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Valentine Crush by Domoviye

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18 Feb 2025 01:00 #4104 by DanZilla
Valentine Crush can be found in the Gen 2 section or by using the link below... please remember our authors are doing this for the response they get... leave comments where you can for appreciated stories.

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18 Feb 2025 02:08 #4105 by mhalpern
ouch...

Micro scenes and bad ideas are freely adoptable
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18 Feb 2025 02:09 #4106 by Dan Formerly Domoviye
Yeah I wasn't very kind in this story.
Blame Rose she gave me the idea, and I had room for a side character with Forte.
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18 Feb 2025 06:47 #4107 by Rosalie Redd
Moi? Suggest sadistic things? No...
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19 Feb 2025 03:41 #4110 by Dreamer
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Below is a stream of conscious commentary I type up as I read the story. There will be details from the story included in it. If you have not read the story yet and don't wish to have details of it spoiled, read no further.

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19 Feb 2025 04:52 #4111 by DanZilla


Assuming the "To Be Continued" will be something that isn't a Valentine Crush Part 2.

That was a goof on my part... I add that to the end and I copied it from a story that was a part 1... when I do that I change it to "The End" if necessary... I missed doing that in this case.

I'll change it.
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20 Feb 2025 04:00 #4112 by Dan Formerly Domoviye
Thanks for the comments as always Dreamer.
Sorry about this one being pretty nasty. I promise the upcoming Forte/Fanak story (coming in March) is pretty happy with only a few really sad scenes.
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20 Feb 2025 18:46 #4113 by Astrodragon

I didn't expect her to escape after she found out she was being railroaded, nor to meet up with Forte and her crew. Cutie Pie might have something to say about letting Jackson stay at Forte's hideout with them.

I hope the next part of this story of Jackson and how she is adapting to life on the run and as a female will be soon. I can't wait to read more and hope things start to turn around for her.

It will be a few stories before I get back to Jackson. I need to catch Forte and Fanak up to February. But they are my main focus right now for Whateley. So fairly soon there will be a story focusing on Book and Jackson, which shouldn't have any body horror. [/spoiler][/quote]

This is, of course, no body horror by Domovie standards...
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20 Feb 2025 18:47 #4114 by Dan Formerly Domoviye
I have other crap to throw their way.
I didn't say it would be a nice story after all.

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