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Last Orders (Part 3) by Astrodragon

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21 Jan 2025 02:09 #4015 by DanZilla
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21 Jan 2025 03:16 #4017 by cprime
Throwing out my semi-usual stream of consciousness as I read through.
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21 Jan 2025 03:17 #4018 by mhalpern
of course the handy Dr Who reference was made, does Ceri know the head Doctor at Doyle's name?

Seems Thulia's father is being "merciful" and not introducing himself to Morgana right away, though at least she has his approval already, even if she doesn't know it yet.

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21 Jan 2025 04:08 #4019 by Dreamer
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21 Jan 2025 05:33 #4020 by null0trooper

Ceri and her uncle - Morgana will need the support, but this is the sort of repeat visit neither wanted. I haven't followed the Belfry storylines, so the flowers feel a bit out of left field for me, but they probably know each other from the commonwealth meetings.

I don't think we've shown any Commonwealth meetings in January. However, they would know each other from "Special Topics - Theory and Practice of the Escape".

Interesting briefing by Icejack to the bad seeds. And Twitch is distracted by dragons. Why can I see her getting her hands on the video, even if she isn't supposed to? I wonder if we'll find out who the leaker was.

Even the video shown to the older Bad Seeds was redacted.

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21 Jan 2025 05:52 #4021 by null0trooper

My biggest worry is that the Order seemed to know the girls were visiting Dunwich, that implies that they had an internal source of information, so of course they will be looking at us as one of the possible sources. So we need to stay pure and honest about this one. No playing fast and loose this time, it’s far too dangerous.”


Wait, Icejack and Sister Secret's parents are in the Order, dang. They didn't rat out Morgana and Thulia's trip to Dunwich, who did?

Not to worry; they aren't in either Order (Order of the Red Ba'al or Order of the Flame) and had nothing to do with the leak.

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21 Jan 2025 07:29 #4022 by Astrodragon

“Lord Mirdaz, Acolyte Grenstxaripotx, I’d normally say it was a pleasure to meet you, but under these circumstances...”

Crud, Thulia's father is here and he is upset about his daughter being harmed. This is the reason Carson chose Mazarin to replace her when it was needed, he knows how to state things diplomatically. They have seen imagery of the fight and know Thulia is only alive thanks to Morgana's sacrifice. Punitive retaliatory action, in other words, Whateley won't listen to the Order of the Crimson Ba'all when they say Orlun was acting on his own.

Welp, the cult let Orlun off his leash and it will result in their complete destruction. With Whateley and the Dragons coordinating no one involved will escape alive.

“Tracking down the members is something probably best done by humans, your resources are more suitable. However, once the members of this organisation have been reduced to hiding in their secret base, we thought it might be worth paying it some attention ourselves. Have we talked about volcanoes yet?”

Aww, let them, one little volcano destroying an evil cult's secret base is worth it to keep the Dragons as allies and Thulia at Whateley.

Mirdaz is very unhappy, and will be making his feelings known later. Morgana is in good favour with him now.


Ceri just has to make that comment after seeing Morgana's arm in stasis. Tom wishes to have a word with Morgana's doctor and surgeon, good grief. Cattletonia 'Why Not' flowers, 3 bats on the tag, Morgana is probably right about them being from Belfry.

Shes a nerd, of course she made that comment.

Oh, good, I thought they were looking at a month or more before they could go back to class. Rats, no surgical option to put her arm back on soon until Morgana recovers a lot of her blood.

The only real limitation right now is not overstraining them with too much healing in too short a time.


We need the World Trees back in large numbers, if only time manipulation on the one sapling would work. Ah, the Dragons don't know about the Sidhe on campus being mutants who had spirits of Sidhe who don't remember their past bond with them. [quoteWait, so Dragons could be native to Earth who fled to the Plane of Fire when the Sundering happened.

We have enough pointy-eared treehuggers already. Tsk, Dragons don't flee, they strategically relocate.

! Quantum computer array, quite powerful, Thulia says that like it is completely normal!
Gageteeer.

“ I deliberately induced a CTA trait by injecting him with my blood to meld my DNA with his.”

Ophelia stared. “You do realise how dangerous that was!?”

Great, they need a dragon doctor to examine Morgana and work with her human doctors to figure out a fix for this problem.
Thulia (and Morgana's) bodies are heavily customised, so not as much of a help as you think.


An hour or two before she wakes up, dang, that is fast.
Energisers burn up drugs quite fast.

Crud, Morgana has to suffer more mental issues, give her a break already.
But where's the fun in that?!

Wait, Icejack and Sister Secret's parents are in the Order, dang. They didn't rat out Morgana and Thulia's trip to Dunwich, who did?
No, they aren't, but they like to keep a very low profile. It's descibed more in Icejacks stories.



Let them have kittens, I say! Yes, more solutions now while Morgana works on permanent ones.
But Elrod would have kittens too...


Thursday, Dojo meeting room, late morning.

Ito looked thoughtful. “Well, if nothing else they seem to have grasped the lesson about using necessary force and violence, rather than taking things gently. That’s always one of the ones hardest to teach students, especially ones with ambitions to be heroes.”

