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Another Star in the Night by Amethyst
09 Sep 2023 00:00 #3029
by DanZilla
Another Star in the Night by Amethyst was created by DanZilla
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09 Sep 2023 03:06 #3037
by Dreamer
Thank You for the story comments appreciated and help me know they are being read and liked. Note: My story comments can't nor are trying to replace reading the stories, simply my way of enjoying them and letting the authors know I enjoy them.
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SPOILER ALERT
Below is a stream of conscious commentary I type up as I read the story. There will be details from the story included in it. If you have not read the story yet and don't wish to have details of it spoiled, read no further.
Another Star in the NIght comments
Oof, Exemplar 1 and Energizer 4, yet try to be a hero and protect bullied students. Concentration and time to gather the energy for her power, no wonder she can't use it before being attacked. Her personal hero is Superstar and she calls herself Wonderstar, wants to be a hero, but is being ghosted by the Cape Squad, how rude.
Hollywood Tonight and all those celebs Julia has no interest in or no idea who they are. Goodie, Pond Technologies stock taking a hit, couldn't happen to 'nicer' parents. I feel sorry for the employees, but Lily's scumball parents deserve their company going bankrupt for what they did. Gwen Carter has to deal with a large crowd of talk show audience. Oh boy, this poor girl having to go onto a talk show and pretend to be a girl who passed away.
Giving the basic rundown of what they went through, including Lily Pond and how they are staying with the All-Stars. Julia starts to get extremely jealous but catches and chatises herself. Nice to see her swiftly switch her thoughts around. Maiden Starlight and Gwen acting like she doesn't know what anime is, those lessons on how to act are doing a lot of good.
A clip from Moana by the Rock, I forgot it came out so many years ago. Ooo, a rival for Maiden Starlight and they haven't even met yet.
I wonder how they will actually get along once they meet in person. It is a nice glimpse into the mindset of a student set on becoming a hero.
Below is a stream of conscious commentary I type up as I read the story. There will be details from the story included in it. If you have not read the story yet and don't wish to have details of it spoiled, read no further.
Another Star in the NIght comments
Warning: Spoiler!
Julia Wunder calls out to her roommate Janine aka Tinker, but she is in their room alone on Halloween night. Ouch, taken out in one hit twice before she could bring her powers to bear, poor kid needs a break. Julia got Agent Dawn MacKenzie, one of the good MCO agents, right after she manifested. Thank you for the security cameras catching the bullies attacking her.Dickinson Cottage – Room 215
October 31st, 2016
10:47 p.m.
Oof, Exemplar 1 and Energizer 4, yet try to be a hero and protect bullied students. Concentration and time to gather the energy for her power, no wonder she can't use it before being attacked. Her personal hero is Superstar and she calls herself Wonderstar, wants to be a hero, but is being ghosted by the Cape Squad, how rude.
Hollywood Tonight and all those celebs Julia has no interest in or no idea who they are. Goodie, Pond Technologies stock taking a hit, couldn't happen to 'nicer' parents. I feel sorry for the employees, but Lily's scumball parents deserve their company going bankrupt for what they did. Gwen Carter has to deal with a large crowd of talk show audience. Oh boy, this poor girl having to go onto a talk show and pretend to be a girl who passed away.
Giving the basic rundown of what they went through, including Lily Pond and how they are staying with the All-Stars. Julia starts to get extremely jealous but catches and chatises herself. Nice to see her swiftly switch her thoughts around. Maiden Starlight and Gwen acting like she doesn't know what anime is, those lessons on how to act are doing a lot of good.
A clip from Moana by the Rock, I forgot it came out so many years ago. Ooo, a rival for Maiden Starlight and they haven't even met yet.
I wonder how they will actually get along once they meet in person. It is a nice glimpse into the mindset of a student set on becoming a hero.
Thank You for the story comments appreciated and help me know they are being read and liked. Note: My story comments can't nor are trying to replace reading the stories, simply my way of enjoying them and letting the authors know I enjoy them.
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09 Sep 2023 03:13 #3038
by Amethyst
Replied by Amethyst on topic Another Star in the Night by Amethyst
Thanks for your commentary, Dreamer. This was a nice chance to show Gwen's TV appearance and give another point of view. Julia really wants to be a hero more than anything, but if she's going to succeed, she'll have to figure ways around her weaknesses.
*big hugs*
Amethyst
*big hugs*
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