breaking into the council flat and Christopher's flat, she gets her revenge alright. The entire building is up in flames and it will show the fire started in Christopher's flat.
I didn't want to just do a typical rape-revenge story. Pippa was on a bad path from the start, getting betrayed, attacked and being involved in having her only friend hurt so badly just set off the ticking time bomb inside of her.
Healthcare is free in the UK (far from great though), so she did see a doctor, but her nose was pretty badly smashed and didn't heal quite right.Pippa uses a picture of her dad to practice darts, oh boy, I'm going to want to give her father a fate worse than death once I learn why she hates him, aren't I. Ditched her and her mother when she was six, now that is a good reason to hate him. Crooked nose, so couldn't afford to see a doctor, and her broken nose healed wrong, ouch. Hey! Redheads are not soulless!
And Pippa has a problem found in children who have been forced to grow up too quickly or suffered emotional trauma in the past, hyper independence. It's hard for them to trust others, make friends, or ask for help. Being abandoned by her father and living in poverty with an overworked mother set her up for failure.
Pippa was created when someone made a joke about a student that everyone wanted to keep away from Imp. So I needed a suitably silly character to base her off of. Dick Dastardly had the right mix of incompetence, villainy and silliness to work. And being a devisor, well it was perfect.Wacky Races and she roots for Dick Dastardly, it figures. Whoa, analyzing his car's design like that, has she started to manifest as a mutant and a Gadgeteer for a power? More and more thoughts like that over the last month, yup, she has manifested as a mutant.
I was always planning it to be a facade hiding her much nastier side. I didn't plan this origin story at first, in fact she wasn't going to get one at all and just be a friend of Miss Abyss in the Winter term. I forget how I came up with this story, It just came to me and went downhill from there.
This is a common tactic used by the British grooming gangs. Find at risk girls who are from poor and/or abusive homes, butter them up, and sometimes take the time to become 'girlfriends' then push them into prostitution or bad situations. Or just get em to a party and break them.A cute guy, 16, in nice clothes, comes right towards Pippa and knows her name, I would be wary too. Richard, says he thinks she is cute, not sure if he is lying yet. A party and tempts her with marijuana, all this British slang for things is interesting. Pippa takes him back to her place, a chatty fellow. Pippa plays pranks on kids that pissed her off, yikes.
Richard says she needs nice clothes for the party, and he will buy them for her, calling her stuff little kid's clothes, she is 12. He sells weed at school and talks of sharing it if Pippa is his queen, ugh.Why do I feel very scared for Pippa right as he says that? Bring her friend, oh no, not two girls in over their heads.Laughing, he shook his head. “You're safe with me. I won't do nothing you don't want.”
Pippa and Lily were perfect targets.
ANd I made a typo there, Pippa is 13 years old not 12.
Everything between the shopping trip and the party, it happens. Pretty much everything I wrote about the grooming gangs happened and still does in the UK. Covering girls in gasoline to threaten them, threatening family and friends, using drugs, alcohol and gifts, fake taxi's, all real.Great, Richard urges them inside, introductions to everyone. No chance to relax or say much, just drugs and drink foisted upon them, I knew this was bad. Crap, things get heated fast and very uncomfortable for Pippa and Lily. Pippa has the sudden urge to leave, but Richard starts kissing her and feeling her up, I want to kill him now.
*eyes go red with rage* She is saying no! I knew he lied earlier, he is forcing himself upon her! This is rape, he is going to rape her! Her anger surges up, pulls herself forward by Richard's shirt, and bites his cheek hard enough that he is spurting blood. And she is still biting and clawing at him as he falls back onto the floor. Someone pulls them apart, but she is attacking anyone in range, crap! Don't tell me she is a rager.
She tries to go for Lily, running on pure instinct it seems, but is attacked by a large man and bites him on the wrist to force him to let her go. More of the guys are coming for her and she flees for her life from the flat. Please let Lily be okay.
And Pippa isn't a rager, she is just a very angry young lady. She let herself trust Richard and being betrayed made her explode. Unfortunately she's a small 13 year old girl and even being a bit stronger then normal isn't enough to let her win a fight against adults without a weapon.
