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Sprite 2: I Think I'm A Clone Now (Part 3) by Amethyst

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09 Dec 2025 01:03 #4581 by DanZilla
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Sprite 2: I Think I'm A Clone Now (Part 3)
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09 Dec 2025 04:34 #4582 by Dreamer
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09 Dec 2025 05:30 - 09 Dec 2025 05:30 #4583 by Dan Formerly Domoviye
Just two quick comments here Dreamer.

WIth Rose Blossom, it's no real secret that she and Tink will meet again in Gen1. The secret is, what happens to Tink. The only thing I told AMethyst is that Rose Blossom will not say if Tink is alive or dead.

With Emiko and her sister... Well I will say I'm not planning any big Christmas stories for Helsing, Shisa and Pastel. So Emiko is going to have my FULL attention for Christmas in gen2 Whatelely.
She's gonna have so much fun!
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09 Dec 2025 06:22 #4584 by Amethyst

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Thanks, as always, for your comments Dreamer, we all look forward to them whenever we post a story.

Aww, all dressed up and at a party with Shannon, and Vanessa feels nothing but emptiness. Halloween is just meh now; taking that away from someone in their early teens is a crime. Shannon is only there for Vanessa's sake. Vanessa just wanted to give them both back a slice of their childhood. Sticking to a small group at parties, ah, there is something I remember.

Yeah, it sucks that Vanessa has had her childhood ripped away so thoroughly, her and Shannon both. You can't blame her for wishing she could get some of it back, so it's a shame she wasn't feeling it, but I feel that it makes her more real as a somewhat tragic character.

I hope some justice for the bigotry of his parents playing a part in Vanessa's fate happens.

It would be nice, wouldn't it? Not only are they bigots, but they were truly horrible parents too and have likely scarred Vanessa for life, even without what Blythe did. Well, people like them sadly tend to get away with things for far too long, especially when they have money to back them up. Someday, though, they will likely piss off the wrong person.

Ah, good, empath feedback can be scary to see in action. Ah, just taking the candy, now that is what Halloween is supposed to be about.

Yup, that feedback from all the euphoric people was affecting Shannon pretty badly. And Vanessa really is trying to embrace Halloween, even if she's not really feeling it. She wanted them to have some fun, so she's determined to make it happen one way or another.

The sooner Shannon is away from the party goers that have been messed up by the spiked punch, the better. Breasts jokes about the chocolate incident, Vanessa, you have a twisted sense of humor. Hehe, okay, the scheme sounds fun now, act like a pirate since it's her costume, and ham it up as they loot the candy and leave.

Vanessa does have a somewhat interesting, if self-deprecating sense of humor, but I think this is the first time I've gotten to show her love of mischief as well. It's all in good fun, and she really doesn't want to hurt anyone or ruin the party for them, so she's being careful about it. She really enjoyed hamming it up, and the candy is a sweet bonus.

Gah! Don't give Domo ideas for what to do with Tink! Oh god, the B-movie level lines and cheese, make it stop before I hurt my stomach laughing.

You totally just gave Domo ideas with that comment :)
And yeah I really wanted to have some fun with the Halloween party, while keeping Vanessa in character, so I had a lot of fun writing that scene. I'm glad you got some laughs out of it :D

Doodled in a Sharpie. *facepalms* You definitely have some of the spirit of Tink in you, Vanessa.


Yup, she was in a mischievous mood on Halloween. She was hoping to save the prank for later, but it helped her to distract Shannon, and she's trying to look out for him. She hates the idea of failing a friend again, which is why she came to Shannon's defense to keep hm from doing something he might regret later as well.

The Fairies have been wanting to meet Vanessa, oh boy. Good friend, Gwen, is she talking about Absinthe? Oof, Fey was already a beauty at 15; now, as an adult, she takes the breath away of anyone who sees her. Don't tell me all Fae creatures like fairies and such will react this way to Fey.

Yup, she was totally talking about Absinthe. Also yes on the Fae creatures, ad least any who are Sidhe adjacent are likely to have this kind of reaction with Nikki, especially when meeting her for the first time, and Vanessa's Fairy instincts are going crazy while she's in The Grove.

Yeah, if anyone knows about mistakes and making things right, it is Nikki. A TA on paper and learning a teleportation spell to commute and avoid the MCO sounds great. All that, and you still are hesitating. You need a big push here, Vanessa. Shoot, we all need a friend to say what Becky is saying to Vanessa when a hard decision comes up. Feel strangely at home and content in the Grove, yes, follow those feelings..

