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New Year's Escapade (Part 3) by MaLAguA

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31 Dec 2024 01:00 #3952 by DanZilla
New Year's Escapade (Part 3) can be found in the Gen 2 section or by using the link below... please remember our authors are doing this for the response they get... leave comments where you can for appreciated stories.

New Year's Escapade (Part 3)
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31 Dec 2024 04:44 #3953 by cprime
Thanks to MaLAguA for the appropriately timed next (final?) installment in the story.
Let's try for an actual live commentary.
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Thanks again to MaLAguA for unfolding Vic's character arc. Silent Mountain and New Year's Escapade both helped make Vic a more vibrant character.
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31 Dec 2024 04:59 #3954 by MaLAguA
Thank you so much for the commentary. I really love the in depth analysis provided. So many details that were put in place that are always a joy when noticed.

Some observations I have to make, the big one is that Dereck, the student is Megaton, George, the father, is Gigaton. Another is the clarification that Vic needs to touch someone to establish a mental link. So Cole can't just join the conversation.

Other than that. I'm quite happy with this part, as all things built up to this event and the biggest reveals about the lore. This winter break arc was fun to write, and I look forward to some more moments in the year 2017.
Again, thank you for taking the time to write everything, and do hope to answer questions if any are left.

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31 Dec 2024 05:35 #3955 by Dreamer
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Below is a stream of conscious commentary I type up as I read the story. There will be details from the story included in it. If you have not read the story yet and don't wish to have details of it spoiled, read no further.

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31 Dec 2024 14:41 #3957 by Naldru
I have a degree in engineering, and my wife accuses me of being overly logical. However, this relates to personal safety in that besides keeping your phone charged, you should always have a fully charged external battery with you together with a USB charging cable. Although the chances of being attacked by would-be vigilantes in the street is relatively low, things do happen.
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