I felt like an asshole as I wrote about Lily and Pippa having fun, knowing what was coming.Pippa wakes up in bad shape, arms covered in bruises and puke, dress ruined. Memories of the night come back to her, the horrors Richard and his friends inflicted on two underage girls. She starts crying, wondering how she could walk into such an obvious trap, and only stops as she wonders what happened to Lily. Oh crap, the revenge she has planned for if they hurt Lily, dead men walking.
And Pippa needed a good cry, she's angry, but she's a young girl who was put in a situation she never should have been. Just going to straight rage wouldn't have really worked.
While I was writing this I wasn't sure what Pippa's powers would be focused on. I knew what it wouldn't be though. She's not exactly the super science or computer type of kid. But gears, springs, simple engines, yeah that sounded right. Her devisor power is mostly about how she charges them, they use a lot less power than they should, and she can make electricity jump through hoops.Oh, spring loader, not a railgun then. Still a brutal weapon she has come up with.
I tend to make parents either good, or horrible. Pippa's mom in other circumstances would be a very good one. But being a poor single parent, her best is far from good enough when dealing with a kid like Pippa.*sigh* Her mom is trying to be a good mother and talk with Pippa, but Pippa says there is nothing to talk about. Please, open up to your mother before it is too late. I'm glad she was able to buy everything she needs, I just hope she and Lily get out of this alive and intact. Yup, Exemplar strength and doesn't even know it yet. Works on a project, yet lies to her mother, but mom isn't fooled.
Pippa is a genius, even before she manifested she was very smart and focused. She's also willing to go the distance when it comes to pulling off a con.Ouch, what her mom said to her, you would have to have a heart of stone for that not to get to you. Take some time and think, they need to pay, but make sure it is in a way that can't be pinned to you. Pippa finally thinks about all that has happened in the past few weeks, her strength, the images in her head, she knows she is a mutant now.
Pretty mutant and mad scientist, that is an interesting way of describing Exemplar and Gadgeteer. She knows about the MCO and what will happen if she doesn't report she is a mutant, good. Thinking on it, a bad buy, but so bad at it, no one cared, this is how she figured out her codename of the Dastardly Daughter. Oh god, she even has a goofy laugh. And goes to tell her mom, that was fast.
There are some fun things planned for Whateley.
WHOOHOOO! It's been a while since one of my stories made you want to punch your screen.Pippa heads to buy some more clothes but is ambushed by Richard and a friend, at least Richard looks properly messed up after her attacks. Omar, the guy she bit the wrist of, almost died, serves him right. *Restrains self from punching monitor to get at Richard* He threatened to do that to her mother and Lily, they need to die.
ANd that's what I was aiming for. There's no redeeming qualities for these guys.
This was fun to write. She likes hamming it up and after everything she needed a bit of fun. Mut-L-E was essential for her look, and he's going to be fun to write.A purple trench coat, she is hamming up the Dastardly Daughter theme. Purple bucket hat, rats, couldn't find a helmet. Ski goggles in place of driving goggles, boy, her costume stands out.
Anyone who isn't a fan of Wacky Races is going to be confused by her costume. Mom asking her to behave, hey, it is the MCO, a lot of those agents deserve whatever headaches come their way.She was wearing a red turtleneck sweater dress under the coat, and it looked really good with the black tights and ankle boots. Her red gloves were a real find and matched the image she wanted perfectly.
Exemplar 1, may become a 2 once a bit older, but not certain. Mut-L-E robot dog, oh god, my sides hurt.She even has temper tantrums and blames Mutlee for everything down. Devisor 3 and suggestion to get her checked for Diedrick's due to the tantrum.“NO! You stupid thing! How dare you break and humiliate me!” Her foot came down on the controller smashing it to pieces. “THIS ISN'T FAIR!”
Here is where Pippa goes from being deadly but capable of being talked down, to murderous. Seeing her only friend broken, and blaming herself for setting it up, all the rage Pippa has inside erupts into a volcano that she can't control.Crap, she runs towards Lily hoping to hug and Lily thinks Pippa was paid by the creeps to bring her to the party, saying she ruined her life. Lily kicks her, knocking Pippa down, and says to leave her alone, but Pippa doesn't blame her for any of it. The men at the party and Richard's friends are all going to die for this. And I agree with Pippa, monsters like that need to be stopped or they will keep doing this shit to other girls, other innocents, without care.
