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Best of Show (Part 2) by Wasamon

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11 Nov 2025 01:00 #4537 by DanZilla
Best of Show (Part 2) can be found in the Gen 2 section or by using the link below... please remember our authors are doing this for the response they get... leave comments where you can for appreciated stories.

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11 Nov 2025 04:20 #4538 by Dreamer
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Below is a stream-of-consciousness commentary I typed up as I read the story. Details from the story will be included. If you have not read the story yet and don't wish to have details spoiled, read no further.

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11 Nov 2025 17:16 - 11 Nov 2025 17:17 #4539 by mhalpern
the civilian areas of Kardonia definitely are themed to belong in places like the Wonka Factory and the like...
Definitely not a bad way to draw immigration. Or at least tourism

Micro scenes and bad ideas are freely adoptable
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12 Nov 2025 01:45 #4540 by cprime
Cookie (and Donut) are back. Let's see what comes of Queen Jobe's interest.
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Daniel and Roxie have both had rough spots in their life, and there's something satisfying about seeing them have a dose of happiness. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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17 Nov 2025 06:56 #4547 by Wasamon
OK, time for some comment-on-commentary!

First, please recall that Cookie is officially gender-neuter, with the pronouns it/they/them/pup.

Pup's favorite TV shows are Curious George (funny monkey show), Clifford and Friends (big red dog show), and Nook & Cranny (naughty varmint show). This last one was first introduced in Penelope 2: Eight Crazy Nights and is a callback to a conversation on the main Discord channel in December of 2023.

For Belphoebe, I'm not sure why she never actually graduated, tho if I were pressed to decide, it'd probably be a combination of boredom, the rest of Jobe's polycule graduating, and the school not granting her course credits for classes she remembers taking via memories from the progenitor. It just seemed like the sort of situation she'd have going on.

It's a truism by this point that Jobe Ann Wilkins only pays attention to things (or parts of things) that interest her, or else are currently bothering her. Incidental details of people vaguely connected to a mad scientist who made the fearsome critters she's really interested in? Barely a passing glance.

Jobe's not exactly worried about the sexual addiction part. She's fairly certain that's not in there. She's just not 100% sure what IS still in there that might surface, or how it might affect someone who wasn't already largely grown up when they were changed.

Moving down a bit...

The park near the old town is pretty much the former port's lagoon, which used to be large enough to handle multiple expensive yachts moving in and out at the same time, so if you fill all that in and smooth it out, you end up with quite a wide space to designate a park.

Karedonian money is one of those worldbuilding things that was fun to mess with. Note that the paper money features Her Highness's likeness and interests (mythical and chimerical monstrosities), and is more likely to be seen and used by foreigners. Whereas the coinage, favored in the old town, has the likeness of His Highness with more technical imagery.

TBH, Karedonia's set up from the start to have a broad range of sub-cultural variation, not all of which would be happy with the rest. It's been fun to explore the parts of the island that are not beachside villain's paradise.

oops, it's Reynaldo, not Reymundo. Forgot to check for standardization.

"How many types of the French language are there?" That is a bucket of worms, just dealing with continental France (short answer: three major dialect spectra, the southern of which is counted as a separate language as it blends into Catalan going towards Barcelona, plus Quebecois, plus the island creoles...). The French Reynaldo was using is basically me noticing that Haitien, Mauritien, and Seychelloise creoles all have about the same manner of saying "Nice to meet you", but it's nothing like the standard French way of saying it.

That Santa statue isn't actually that weird, when you look into the various Caribbean island Christmas traditions. Well, until the horns and claws get mentioned, at least.

Roxie's origin story takes place toward the end of 2008, so it probably won't intersect with G1 continuity anytime in the foreseeable future. Which makes that a good time and place to stick it, lol

Finally, it should be noted that my family vacation to Vancouver last August appears to have had a massive influence on how I'm approaching parts of the worldbuilding and scene-setting, as well as my summer reading manga, "Dungeon Best Friends" (it's adorable; check it out)
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