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The Perils of Penelope (Part 1) by Wasamon

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17 Dec 2024 01:00 #3911 by DanZilla
The Perils of Penelope (Part 1) can be found in the Gen 2 section or by using the link below... please remember our authors are doing this for the response they get... leave comments where you can for appreciated stories.

The Perils of Penelope (Part 1)

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17 Dec 2024 07:52 #3915 by Dreamer
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17 Dec 2024 15:05 #3916 by Naldru
I never knew there was a Cincinnati, Indiana, before, and only knew of the one in Ohio. I really liked the story. I was also thinking of some of the synagogues that have suffered attacks over the past decade. I have a feeling that Uncle Adolph would have made some of those vandals and killers definitely feel like they took a wrong direction in life.

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18 Dec 2024 10:14 #3918 by DanZilla
Oops, I overlooked that when checking over the story... and checking with Wasamon, he had known the relative distances and got a bit myopic when noting down the relevant state. It's been fixed in story.

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18 Dec 2024 21:11 #3919 by Naldru
I should have mentioned that there is a Cincinnati, Indiana. So I'm not sure if it should have been Indiana or Ohio in the story.

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18 Dec 2024 21:35 #3920 by DanZilla
In the story it was meant to be Cincinnati, Ohio, where SPECTRUM is located and which is according to Google actually closer to Muncie, IN than Cincinnati, IN.

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