I wanted a German last name for Pippa, and when I saw Mischke, I knew I had to use it. Pippa and Minx are just fun English names that seemed perfect for Dastardly Daughter. And whenever I had to use Mischke, I had it copied so I could just past it, I cannot remember how to spell that name.Oh boy, she has the phone back, opened, and with a new password she made up. Agent Waters and Detective Harris show up right outside her flat's main door. Pippa Minx Mischke, a unique last name and that is the only time I will type it out, too hard to remember for me. Want to know why two men attacked her on Sunday, now how did they find out that detail?
See her bag, do the authorities not require a search warrant in the UK to search private property? No devises on her even in her coat, and didn't take any to school.If they are anything like U.S. MCO and U.S. police, no it isn't.“Go home, Pippa. But remember, if people are after you, telling us is your best chance at staying alive.”
About them questioning her on the two men attacked, they're guessing. Small dark haired girl at the scene of the crime where a devise was used, small dark haired devisor getting tested the next day, she's the top suspect. For checking her bag and jacket, they were pushing things, but they had reasonable suspicion that she might have a weapon in them. A good lawyer could raise a fuss, but if they found the murder weapon, it would probably be allowed.
There was only so much they could search before it became unreasonable. Patting her down without a weapon or drugs being found in her bag or coat would have involved lawyers and her mother. They are going by the books.Electro-weapon hidden in her gloves now, smart. Boy, she has a lot of places to hide things on her they didn't even think to check.
The constrictor was a spur of the moment thing. I was thinking, 'how would she keep him from moving, while making him give her access to her phone, while torturing him without her coming off as a bloody psychopath. Strangulation was the answer, it also fits her style of devises. Purely mechanical, no hard science, just engineering and power supplied by a simple battery.Wire tightening around his neck, okay, that is a nasty weapon. She tricks him into unlocking his phone but lets the wire crush his throat anyway. Brutal way to die.
Crap, the Dastardly Daughter only feels cold about killing Omar, she needs help and fast. Sends out a message to set up a trap for the rest of Richard's group of friends. And now we know what the Jerry Can and gas was for, a devise set up to torch the place and kill them all at once in a fire.
Peter knocks and enters Omar's flat only to find Omar dead, everyone wondering what happened. Only to get hit by devised napalm! Okay, she is terrifying when seeking revenge and shows how deadly a devisor can be when seeking revenge.
And yes, a devisor who plays it cold and collected without making a big scene, is really freaking scary.
Oh boy, is she drunk? The way she is acting makes me think she is drunk. But the driver doesn't take her to the club, ends up in a dark alley, and says it isn't a taxi only to get a crossbow bolt through the stomach.Friday, November 16th, 2007
Late eveningAnother offer to let him go if he gives her his phone password and she shoots him through the chest. More people from Omar and Richard's phones, she is taking out the scum who prey on underage girls.“You wouldn't believe how hard it was finding your jarg taxi, Camara. I know all about you, get girls who are bladdered, then if they're young maybe share them with your friends.”
This guy is straight from a newspaper. I didn't even bother changing the fuckers name. His one line, is actually what he said to one of his victims.
He really does deserve a slow and painful death.
I didn't want the police totally useless in the Whateley universe, unlike in the UK with the grooming gangs. So they are investigating and trying to figure out what's going on.Great, woken up by the police pounding on the door with a warrant to search the place. The warrant is even in order. Detective Harris and Agent Waters once again. A search of her room is useless, working on Mut-L-E Dash 3, oh boy. Mom is home and annoyed they think Pippa could be responsible for the murders. I'm sorry, but I'm with Pippa on this, rapists are monsters imo.
Detective Harris doesn't believe her, great, they are going to keep an eye on her now. Southern Asians make up the majority of her victims, hhm. People are never happy about how long an investigation takes, they expect it to be fast like in TV shows and movies. Good, the MCO should have to deal with idiots calling them as well. Wait for a slip-up, I doubt that will happen if Pippa keeps being careful.
