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Spiralling by Domoviye

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16 Jan 2024 01:00 #3214 by DanZilla
Spirallingcan be found in the Gen 2 section or by using the link below... and please remember our authors are doing this for the response they get... please leave comments where you can for appreciated stories or if you have anything to bring to the conversation.

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16 Jan 2024 03:06 #3216 by Dreamer
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SPOILER ALERT
Below is a stream of conscious commentary I type up as I read the story. There will be details from the story included in it. If you have not read the story yet and don't wish to have details of it spoiled, read no further.

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16 Jan 2024 07:33 - 16 Jan 2024 07:41 #3218 by Dan Formerly Domoviye
Thanks Dreamer, your comments made the tears I had while writing this worthwhile.
While it was hard to read, I can promise you it was at least as hard to write. But I knew I had a good story here, so it had to be written.

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Pastel and Shisa will appear soon in Alley Cat Part 2, where they officially meet for the first time. And if you thought this was hard, well we're going to learn exactly why Pastel is so messed up in that one.
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18 Jan 2024 15:28 #3224 by Wasamon
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I'd like to apologize for my role in instigating this further trauma upon you, Dreamer.

My next Whateley story should be more upbeat, promise!
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23 Jan 2024 23:37 #3258 by Schol-R-LEA
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Nothing for either of you to apologize for. It was a rough story to read, but a good one.
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24 Jan 2024 00:32 #3259 by Dan Formerly Domoviye

I'd like to apologize for my role in instigating this further trauma upon you, Dreamer.

My next Whateley story should be more upbeat, promise!

Hey you gave me several great ideas for stories, and they'll all bring more tears and pain and suffering.
What more can people ask for?
So there's no need to apologize.

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28 Jan 2024 14:18 #3299 by Wasamon
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Except to Dreamer, because Dreamer's the most awesomest reader we could ask for ;)
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28 Jan 2024 17:32 #3310 by Dan Formerly Domoviye
OK, Dreamer can have the apology as she's the greatest reader ever.
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