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No Heroes, Part 6: Something to chew on by Null0trooper

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31 Dec 2024 01:00 #3950 by DanZilla
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31 Dec 2024 13:16 #3956 by mhalpern
Nice hint at us getting to see a certain cult commit Suicide by Whateley soon, by showing us the aftermath...

Micro scenes and bad ideas are freely adoptable
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31 Dec 2024 23:43 #3958 by null0trooper

Nice hint at us getting to see a certain cult commit Suicide by Whateley soon, by showing us the aftermath...

Not all of the aftermath, but hopefully something to look forward to!

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01 Jan 2025 03:37 #3959 by Dreamer
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Below is a stream of conscious commentary I type up as I read the story. There will be details from the story included in it. If you have not read the story yet and don't wish to have details of it spoiled, read no further.

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01 Jan 2025 21:01 #3962 by null0trooper
Thank you for taking the time out to comment. It means a lot. Would you believe that this was the shorter of this week's two pieces?

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A great story with a lot of interesting new things to learn, both about Benjamin and his friends, and some about magical materials and how manifestations try to copy something's function and form. I can't wait for the next story for Benjamin, Peter, Max, and all the rest.

Thank you very much again! You'd never believe how much it matters that people pick up on the little hints and misdirections as well as the broader strokes and themes!

Benjamin and Peter will be having as typical an ISTP/INTP relationship as can be managed between two deadpan snarkers at Whateley. They just needed encouragement to do this "talking about feelings" thing. Been sitting on this for four years Wait til you see who ends up giving them relationship advice.

Will it be smooth sailing?

And, with a quick weapons check, they were off.

Shawn shook his head. It was probably just as well that Benjamin and his date were gay. They cleaned up well, but with romantic instincts like that, what woman would give them a second date?

"I wonder how those two ever got together?"

Taka almost let it go, but said, "In Japan, it is traditional to exchange chocolates. Perhaps they exchanged bullets?"


Magic 8 Ball says, "Don't count on it"


Of course, there will also be complications for the Spring term. Someone's attracted attention.

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01 Jan 2025 22:31 #3963 by DanZilla

Nice hint at us getting to see a certain cult commit Suicide by Whateley soon, by showing us the aftermath...

The readers won't be left hanging for long on this one.

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07 Jan 2025 23:49 #3990 by Naldru
I was just looking at the story again and was reminded about some stories I heard about Charles Steinmetz. en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Charles_Proteus_Steinmetz He was a German speaking hunchbacked dwarf who had equipment in his laboratory that generated lightning bolts. His medical problems, which came pretty close to the GSD described in the Whateley stories, were hereditary and he adopted one of his co-workers so that he could pass on his name without passing on the deformities. He would probably fit right in at Whateley.
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08 Jan 2025 00:15 #3991 by null0trooper
Definitely an interesting person! No reason he wouldn't have been an early gadgeteer in the WAU.

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