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Silent Mountain (Part 7) by MaLAguA

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12 Nov 2024 01:00 #3846 by DanZilla
Silent Mountain (Part 7) can be found in the Library section or by using the link below... please remember our authors are doing this for the response they get... leave comments where you can for appreciated stories.

Silent Mountain (Part 7)
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12 Nov 2024 03:19 #3847 by Dreamer
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Below is a stream of conscious commentary I type up as I read the story. There will be details from the story included in it. If you have not read the story yet and don't wish to have details of it spoiled, read no further.

Silent Mountain Part 7 comments
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13 Nov 2024 20:51 #3848 by MaLAguA
Thank you so much for the comments Dreamer. Glad you found the story as entertaining to read as it was for me to write. Crafting the setting of Silent mountain, letting the pieces into the board and letting them run rampant in a way that could lead to a climax.
This was a planned sprint ended up having a lot of setup and payoff, from Josh showing Vic how to use the gun he picked before laying down his inventions, to the layout of the base and how it played a role in guiding their steps. And definitely the base's manual: who had it at the time, what they found out and what could be used.
There were several details about the production. Among which was the question as to who would get involved (while i was writing Stepsiblings combat finals) among which was who would be involved. Vic and Josh were a given, I came up with Raffina, liking the concept of an empowered individual who's had her powers since a younger age than the average student. While Leslie was a name that was graciously offered by Domo that appeared to be a good fit.
In the end, this was a relevant piece for Vic as he was put through the toughest of situations he'd experienced.
Josh will be someone that will be playing a part in his life from here on.
We'll see Raffina again, even if she doesn't go to Whateley.
The mysterious individual will carry on in the background, hopefully not knowing where is the sought 'guide' he mentioned.
Heck, even Josh's LightEX will become an important piece from there on

In the end, I glad the pieces came together quite well while also setting up future events.
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17 Nov 2024 18:53 #3854 by mhalpern
A good conclusion, and the cliffhanger at the end...

Micro scenes and bad ideas are freely adoptable

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