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A Dragon's Tail (Part 2)

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29 Aug 2023 00:00 #3010 by DanZilla
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A Dragons Tail (Part 2) can be found in the Gen 2 section or by using the link below... and please remember our authors are doing this for the response they get... please leave comments where you can for appreciated stories or if you have anything to bring to the conversation of written word and readers.


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29 Aug 2023 03:39 #3011 by Dreamer
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29 Aug 2023 05:04 #3012 by null0trooper

Cherry Bomb's stall

Twitch talking to a guy, and an ogre with dayglow hair arguing with Cherry about some of her wares, oh no. The boy with Twitch just saved the day by talking the ogre down.

Orc, actually. He's got too much pizazz to be just an ogre!

Peter! *smacks him upside the head* No staring down girls' shirts like that!

The odd thing was that he's one of the very few guys in the Workshop who doesn't. To be fair to the orc, when you're that tall you're always looking down.


I hope you get to feeling better!

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29 Aug 2023 08:15 - 29 Aug 2023 08:16 #3013 by Dan Formerly Domoviye

Helsing's Table
If the students knew about the kind of entities in, around, and near Whateley Academy they would be buying up her spirit stuff like hotcakes. Huh, she actually sold a few things. Shisa sleeping at the table, but actually awake and alert, sneaky, will Pastel call her out? Oh, Petshop's petting zoo is not too far away, Shisa, give the girl a break for one day. Gah! Eating them gives Shisa horrible gas, and poor Nyx is her roommate. Emiko is not into weapons and when did she get a boyfriend, trying to remember if it was in a previous story that was revealed, stupid head cold. Someone who uses weapons, but only in classes, a guy with common sense, no wonder Emiko likes him. Shisa, don't do it!

Great commentary as always.
Now for my two cents.
Not all of Petshops rainbow abominations give Shisa gas. With her healing factor she can easily handle most of them. But when she reacts badly, it's really bad, usually for those around her.
And Emiko's boyfriend has not been revealed yet. That's why he remains nameless. It will take a bit of time before she starts dating, and because of how nice and accepting she is, there will actually be a few guys that it could be.
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29 Aug 2023 10:41 #3014 by mhalpern
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Magic Gadgeteer... some are going to consider what she can do cheating, probably going to spend some of those "free" periods with Caitlin as a supervisor, love that Imp is her advisor.


I wonder how heavy Thulia's arrows have to be to really get the full force from the bow, a bow is a spring, a spring can only move so fast, if she can use arrows that are mostly steel, rather than something like tungsten or DU, not only would they be cheaper but easier to work with when making "trick arrows"

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29 Aug 2023 12:05 #3015 by Astrodragon
Dreamer, as always thanks for the comments. A few comments on the comments...



Room 219, I wonder who she will share it with. Nefertiti Copeland, aka Copacetic. A thumbprint lock to the door is a simple lock to Thulia, just how complex is she used to? Smart move checking the luggage, she is right about some of the students at Whateley. Good, Thulia is getting along with her roommate. Meet and greet with the girls downstairs, I hope none of them have any experience with similar beings to Thulia.

A lot more to come on Thulia, the cottage and her roomie, but I didn't want another huge data dump in this story, and some things will only evolve over time


Dragged to the Crystal Hall for breakfast by Erica and Cally, Thulia has to suffer the pain of Power Testing today. Start classes on Monday, ouch, only a weekend to relax. Wah, light breakfast because testing right after it, just isn't right.

It's a cruel and unusual treatment for a dragon!


Wait, that is the purpose of the magic courses, but what if a student doesn't want to specialize? Just how big a difference is there between Earth's essence levels and that of the Plane of Fire?

What happens with magic specialisation starts to occur at the start of Y2, when they also break the students into basic and advanced streams, and students now show what methods and areas they are best at/most interested in. First year is generalised training to find that out.
Grimes had to hide a chuckle at the ways Thulia brightened up at the idea of learning more and different magic.
She is a girl who would have given Fey a run for her money in the race to see who would be TA in the magic class.

Thulia will be involved in running one of the specialised courses next term. You'll have to wait and see which one, but Grimes is a sneaky witch.




Wait, Gadgeteer and mage have classes on Saturday, yikes. Paper for her classes, I hope she can keep her flames under control.

No, no formal classes, but there are some

One of the most important skills in costume design, too many heroes and villains have messed that up and regretted it, if they lived long enough. Ah, yes, the folly of only using a magic forcefield for protection. Mark 1 costume to test it out and what works best for the next itineration, smart idea. Crud, the costume isn't fireproof, that is a huge issue if you don't want to flash everyone again, Morgana.

The girls are working on the problem. It's a work in progress.

Shutterfly's Stall
Great idea, Morgana, having your mask outfitted with those protections, too many people overlook flash protection in masks. That quick and at a reasonable price, Shutterfly deserves more work coming her way.

It's a pretty standard request, the main thing Shutterfly has to do is customise the shape. It's nothing exotic like Phases mask

Non-lethal loads, always good to have more holdouts. *facepalms upon reading the name of Cherry's booth* Dang, she has all the good non-lethal loads, area taser would have come in handy in the Boston fight. 3,500 C pyrolant, good lord, that shouldn't be in the booth. Smoke bomb, glitter bomb, and flash-bang, those will be great in the combat final.

Those high-end pyrolant rounds are great for getting past soe defences, or destroying evidence...


Smith's Table
Sprite talks to Smith about making some things she needs due to his metalworking skills. Ouch, much harder than it first sounds due to the size of Sprite, the magic metals involved, and the magic Sprite wants to be imbued in them. Malefis aka Caro, I think after the ring incident she might not want to craft a magical item for a little while. Maybe ask Artificer?

