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Last Orders (Part 2) by Astrodragon

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14 Jan 2025 01:00 #4004 by DanZilla
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Last Orders (Part 2)
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14 Jan 2025 02:43 #4005 by cprime
Actually doing some real-time comments this time. As the tag says, spoilers ahead.
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I'm looking forward to part 3.
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14 Jan 2025 03:47 #4006 by mhalpern
Ah the most popular injury in a Galaxy Far Far away...

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14 Jan 2025 04:12 #4007 by Dreamer
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14 Jan 2025 11:32 - 14 Jan 2025 15:56 #4008 by Astrodragon
Thanks for the comments, CPrime

And so the mission begins. Foreshadowing says they've probably been spotted and just don't know it yet. Olrun is sounding like the type of villain who inspires loyalty through fear. Good if you accomplish results. Not so good if things go sideways.

What could possibly go wrong?

Morgana and Thulia joking about snacks. The snacks won't stand a chance (unless the dragon girls get sidetracked)

Sadly, they never got a chance to get the snacks.



And Whateley is on alert (and possibly even in position). Let's see if they can guess what the stich is. Wilson, Denton, Grimes and Robert Turner. Fairly balanced set of skills on first blush.
And Mazarin isn't beating around the bush on scoping things out. I'm almost surprised there isn't a satellite in geosynchronous orbit over the school. Probably a fairly 'hot' chunk of space.

Space for satellites is limited. They do have one manouvering into position.


Interesting that this incident had a much stronger response than the assassination attempt on Bianca. Perhaps we just didn't see that side of things when it happened. To be fair, that group didn't try jamming things IIRC. Comms jamming always ups the ante.

Theres a reason for this. If they responded in force for every off site incident involving a student, they'd be constantly on alert. So they only go full-fat response against something like a planned assassination. Always nice to know that Erica thinks the Green Cross is single minded, not bat-shit crazy. The tales to tell when everyone gets back together.

That spear is a brutal weapon. I'm also starting to wonder if Morgana doesn't have a touch of precog or ESP, given her accurate take on the situation (and how the tarot cards read).
Not really, its just this is something Morgana has been thinking (and dreaming) about for 6 months,



Morgana might not have that wand on her).
Nope, no wand. They were going shopping, didnt expect to need a combat loadout.

. Probably want an essence battery or two in the holdouts.
Thulia does have her 'normal' essence storage, but its not her full combat loadout.

Possibly bad move on the merc's part spilling the beans that they're planning a capture.

Gloating 101.

Well, it was a decent plan on Thulia's part, though the claymore wasn't fun. Do you use the emergency heal now, or save it for a possibly greater need?

She used her emergency heal to cauterise Morgana's arm.

And Olrun goes for his 'I am invincible' move. It goes about as well as it does in the movies.
Yep :)

Certain parties are not going to be happy.
Oh, very much not so.
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14 Jan 2025 11:49 #4009 by Astrodragon
As always, thanks for the comments dreamer


Dark red for Thulia's colors and Morgana has a picture of Thulia in that swimsuit, I knew she couldn't resist.

It does show how those sorts of colours look on her.

“So you’ll be adding spell effects yourselves? I’ll need to know the size of the spell diagrams to make sure they fit.”

“Yes ma’am. We could work out which ones we want to add, then bring them in on paper when we come for the final fittings?”

This is why Cecilia is the best in the business, always planning ahead for her customer's needs. Next Sunday, ack, if only they had come in last week to get these made. Hehe, Cecilia's machine for scanning measurements is so accurate I wouldn't be surprised if the military has more than once tried to buy it off her. $15,000 for both costumes, that is a deal, it includes repairs and adjustments for life. Email in a day or two, she is going to get a late reply.

They do get the Whateley discount, and they arent looking for exotic/magic materials.

Your plan is good, but it is based on highly flawed intel.

You can make the classic military quote on this (and the rest of their planning). 'Its not what you don't know that gets you killed, its what you know that isn't true.'

The warning system and message, they updated a lot since the nightmare of Halloween 2006. Sealing the lab rats in their labs, this time I don't pity any idiot who dares to break in, they take their fate into their own hands.

They have, 2006 wouldn't work now.

Hadrian, poor guy almost had a flashback when the sirens started, luckily recognized it wasn't a tornado warning. Diverted around a construction area, I wonder what they are working on down in the tunnels right now.

Presumably, that was the rumoured underground garden complex they were working on as this year's legacy project, certainly a few large holes in the walls and piles of dirt supported that conclusion. He wondered what they were going to do with all the dirt.

Good legacy project, Whateley can never have enough food sources.

I thought it would be good to remind about this years senior project.

Uh oh, Morgana looks sick, scared the Order is trying to capture her again. Thulia is in combat mode, something very bad is about to happen for her to get as severely injured as we saw in the future. Darn, the drone being shot down makes flying out a no-go, hide and wait for the Whateley backup to arrive. These mercenaries were told they want Morgana alive, but the moment Thulia and her pop into view they open fire!

They are aiming to wound and distract, as well as seeing if the girls have protection.

After this incident and all similar past incidents, all students leaving campus must be kitted out for combat even if not expecting any!

But how many soldiers wear ther combat kit to go shopping?

Granny Hitton, oh, that poor merc is in for a world of pain before he dies. Eats one of her cookies and turns into a frog, at least he seems to have retained his mind if not for his ability to communicate, the loss of both would have been too much for me. In a little town like this, magic is known in the world, and yet he doesn't suspect the little old lady is a witch, fools and idiots, the lot of them.

Those are very value-laden ribbits... :)

Thulia is running low on essence, shit. Morgana is low on essence too, they need a hero!

They are both low on essence, and will be dry after this fight.



He has a big mouth for a hired supervillain.

Hardly unusual

Layers of magical defenses, he came prepared for a demoness, not a dragoness. Idiot thinks he can banish her back to Hell for a long, long time, the lack of proper research on potential threats to their plans is staggering. Ouch, a blow to her already injured shoulder that makes it worse, but she is too fueled by anger to care.

He gaped, looking at her, then at the mace. “Why didn’t it...?”

The information they got about Olruns operation, plus probably fragments of his notes, does indicate a demoness.


Please let that be enough for Olivia to be able to restore Morgana's hand.

You're assuming she will survive to be worried about it.
Wait for Part 3... :) :)

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16 Jan 2025 23:49 #4011 by mhalpern

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You're assuming she will survive to be worried about it.
Wait for Part 3... :) :)
its only a flesh wound

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17 Jan 2025 10:28 #4012 by Astrodragon

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You're assuming she will survive to be worried about it.
Wait for Part 3... :) :)
its only a flesh wound

At least she isnt wearing black armour

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17 Jan 2025 11:32 #4013 by mhalpern

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You're assuming she will survive to be worried about it.
Wait for Part 3... :) :)
its only a flesh wound

At least she isnt wearing black armour
Next Halloween she might be.

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