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Silent Mountain (Part 1) by MaLAguA

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23 Jul 2024 02:21 #3673 by Dreamer
Silent Mountain can be found in the Gen 2 section or by using the link below... and please remember our authors are doing this for the response they get... please leave comments where you can for appreciated stories or if you have anything to bring to the conversation.

Silent Mountain

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23 Jul 2024 02:22 #3674 by Dreamer
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Below is a stream of conscious commentary I type up as I read the story. There will be details from the story included in it. If you have not read the story yet and don't wish to have details of it spoiled, read no further.

Silent Mountain Part 1 comments
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23 Jul 2024 10:55 #3675 by mhalpern
i feel like something is going to drop on them, but i can't tell if its the proverbial shoe, or a sword

Micro scenes and bad ideas are freely adoptable

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25 Jul 2024 01:42 #3676 by cprime
One passing thought I had when I heard about the trip in the previous story was that it was something like practice for the 'no gear' camping that Martina and her mother did. However, she would likely say that Vic (And Leslie) were over packed for it. One other thought is that depending on how Vic's integration with his spirit goes, he may be able to get some insight into the change process from his sister.

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