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No Heroes, Part 5: Once Bitten by Null0trooper

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10 Dec 2024 01:00 #3902 by DanZilla
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No Heroes, Part 5: Once Bitten
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10 Dec 2024 09:06 #3905 by Dreamer
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10 Dec 2024 17:34 - 10 Dec 2024 17:35 #3907 by null0trooper
Thank you for taking the time out to read more of Belfry's ups and downs. I do appreciate it!

Derrick, I should have known that jerk was the one who called Benjamin a criminal. Seizures all week, Edward would have been dead if that happened while Benjamin manifested the razor wire on him.

Kota 'Derrick' Kobayakawa is a Junior from Japan, whose family has been in law enforcement for generations. And, to be fair, Benjamin is pretty much a career criminal. Kobayakawa doesn't have to like that, or want new kids to associate with him.

Dereck 'Megaton' Seaver hasn't met Benjamin yet. I don't have much expectation of them seeing eye-to-eye.

Thulia walked up and Benjamin didn't notice her until she talked, now that is true stealth skills.

Dragons are apex predators, on multiple planes. The test would be in the English class they share. English isn't Thulia's first language and even though it is Benjamin's, he's missed a lot of school.

"I don't know about all the others, but Billy, Tabitha, some others, they're legitimately nice people. If there is a legit risk, why should they get hurt looking out for me?"

"Because they are genuinely nice people who might care about you? Maybe? Either way, what would you do if you saw one of them being bullied, walk away?"

Hehe, I like her, forcing Benjamin to be social in her own way.

Like a true DeVille graduate, she's not good, she's not bad, she's just right. She also has the only inside track on who he used to be. So, like Yuki, she's going to call him out on his shit.

"Like a kata. I've been training in silat the last couple of years, when I've had the time. Totally worth it. Mom's approach is closer to Tai Chi Chuan, but very internal."

Just how many martial arts has Benjamin been trained in?

Two that he's aware of, since he's forgotten most of his TKD classes, plus a year of "whatever it takes" training.

Boy, I would hate to be against Benjamin in a sim with him as the villain, and time for him to trap his base.

Benjamin shares a very important power with Bianca: who he can call on. With time to prepare and resources to match, he can be very dangerous.

This confirms Benjamin can see and hear spirits beyond the incident with the unicorn spirit of Unique.

Or the dead prostitute in Boston, or a couple of others no one's connected back to him :) If a spirit appears as a person, that's how he treats them. He's got no other metric to apply.

"Right. Well, the same goes for other tissues. Absent a BIT, when the body has to resort to manifesting tissues in order to replace lost blood, there's a much greater risk that it may not know if it's made a mistake or know when to stop. In the long run, the mutant manifestor can manifest something inherently dangerous to themselves. If not, and MATD, burnout, or tissue rejection doesn't catch up to them, an autoimmune disorder or myeloproliferative disorder might finish the job. You do not want to see what a cytokine storm looks like in these people."

Okay, it went from scary to terrifying. I thought burnout and for Regens the chance of regen cancer was bad, but this. *shudders* They've found early signs of MATD in Belfry, shit.

The trait, when it's actually present, isn't all bubble gum and sparkles.

Oof, Horton barely tolerates males, but what about the boys in Poe?

Unless they're FtM changelings, she's very rarely been shown caring about any of their problems.

The small, lead-gray disk inside was heavy as lead, but Benjamin wasn't stupid enough to think it was lead. For one thing, lead didn't tarnish black like that. For another, it didn't mentally feel like lead when he turned his full attention to it. Lead didn't have the same firey-airy character of something wanting to escape from an eternal metallic prison.

What have they done, who thought making this was a good idea? Not being able to pull this off on the fly is a very good thing, Belfry.

"Yes, I am. As are you. So are we all. Right. I should think that now is as good a time as any to dismiss what you've created. Carefully. There is no reason to rush, lest you find yourself tempted."


Please say that isn't some type of hell metal, please.

Exactly what it is will be revealed in Part 6. Let's just say that being a generalist can be a very bad thing.


A great story and I can't wait to read more of Belfry at Whateley in the future and all his friends.

Thank you so very much! This had originally been Puck and Tabitha's first appearance, but they ended up needing their own space to grow. ("Home Sweet Homely", "Stepping Out") Of course, not everyone will want to be friends with Benjamin, for various reasons and some of them good. I do hope that folks will want to stick around for the ride!

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19 Dec 2024 04:31 #3921 by null0trooper

Please say that isn't some type of hell metal, please. The test had failed, I've never been so glad for a failure.

I should have mentioned that officially, for the benefit of recordings, the test was a failure. As you may have guessed, there are worse case scenarios.

Annnnnnnnnnd... technically speaking, there are a couple or so more, more exotic, metals yet to be thrown at him.

Think of it as something to look forward to in the next part.

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20 Dec 2024 20:52 #3922 by Court
Whatever it is, it's not plutonium, which is the first thing I thought of. Tarnished plutonium isn't black, either.

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