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Cat and Mouse: Part 2 by Domoviye

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01 Mar 2022 01:05 #1395 by DanZilla
Cat and Mouse (Part 1) has been released... please read and leave comments

Cat And Mouse (Part 1)
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01 Mar 2022 04:09 #1396 by Dreamer
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01 Mar 2022 05:24 - 01 Mar 2022 05:24 #1397 by Dan Formerly Domoviye
Thanks Dreamer.
Before we get into my replies, I'd like to say something.

When coming up with Jeanette's mother and other characters, like Clint from E.R., I looked at several of the more ideological groups on both ends of the spectrum. The types who believe they're doing what's right and insist everyone must do the same, resorting to violence and demagoguery, as well as the ones who would disown family members for not walking in lockstep with them. It wasn't fun.

This research was also how I got the idea for Doug.
A Black blues musician, Darryl Davis has deradicalized over 200 KKK members, simply by going up and talking with them. They get to know him, realize that Black people aren't all bad, and begin questioning what they've been told. They haven't all been successful, but it's an impressive record for one guy.
So I brought in Doug who saw a chance to get Jeanette pointed in the right direction and ran with it.

Now for potential spoilers.
Warning: Spoiler!


Thanks as always for the fun comments, they're one of the reasons I enjoy writing here.

 
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02 Mar 2022 12:55 #1402 by Valentine
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Oddly, shortly before this was posted I found and replied to the Shisa thread.

An interesting start, another former H1! member goes to Whateley. 
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02 Mar 2022 14:15 #1403 by Dan Formerly Domoviye

Oddly, shortly before this was posted I found and replied to the Shisa thread.

An interesting start, another former H1! member goes to Whateley. 
 
I noticed that to. It seemed like a good sign.

Thanks.

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16 Mar 2022 23:20 #1489 by EnemyOfFun
I love it when background characters get fleshed out, especially when their stories are done as well as this one :)

Don't make me angry, you wouldn't like me when I'm angry :P
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17 Mar 2022 04:06 #1490 by Dan Formerly Domoviye
Thank you!
I'd always planned on writing her origin, after having Neo introduce her. I'm glad I finally got the chance.
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07 Mar 2023 01:01 #2685 by DanZilla
Cat and Mouse: Part 2 can be found in the Gen 2 section or by using the link below... and please remember our authors are doing this for the response they get... please leave comments where you can for appreciated stories or if you have anything to bring to the conversation of written word and readers.

whateley.academy/index.php/read/story/cat-and-mouse-part-2
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07 Mar 2023 01:05 #2686 by Dan Formerly Domoviye
It took way too long to come up with Part 2, despite having it all planned out since about 2016. But it's finally here, and the next Shisa story will come out relatively soon.

I hope you enjoy the trauma!
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07 Mar 2023 03:18 #2687 by Dreamer
SPOILER ALERT
Below is a stream of conscious commentary I type up as I read the story. There will be details from the story included in it. If you have not read the story yet and don't wish to have details of it spoiled, read no further.

Cat and Mouse Part 2 comments
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Thank You for the story comments appreciated and help me know they are being read and liked. :-) Note: My story comments can't nor are trying to replace reading the stories, simply my way of enjoying them and letting the authors know I enjoy them.
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07 Mar 2023 04:23 - 07 Mar 2023 04:44 #2688 by Dan Formerly Domoviye
Thank you for the comments, they were, as always a joy to read.

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Thanks again for your commentary. It's one of the big delights of the week.
Cheers
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