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You Don't Know Jak (Part 2) by E. E. Nalley

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27 May 2025 00:01 #4318 by DanZilla
You Don't Know Jak (Part 2) can be found in the Gen 1 section or by using the link below... please remember our authors are doing this for the response they get... leave comments where you can for appreciated stories.

You Don't Know Jak (Part 2)
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27 May 2025 02:51 #4319 by Dreamer
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Below is a stream of consciousness commentary I type up as I read the story. Details from the story will be included. If you have not read the story yet and don't wish to have details spoiled, read no further.

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27 May 2025 03:28 #4320 by E. E. Nalley
First, hats off to Dreamer for the Gold Standard of comments! So, to answer your questions:

You haven't seen the *Shawshank Redemption?* Stop what you are doing and go watch it! You're welcome ahead of time!

What fight is this? It's the Bigot Brawl, as told in *The Evil That Men Do Part 2*. And the weather is the upcoming super blizzard also told in that story. Any other questions I missed? Hit me up!

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28 May 2025 03:01 #4321 by Dan Formerly Domoviye
A strong second, for watching Shawshank Redemption, awesome movie.

Also E.E. great story. It's good to see these characters back in action.
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28 May 2025 11:17 #4322 by mhalpern
This whole story was wholesome

Micro scenes and bad ideas are freely adoptable
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28 May 2025 13:47 #4323 by E. E. Nalley
Thanks, Mhalpern! It was certainly fun to write and I hope shine some light on some of the more back of the house situations. And of course it's wonderful to see some of these kids actually growing and learning. Which, any teacher worth their chalk will tell you is the real thrill of the job; watching kids learn to become adults.
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