Yup, there are so many reasons that Nikki is a good mentor for Vanessa to have. Becky as well, and she's a good friend to give Vanessa the push she needed.

That is where the fairy village is in The Grove. Roughly 60 Fairies in total, dang. And throwing a party for Vanessa. Vanessa's thoughts show to me she has some form of anxiety disorder, and a severe one at that..

That is a lot of Fairies, and she's one of them, so they're essentially welcoming her home. Vanessa does have some serious anxiety issues that she tries not to show, partly because of her parents and partly PTSD from what Blythe put her through. Honestly, she has a lot of healing to do.

Vanessa is thinking of herself as a girl, and it doesn't feel wrong; another thing she needs to tell Bellows about.

Yeah, this is really where she starts thinking of herself as Venessa, it's a big realization for her, and she really needs to talk to someone about this kind of stuff, but she resents Bellows and isn't willing to look like she's given in, it's something we'll see more of soon.

Well, that is one way to mark her as a member of their clan. Becky's name among them is Fire-Starter; I forget if that is her codename. Fairy instincts are overwhelming Vanessa right now, eep. Fear of betraying them because of what happened with Blythe; please, open up to Bellows about these worries already, and let him help..

I wanted to give Vanessa a sort of physical reminder that she belongs somewhere, and when I was trying to come up with a welcoming/coming of age ceremony, it just seemed to fit. Becky's codename is FairyFire, but Vanessa finds it hilarious that the Fairies call her that. She's just too resentful of Bellows to talk to him, not to mention stubborn, but soon we may see her find someone she is comfortable talking with.

Flower nectar that is very alcoholic sounds right to me. Wakes up in late afternoon or early evening; got to watch that drinking in the future. Gah! Waking up to that, I wouldn't mind Rhissara, but I'm sure Vanessa will mind the male Fairy..

Yeah, there's going to be a lot for her to think about after waking up like that. At least Nikki is being cool about things and saying that what happens in The Grove stays there. Not all mentors would be so understanding.

Oh no, Vanessa is doomed with Becky, Leanna, and Danielle plotting about her role in the Elemental Dance Club. Dang, Leanna, Marie, and even Danielle are drawn to look when Nikki shows up. Introductions by Becky, this meeting was planned, you have grown sneakier, Nikki.

Poor Vanessa, now she's going to be dragged into the spotlight. Sisters, am I right? Yeah, Nikki totally planned this as a way of meeting and talking about Vanessa's adoptive mother about some things, and not just changing her work study.

Crud, Shannon isn't in the Crystal Hall, and Vanessa is beating herself up about it, worried he is in trouble. Vanessa, you can't put everything on your shoulders like this. No, you didn't fail him like Blythe; he told you to go be with your family. In such a panic, she won't eat until she can find Shannon and eat dinner with him. At the main gate, no one is there, but the letter Shannon's mother is crumpled up on the ground. She either stood him up or said something that made him regret ever wishing to reconnect with his mother.

PK flight like a bullet to Emerson to try and find Shannon. Shannon was in the foyer and pissed, crap. Weaponeer messed with Shannon and Weaponeer is clutching at his throat. Shannon is trying to TK choke him to death! Vanessa wonders if she should stop Shannon from doing something he will regret. Shannon let Weaponeer go and walked past them like he didn't care, crap.

Shannon and Vanessa both have a heap of issues to deal with, and Vanessa worries a lot about betraying or failing the few friends she's allowed herself to make. More so with Shannon because they've both had pretty shitty lives until now and he needs a friend who will stick by him, and maybe even act as his conscience once in a while. She wants to do for him what nobody ever did for her as Aiden and be the friend he needs.

You are a far better friend than you realize, Vanessa.

Yes. Yes she is, not that she'll let herself see that, At least, not yet,
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09 Dec 2025 06:23 #4585 by Amethyst

Just two quick comments here Dreamer.

WIth Rose Blossom, it's no real secret that she and Tink will meet again in Gen1. The secret is, what happens to Tink. The only thing I told AMethyst is that Rose Blossom will not say if Tink is alive or dead.

With Emiko and her sister... Well I will say I'm not planning any big Christmas stories for Helsing, Shisa and Pastel. So Emiko is going to have my FULL attention for Christmas in gen2 Whatelely.
She's gonna have so much fun!

Yup, Christmas in Calgary is going to be so much fun :D
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