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Duty to the World by Bladedancer

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13 Jun 2023 00:00 #2874 by DanZilla
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13 Jun 2023 00:24 #2875 by mhalpern
Wasn't expecting ANY of the four in this story.... So many answers, but even more questions.

Micro scenes and bad ideas are freely adoptable
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13 Jun 2023 01:02 #2876 by Dreamer
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13 Jun 2023 21:41 - 13 Jun 2023 21:42 #2882 by Kristin Darken

Wasn't expecting ANY of the four in this story.... So many answers, but even more questions.

that's the kinda feedback we love :)

Fate guard you, and may the Light brighten your Way.
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16 Jun 2023 22:14 - 16 Jun 2023 22:26 #2888 by Schol-R-LEA
An interesting glimpse into the later lives of these characters. As mhalpern said, there are more questions raised than answers given. Intriguing.

What I am most curious about, though, is what the Tao foresaw as destabilizing the Balance. A bio-weapon, accidentally released? A general cure for cancer, years too soon for society to cope with it? Something else? The possibilities are wide open.

Also, is MT someone we already know?
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16 Jun 2023 23:41 #2892 by Bladedancer
MT is Mighty Tiny. She has been introduced in older stories. She is primarily a vlogger with delusions of grandeur and happens to be a powerful Finder.
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17 Jun 2023 01:47 #2893 by mhalpern

An interesting glimpse into the later lives of these characters. As mhalpern said, there are more questions raised than answers given. Intriguing.

What I am most curious about, though, is what the Tao foresaw as destabilizing the Balance. A bio-weapon, accidentally released? A general cure for cancer, years too soon for society to cope with it? Something else? The possibilities are wide open.

Also, is MT someone we already know?

My guess, a medical advance that would either save someone who would destabilize the Balance, or prevent someone important to the Balance from manifesting.

Micro scenes and bad ideas are freely adoptable
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