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Dirty Deeds Don't Come Cheap (Part 5) by MaLAguA

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04 Jun 2024 00:00 #3577 by DanZilla
Dirty Deeds Don't Come Cheap (Part 5) can be found in the Gen 2 section or by using the link below... and please remember our authors are doing this for the response they get... please leave comments where you can for appreciated stories or if you have anything to bring to the conversation.

Dirty Deeds Don't Come Cheap (Part 5)
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04 Jun 2024 02:59 #3578 by Dreamer
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Below is a stream of conscious commentary I type up as I read the story. There will be details from the story included in it. If you have not read the story yet and don't wish to have details of it spoiled, read no further.

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04 Jun 2024 03:46 #3579 by MaLAguA
Thank you for the comment's, Dreamer. Always enjoyable to see them.

Declan and Preston: Decaf and Prohibition. the criminal brother team. There's something about their powers i love, how it's so specific but still useful.

Arno and Pollux, I want to say that I portrayed them convincingly, although reading some stories do make me feel like I can take caution to the wind. Arno was the young hothead who gets to watch his boss's pedestal break, while Pollux is someone trying to hide what wasn't meant to be seen. He didn't ask Vince for help because he thought Preston was the worse of the two, he did so because he knew he probably would be able to get rid of Preston.

Vic: I'm officially graduate letting him take a bit more of the center stage. (While not forgetting about characters like Chris, Caro (malefis) and Gwen. Look forward for his personal adventure before the end of the year.

Vince will certainly be an interesting character that might show up later as the grand plot takes a better form.

Lifeward is such a good person, it's a surprise she works for the organization that provides villain resources...

Cole is another one of my favorites.

Root, indeed, he was secretly a member of Vince's crew... but his situation is similar to Janet's, the only difference is that he was in the group about five years earlier.

Censer. I honestly, didn't think I would like the concept like i did. Feels too original, doesn't it?

All in all, I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
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