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Perils of Penelope (Part 2) - Eight Crazy Nights by Wasamon

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20 May 2025 00:16 #4304 by DanZilla
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Perils of Penelope (Part 2) - Eight Crazy Nights
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20 May 2025 03:55 #4305 by mhalpern
A rager Siren, there are so many ways this can go wrong, as sonic weapons are a frequent rage trigger.


the popcorn will be ready...

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20 May 2025 04:16 #4306 by cprime
Been a bit since I did one of these. Penny is always a fun character.

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Quite the romp of an adventure, and Penny lived up to the chaos that is her new reality. Thanks for the dose of fun.
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20 May 2025 04:49 #4307 by null0trooper

Been a bit since I did one of these. Penny is always a fun character.

Yeah, we need more of her, I think.

Hopefully Melissa isn't a Hawthorne candidate.

Would you believe that question was already answered?

"No Heroes" Part 7: After the rain link .

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20 May 2025 05:56 #4308 by Dreamer
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20 May 2025 20:01 #4309 by mhalpern
thinking about it love bombing duty seems like the perfect thing for Erica to outsource to Wondercute 2.0, err i mean Wondercute seems like a group she'd get along with

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21 May 2025 13:14 #4311 by Benoftheflies
Wilder and Zapper are from New Orleans, or a similar southern Louisiana town close by. You probably got that mixed up with Ratel

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21 May 2025 14:37 #4312 by null0trooper

Wilder and Zapper are from New Orleans, or a similar southern Louisiana town close by. You probably got that mixed up with Ratel

Wilder's from Calcasieu Parish, outside of Lake Charles, and about 190 miles west of New Orleans. Both Wilder and Zapper are on Ratel's combat training team, along with Karkadann.

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22 May 2025 17:33 #4313 by Benoftheflies
I really like this story. Penny and Erica's family is really cool to me. I also like how this pushes the meta narrative a bit, like we have Evo Rocks, which seems to be the pro mutant faction. It definitely has multiple branches, but how much of the group is in line with the mutant supremacy ideology? like most members would just be fine with equal rights and better treatment, I imagine. Either way, the more 'magneto and the dark brotherhood' version of ER, which advocates for more mutants, less humans, regardless of the costs, that seems to be a strong undercurrent and like a connected meta plot.

Also, I like Groundpounder. like he supports ER and likes their ideology, but is pragmatic enough to take care of himself first.

Finally, I really like sirens, so hearing a bit about their testing process and background is neat. Thank you for the story!

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26 May 2025 00:06 #4316 by Wasamon
One week follow-up time!

Going slightly backwards, last comment first

EvoRocks has been around since Gen1, but they've always felt more grassroots and cellular than the organized Humanity First hierarchy (speaking as organizations, since individually, H1 tends to be pretty disorganized). And whereas H1 spinoffs like Rights of Man or the Two Yorks Movement are definitely in communication with each other and whoever is dictating greater political strategy, the many little cells of EvoRocks are all over the place beyond the simple tenet of "help mutants." No surprise that there are groups within groups with darker motivations, and that it's fairly easy for the left hand not to know what the right hand is doing.

FWIW, the Advent (and Boggart) are first introduced in "The Quantum Suicides," in which he attempts to kidnap Chessa.

Also, Groundpounder's pragmatic, and he's well aware of what happens if you mess with Whateley. Push comes to shove, he knows who to punch.

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Going on up...
Wilder's dad lived in Calcasieu Parish, but that is very much past tense. Grandma's house is in Thibodaux, LA, while Zapper lives in Metairie. Those are both part of the greater NOLA metro area.

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I brought Sookie and Sarabine back partly because I didn't feel good about leaving them hanging after their initial (brief) appearance, but also because they made a good initial fix for dealing with Melissa. They're understanding, supportive, and get where she's coming from, a lot more than most. How well this situation weathers their first term at school remains to be seen, but they're all going to be in therapy in any case.

(FWIW, Sookie and Sarabine's first appearance was in the Flag Men segment of "Meanwhile in Castle Groenwald". I don't begrudge anyone missing that particular connection.)

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The Siren package is more a syndrome than a trait, since it's really about the theme (sound) and how different skills relate to it. So it can have a lot of different expressions, as we saw in Gen 1. Realistically, if that is the word, any form of PK, PSI, empathy, telepathy, and/or several possible exemplar effects could all be contained within a siren package--or not, as the case may be.

So Melissa is (potentially) a PDP/PK supergirl with a siren package, but none of her abilities are active at the same time and all require different triggers. Depression's probably her weakest expression in part because it's all about how powerless and out of control she feels. It's also the most common form of expression. It took a lot to get her angry enough to unlock the PK supergirl suite in addition to the shouts, and we can't expect that to happen too often. Unlike a standard Rager stereotype, she does not get angry easily; it's just that she feels everything more strongly.

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And, as mentioned in the channel, Ratel has a full set of Cuckoo Channel knock-out gas canisters for various reasons. First, powers testing. Her spirit enables her to self-inoculate against a wide variety of venoms and poisons (cf. "Ratel and Hum"), and it's both worth it to test the limits and also provide her with preemptive immunity. Second, for her independent study course, she has to review non-lethal approaches and de-escalation tactics with her academic advisor, Officer Canterbury of Whateley Security, which is why she's so familiar with current 'reasonable force' standards and how best to apply Cuckoo Channel's product.
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29 May 2025 13:09 #4326 by Benoftheflies
I have had an idea for a course on 'practical uses of poisons', like an advanced biology course tied in with basic magic herbology, and first aid as a prerequisite. Ratel would be the perfect guinea pig! "If I survive this poison, I reserve the right to pummel you in an arena fight"

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