I thought having her bangs turn ginger and the rest staying black would look cool. So I went with it.Hhm, I still wonder why only her bangs turned ginger and not all of her hair. *eyes bug out* That is how the devise is going to target her intended victim in the laundromat, I hope it doesn't go after someone with a similar voice. 5 more stores and restaurants, please let them target the intended victims.
And for using the sound of the voices, she's not much at programming, but with stolen phones she could rig up a simple tracking system using the microphones. It was easier for her than using video.
Those were your friends and business associates, I wonder if these creeps do stuff beyond getting girls hooked on drugs, like the slave trade. His voice triggers the device and he has to hang up on the call as the clicking sound bugs him. Okay, that devise was even more brutal than I originally thought it was going to be. [/QUOTE]Mr. Kamran, owner of Perfect Fit Tailors, was a nervous man.
I really liked these things. Essentially mobile spring loaded cannonballs that overheat and blow up. Right up Dastardly's alley.
The police were actually following the rules to the letter. When questioning a minor in the UK, they only need a parent or guardian there. The moment a lawyer is asked for, they have to get them one. Like in North America, it's best to have a lawyer right from the start, but legally you have to ask for one.Pippa was in school when the attacks happened, no one can identify Pippa as being at any of those places with enough certainty to get a warrant for her arrest. Brought in for questioning, Detective Harris and Agent Waters once again. Ah, Pippa has turned 13 since the story started. Detective Harris, you can only prove that is a coincidence without evidence otherwise. And Mom now wants a lawyer for Pippa, questioning someone without a lawyer and hoping to get further before a lawyer is brought in, is it any wonder most people don't trust the police.
If you have a strong stomach look up 'The Rotherham child sexual exploitation scandal'. That is only one of several incidents of grooming gangs throughout the UK which is still going on today. The police in these cases were much less than useless.Agent Waters gets a call from Detective Harris. Every one of the victims is part of a grooming gang, they are worse than I thought. Richard, Omar, Peter, and the other teens bring the girls in, this is beyond sickening.
So they came to Britain to prey on local girls and flee when they were targeted by someone with righteous fury.Some of the wealthier men left the country to return home
I decided to use that as inspiration for this story, and have the situation break several years sooner than it did in reality.
Pippa could make a very scary villain if things don't turn around for her at Whateley.Pippa walks along, her mind in a very dark place, someone help her! Her anger is so hard to control now, she likes the power she has now after being small and weak for so long. Power armor, oh crud, no, don't make that for that reason, Pippa. An ambush with a cricket bat by someone in a van and Pippa is down. Stripped and bound, it is part of the same grooming group, these scum need to be put down.
Like I said earlier, Lily is exactly the type of girl these fucks would go after, dysfunctional home, and eager for better things.Great, Lily's mother is drunk and Lily went out with friends who 'need' her. Oh crap, please don't tell me she went willingly back to those creeps because she is hooked on the drugs already. A call to Pippa's mom and Pippa is gone, Lily is in danger, and this is all kinds of messed up. A package to the warehouse tonight and they need the blonde, crap. Okay, Agent Waters is one of the good MCO agents it seems.
And I like having Agent Waters not being scum. He's not a saint or anything, but he's got the right attitude.
I had to think of a way for a group of civilians used to dealing with young, mostly compliant young girls would deal with a mutant. Gas is cheap, and threats usually work. They also don't have easy access to guns or devises, so they would go with old school methods.Thrown onto a hard concrete floor, Pippa needs a hero and fast. A whole can of petrol and threaten to light her on fire if she tries any mutant tricks, psychopaths. 6 in total, teens and adult men. Pippa has some insults in her. Crap, they have Lily and broke her. Brought her to I.D. Pippa.
A knife to Lily's throat to get Pippa to behave, they have people who want Pippa because she is a devisor, and threats to mutilate Lily for every outburst or person she kills. Yeah, they all need to die. A few hours to reach their location, surround her in petrol, and threaten harm to Lily if Pippa doesn't behave. Ouch! Effective, but very painful way to break zip ties. Time to make something to get her and Lily out of this alive and intact.