Sometimes you have to kill to survive, so glad Thulia knows this. Ito, Ms. Dennon, Tolman, all there to talk about how the girls did, no, not homework for surviving an attack!

Ms. Dennon's comments sound like the students should be informed in the first week about the residents of Dunwich, the most durable Dunwich bunkers, and those in Dunwich who can help protect them until help arrives if attacked while in town. How about making a new rule for Whateley students: Always be prepared for combat even if not expecting it. More combat in the sims is needed for Morgana and Thulia, welp, they are about to learn surviving means more lessons and training. Paranoid enough after Sunday, they need to have a teacher with combat training with them whenever they leave campus from now on!
Trouble is, explaining the sort of things that are REALLY outside the school would likely traumatise the kids even more...

This story started out so nice, a special course on Portals and Gates for Dimension Traveling and Contacting Entities. The Orlun and his plans had to rear their ugly head, we knew he would strike sooner or later, but not this soon. The warnings from Nephandus, all the details they got wrong, I knew they would end up being wrecked, but not how much damage they would do before it ended.

I'm an evil dragon, I thought you realised that?

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21 Jan 2025 07:43 #4023 by Astrodragon
Cardiac arrest on an exemplar. That took some serious horsepower to get her started again.
I did say I was going to kill someone..

And the lack of details on the bodies comes back to bite them in the tail.
Indeed it has.

Ceri and her uncle - Morgana will need the support, but this is the sort of repeat visit neither wanted. I haven't followed the Belfry storylines, so the flowers feel a bit out of left field for me, but they probably know each other from the commonwealth meetings.

Morgana knows him from the escape class, Thulia from English for Dummies. And they have talked.

And Ophelia gets introduced to the madness that is Thalia's Gadgettering trait at work.
:) :) :)

Why do I get the feeling there will be a notebook (or a binder) in the restricted section containing lab notes after those two graduate.
Its in the 'Burn before REading' section :)

I wonder what sort of familiar would be a good match for Morgana. Why can I see petshop being dragged into the mix to help create one to Thalia's specs?
In view of the type she needs, its likely to come from the plane of fire. There are some suggestions I'm considering.

Toison escorting Thulia back to Whitman. Nice to see she's nearby if all hell breaks loose.

Adding a PFG for Thulia to Laura's list of projects. Not a bad idea, though I hope the not-a-smurf isn't getting more overloaded. I suspect the offer of a magical item was more than just a 'thank you'. (Why am I suspecting it'll be a 'looks normal' talisman?) I'm wondering if dragons have a need to balance karma as part of their genetic makeup.

Not really, but they do take oaths and debts seriously, its a big thing in their culture.


I realize only so much can fit into a story, but I'm wondering if we'll get to see the takedown of the order of red ba'al in a later story.
You will. With Tactical Volcanoes.
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21 Jan 2025 14:31 #4024 by mhalpern
considering Morgana will eventually be able to fly, her familiar should too, so a Phoenix?

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21 Jan 2025 14:54 #4025 by Astrodragon

considering Morgana will eventually be able to fly, her familiar should too, so a Phoenix?

certainly a flying familiar. Think of the fun it would have at whateley!

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21 Jan 2025 14:56 #4026 by mhalpern

considering Morgana will eventually be able to fly, her familiar should too, so a Phoenix?

certainly a flying familiar. Think of the fun it would have at whateley!

lots of students to chase for attention.

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21 Jan 2025 15:02 #4027 by Astrodragon

considering Morgana will eventually be able to fly, her familiar should too, so a Phoenix?

certainly a flying familiar. Think of the fun it would have at whateley!

lots of students to chase for attention.

She'd probably need a heated terrarium in her room to keep it comfortably warm at night

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21 Jan 2025 17:21 #4028 by mhalpern

considering Morgana will eventually be able to fly, her familiar should too, so a Phoenix?

certainly a flying familiar. Think of the fun it would have at whateley!

lots of students to chase for attention.

She'd probably need a heated terrarium in her room to keep it comfortably warm at night

that's probably not hard to get, even if it has to be warmer than standard.

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21 Jan 2025 23:45 #4029 by cprime
The question is 'Are the tactical volcanoes magically active?' If they are and they stick around, that might just be one more element towards having a sustainable magical ecosystem (I half wonder what the world tree version for earth, metal and water might be).

As far as familiars go, a Jednorog would be an interesting choice, but I see its size (and probably its aggressiveness) being problematic. Familiars need to be able to stay near their witch or wizard, not in a stable half way across the campus.

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22 Jan 2025 00:08 #4030 by mhalpern

The question is 'Are the tactical volcanoes magically active?' If they are and they stick around, that might just be one more element towards having a sustainable magical ecosystem (I half wonder what the world tree version for earth, metal and water might be).

As far as familiars go, a Jednorog would be an interesting choice, but I see its size (and probably its aggressiveness) being problematic. Familiars need to be able to stay near their witch or wizard, not in a stable half way across the campus.

probably temporarily magically active,

though it does seem the Dragons approved of Whateley's Find Out protocol, even if they requested their special alteration. maybe this will accelerate integration between the respective schools. still want to see that Plane of Fire Academy airball team...

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