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A Dragon is for Life, not just for Xmas by Astrodragon

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21 May 2024 00:01 #3545 by DanZilla
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21 May 2024 03:33 #3546 by Dreamer
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21 May 2024 05:22 #3547 by Astrodragon
Thankyou for the comments, Dreamer
A few clarifications :
What kind of snacks do they have in British movie theaters?
They are quite different (and more edible) than in US and Canadian theatres

Seesh, if you are untrained you listen to the professionals, this isn't an action movie where you go off on your own and try to be the lone hero.
Unfortunately quite a few teens do. Team Kimba comes to mind..
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It was obviously the MCO, not the Order, as they had her restrained based on her MID and powers.

Of course it will take years to enchant the spear to the level of Thulias spell staff, its like getting a powerful laptop and having to write all the software yourself

No demonstrations or nasty signs, boy, it is different than America
They dont get as many, and its New Year, a happy crowd.

Okay, now you have me worried.
would I do something like that? :)

Though what Ceri said to Morgana, she has a twisted sense of humor, doesn't she.
Shes a techie AND her big sister...
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21 May 2024 09:30 #3548 by mhalpern
called it on the spear. Morgana's only mistake was not requesting the presence of legal counsel

Micro scenes and bad ideas are freely adoptable

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21 May 2024 11:28 #3549 by mhalpern
I also must say i love the use of SILK as a packing material even if its fairly low grade silk using it for something that large IS a bit of a statement about relative value, that or the fire plane has VERY large silk worms.

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21 May 2024 12:01 #3550 by null0trooper

It's basically a training role, and there would be some minimal reading we’d ask you to do, but it doesn’t involve you actually working for us.


It's not like they could plant a constable in one of her classes.

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21 May 2024 12:06 #3551 by Astrodragon
its the sort of thing they do for the cadet forces, give them an idea to see it it interest them

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21 May 2024 12:06 #3552 by Astrodragon

called it on the spear. Morgana's only mistake was not requesting the presence of legal counsel

ehy would she do that??

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21 May 2024 23:00 #3553 by mhalpern

called it on the spear. Morgana's only mistake was not requesting the presence of legal counsel

ehy would she do that??

With her experience? she wouldn't. but its not exactly unprecedented to have preemptive legal counsel available among Whateley students, usually that's with Bad Seeds like Jadis, but even so, it's not like it's a bad thing in her situation

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22 May 2024 00:37 #3554 by mhalpern
Thulia is definitely overthinking things with regards to the ambassador. there aren't that many dragons in her age group, so when one is active on another plane, it is the job of the relevant ambassadors to know about it,

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22 May 2024 07:47 #3555 by Astrodragon

Thulia is definitely overthinking things with regards to the ambassador. there aren't that many dragons in her age group, so when one is active on another plane, it is the job of the relevant ambassadors to know about it,

yes, shes being overly paranoid here, but it was a sock it was the ambassador rather than the Order

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22 May 2024 07:49 #3556 by Astrodragon

called it on the spear. Morgana's only mistake was not requesting the presence of legal counsel

ehy would she do that??

With her experience? she wouldn't. but its not exactly unprecedented to have preemptive legal counsel available among Whateley students, usually that's with Bad Seeds like Jadis, but even so, it's not like it's a bad thing in her situation

Now shes more tied up with AEGIS she has excellent legal council available
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22 May 2024 10:54 #3557 by mhalpern

Thulia is definitely overthinking things with regards to the ambassador. there aren't that many dragons in her age group, so when one is active on another plane, it is the job of the relevant ambassadors to know about it,

yes, shes being overly paranoid here, but it was a sock it was the ambassador rather than the Order

not like the Order is that secretive, at least not among fire plane denizens, they clearly have to report to relevant authority figures. Sure they may be primarily an intelligence apparatus, but nothing about the project Thulia is involved in benefits from covert operations. At least not her involvement- she isn't exactly subtle anyways, she may be used as an information courier but they likely have better options in most cases. She only was involved in Phoenix because no one else could be made available in a timely manner due to the political situation the father was in.

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22 May 2024 11:19 #3558 by mhalpern

called it on the spear. Morgana's only mistake was not requesting the presence of legal counsel

ehy would she do that??

With her experience? she wouldn't. but its not exactly unprecedented to have preemptive legal counsel available among Whateley students, usually that's with Bad Seeds like Jadis, but even so, it's not like it's a bad thing in her situation

Now shes more tied up with AEGIS she has excellent legal council available
yup, she doesn't have THAT much to worry about from the school she did everything that could have reasonably been expected of her in the situation right, followed up by getting more tied up with AEGIS in response to doing everything right having not been enough. At most a light grilling for the benefit of those that don't know the full story and may take an abstaining to address her appearance on the news as tacit permission for other things, with a major pat on the back.

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22 May 2024 11:54 #3559 by Astrodragon

called it on the spear. Morgana's only mistake was not requesting the presence of legal counsel

ehy would she do that??

With her experience? she wouldn't. but its not exactly unprecedented to have preemptive legal counsel available among Whateley students, usually that's with Bad Seeds like Jadis, but even so, it's not like it's a bad thing in her situation

Now shes more tied up with AEGIS she has excellent legal council available
yup, she doesn't have THAT much to worry about from the school she did everything that could have reasonably been expected of her in the situation right, followed up by getting more tied up with AEGIS in response to doing everything right having not been enough. At most a light grilling for the benefit of those that don't know the full story and may take an abstaining to address her appearance on the news as tacit permission for other things, with a major pat on the back.

Followed by "Taking the Imps 'Theory and practice of the escape' special topics course is not optional for you. Enjoy"

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