And this shows just how angry Pippa is. If they didn't have Lily at knife point, Pippa probably would have made them kill her just so she could hurt them a little.
I wasn't sure how to go here. I was writing as I was thinking of it. As soon as Pippa got in the hallway looking at the armed man, I realized she would just go berserk and head in swinging. And frankly a small teenager armed with a cricket bat and no fighting skills, is not going to do well against a full grown adult with a knife.Everyone panics, some say they need to get Pippa out of the van, and someone shouts to call 999. Pippa is a brutal fighter, seat belt to the head until the teen drops his cricket bat, then she takes the bat and hits him in the head. Crap, she gets to the hallway with a row of offices where Lily is being held, but Pippa is spotted. Reckless charge and she gets stabbed in the stomach, keeping the knife in to prevent herself from bleeding out.
Agent Waters to the rescue as he shoots the man who stabbed Pippa and picks her up, Detective Harris has Lily and is leading them out of the hallway. Agent Waters has first aid training to do that so quickly. Lily cries into Detective Harris' chest while Pippa goes unconscious.
Fortunately I already had the cavalry waiting to rush in. And I'd expect most MCO agents to have pretty extensive first aid training. It makes sense for their line of work.
Even for Britain arresting and charging a thirteen year old for killing pedophiles who raped her friend and almost did the same to her would not go over well, especially with the media circus around it all.Dastardly Daughter is a little worried, oh boy. Agent Waters knows she isn't cartoonish and incompetent now. Oh, good, not charged with murder due to circumstantial evidence and no good witnesses to the attacks. Needs to keep her nose clean for the next several years, aww.
So using a cricket bat on the one teen would be written off as self-defense, and the rest would be quietly put in the cold case as long as Pippa plays along.
This was joint work between the government and the MCO.A week in critical care, yikes, she came close to dying. Accepted to Whateley Academy, arriving on January 7th for the start of the Winter term, yay! Everything including tickets, well, it seems this branch of the MCO has the good ones in it. Please don't make a show at Whateley, you will attract the wrong kind of attention.
Getting Pippa out of the country is best for everyone. Having her at Whateley will keep her out of the limelight, may help her calm down and stop going after the rapists, and it will prevent any attempts at retaliation.
Not sending her on the first flight to Whateley would be stupid.
Miss Abyss was the original character I made with plans for introducing her in the winter term, after everyone else is caught up. She'll be appearing with someone else as another author and I co-write story (you'll have to wait and see who it is). Miss Abyss is an interesting one.Gloves that are a weapon with inbuilt heaters as well, perfect for winter. I was wondering who the elf was that Pippa was chatting with. Miss Abyss from Detroit, I hope they become friends. Junior High in Whitman and Miss Abyss is Freshman in Poe.
Oh boy, things are going to be interesting with those two as friends.“I think I understood that. It's sound. Maybe I can teach you proper English,” she said and snickered.
“Them's fighting words. Don't you get up in my case about how I speak when you sound like a drunk who can't open her mouth,” Miss Abyss said.
Dastardly smiled, she was going to have fun with this girl.
Thank you.A good story, though once she met Christopher/Richard I knew he was lying through his teeth. Growing up without her father from an early age, angry, bullied, and vengeful, Pippa needs to see a counselor at Whateley for help dealing with her temper. Poor and stealing to get by, not be a burden to her mother, she has a lot to be angry about. I just she can grow past it and learn to make some friends at Whateley.
I have some interesting plans for Pippa, she'll mostly be appearing in cameos and things at first, but after certain events, she'll become a regular MC, alongside Miss Abyss, and not just a few one shots.
Thanks as always for the comments.
And I think you'll really like the next story I have.
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However, I know of one case where "helpful" processing of telephone numbers had unusual consequences. A chemical plant had a system for reporting fires where entering an emergency code followed by a code for a plant location would send the plant fire department to the location.
One of the phones was located next to a pier where chemical tankers would tie up. Sailors would assume that they could use the phone to make free telephone calls back home instead of having to pay a toll. (This was many years before the existence of cell phones.) Every few weeks, some sailor who hadn't read the notices written in large letters would end up sending the fire truck to strange locations.
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