More on this later

Okay, I understand why Shisa eats them, just so she doesn't have to look at them anymore. Thulia wishes to cast a small spell to check out Petshop's creations, why does a bad idea keep screaming in my head? She was checking them for magical potential, but why? Ah, because Morgana is going to need a familiar at some point, good enough.

Again, more on familiars later


Time to shop and they don't wear bras in the Plane of Fire, oh boy, Thulia is in for a painful experience being sized for one. Interesting tools of the trade that Thulia needs for magic. Good lord, that is going to be some of the most expensive ink in the world. I have to agree with Thulia, they need to change the colors of the school uniforms already. Under Armor, okay, that is definitely better than a bra.

It's also easier to get something that doesn't get in the way of her wings
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01 Sep 2023 01:18 #3016 by mhalpern
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Dreamer, as always thanks for the comments. A few comments on the comments...



Room 219, I wonder who she will share it with. Nefertiti Copeland, aka Copacetic. A thumbprint lock to the door is a simple lock to Thulia, just how complex is she used to? Smart move checking the luggage, she is right about some of the students at Whateley. Good, Thulia is getting along with her roommate. Meet and greet with the girls downstairs, I hope none of them have any experience with similar beings to Thulia.

A lot more to come on Thulia, the cottage and her roomie, but I didn't want another huge data dump in this story, and some things will only evolve over time


Dragged to the Crystal Hall for breakfast by Erica and Cally, Thulia has to suffer the pain of Power Testing today. Start classes on Monday, ouch, only a weekend to relax. Wah, light breakfast because testing right after it, just isn't right.

It's a cruel and unusual treatment for a dragon!


Wait, that is the purpose of the magic courses, but what if a student doesn't want to specialize? Just how big a difference is there between Earth's essence levels and that of the Plane of Fire?

What happens with magic specialisation starts to occur at the start of Y2, when they also break the students into basic and advanced streams, and students now show what methods and areas they are best at/most interested in. First year is generalised training to find that out.
Grimes had to hide a chuckle at the ways Thulia brightened up at the idea of learning more and different magic.
She is a girl who would have given Fey a run for her money in the race to see who would be TA in the magic class.

Thulia will be involved in running one of the specialised courses next term. You'll have to wait and see which one, but Grimes is a sneaky witch.




Wait, Gadgeteer and mage have classes on Saturday, yikes. Paper for her classes, I hope she can keep her flames under control.

No, no formal classes, but there are some

One of the most important skills in costume design, too many heroes and villains have messed that up and regretted it, if they lived long enough. Ah, yes, the folly of only using a magic forcefield for protection. Mark 1 costume to test it out and what works best for the next itineration, smart idea. Crud, the costume isn't fireproof, that is a huge issue if you don't want to flash everyone again, Morgana.

The girls are working on the problem. It's a work in progress.

Shutterfly's Stall
Great idea, Morgana, having your mask outfitted with those protections, too many people overlook flash protection in masks. That quick and at a reasonable price, Shutterfly deserves more work coming her way.

It's a pretty standard request, the main thing Shutterfly has to do is customise the shape. It's nothing exotic like Phases mask

Non-lethal loads, always good to have more holdouts. *facepalms upon reading the name of Cherry's booth* Dang, she has all the good non-lethal loads, area taser would have come in handy in the Boston fight. 3,500 C pyrolant, good lord, that shouldn't be in the booth. Smoke bomb, glitter bomb, and flash-bang, those will be great in the combat final.

Those high-end pyrolant rounds are great for getting past soe defences, or destroying evidence...


Smith's Table
Sprite talks to Smith about making some things she needs due to his metalworking skills. Ouch, much harder than it first sounds due to the size of Sprite, the magic metals involved, and the magic Sprite wants to be imbued in them. Malefis aka Caro, I think after the ring incident she might not want to craft a magical item for a little while. Maybe ask Artificer?

More on this later

Okay, I understand why Shisa eats them, just so she doesn't have to look at them anymore. Thulia wishes to cast a small spell to check out Petshop's creations, why does a bad idea keep screaming in my head? She was checking them for magical potential, but why? Ah, because Morgana is going to need a familiar at some point, good enough.

Again, more on familiars later


Time to shop and they don't wear bras in the Plane of Fire, oh boy, Thulia is in for a painful experience being sized for one. Interesting tools of the trade that Thulia needs for magic. Good lord, that is going to be some of the most expensive ink in the world. I have to agree with Thulia, they need to change the colors of the school uniforms already. Under Armor, okay, that is definitely better than a bra.

It's also easier to get something that doesn't get in the way of her wings

Wasn't it heavily implied in Fires over Pheonix prt 1 that Thulia would be involved in the class I am certain some students refer to as "Thinking with Portals"?

Micro scenes and bad ideas are freely adoptable

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01 Sep 2023 07:20 #3017 by Astrodragon
you'll have to wait and see.

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01 Sep 2023 20:52 #3018 by mhalpern
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you'll have to wait and see.

Fire over Phoenix part 1:

Magic Department, Summoning Room

Thulia had completed the work on her portal home in a few minutes. It was a task she was quite familiar with, and the semi-permanent portals set up for Whateley's use made it easy to finish quickly. The final task was just to place a small drop of her blood on the relevant symbols, and she stood back to give it a final inspection.

"You've had practice with portals, Thulia?"

She nodded to Ms. Grime's semi-question. "We use them a lot, of course with more essence available they are less of an energy problem."

Ms. Grimes nodded. "Even so. I may have to think about you helping with a course on them in the Spring term."

Thulia blushed slightly at the complement. "If that is your wish, I'd be happy to help."

"I'll have to check a few things out, but it's a definite possibility. However, you need to be going."


found it. Thulia basically volunteered when the subject came up.

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