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Triptych by Null0trooper

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14 Jun 2022 00:00 #1927 by DanZilla
Triptych (Part 1): Solo Bransle for A Minor by Null0trooper can be found in the Gen 2 section or by using the link below... and please remember our authors are doing this for the response they get... please leave comments where you can for appreciated stories or if you have anything to bring to the conversation of written word and readers.

Triptych (Part 1): Solo Bransle for A Minor
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14 Jun 2022 02:31 #1928 by Dreamer
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Thank You for the story comments appreciated and help me know they are being read and liked. :-) Note: My story comments can't nor are trying to replace reading the stories, simply my way of enjoying them and letting the authors know I enjoy them.
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14 Jun 2022 05:30 #1930 by null0trooper

Below is a stream of conscious commentary I type up as I read the story. There will be details from the story included in it. If you have not read the story yet and don't wish to have details of it spoiled, read no further.

Once again, thank you for putting in this effort!
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It's always fun to see how people react to my characters and the situations they get to muddle through.
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16 Jun 2022 14:15 #1933 by Schol-R-LEA
"Lady Sally"? Interesting, but probably not the Lady Sally I know of. Might be named after that character though for all I know.

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16 Jun 2022 17:00 #1934 by null0trooper

"Lady Sally"? Interesting, but probably not the Lady Sally I know of. Might be named after that character though for all I know.

We've already met Dora and Minerva, soooo...

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16 Jun 2022 17:07 #1935 by Astrodragon

"Lady Sally"? Interesting, but probably not the Lady Sally I know of. Might be named after that character though for all I know.

We've already met Dora and Minerva, soooo...

Athena? :P

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16 Jun 2022 17:27 #1936 by null0trooper

"Lady Sally"? Interesting, but probably not the Lady Sally I know of. Might be named after that character though for all I know.

We've already met Dora and Minerva, soooo...

Athena? :P

One could say she ran a different kind of establishment.

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16 Jun 2022 17:32 #1937 by Astrodragon

"Lady Sally"? Interesting, but probably not the Lady Sally I know of. Might be named after that character though for all I know.

So, we have coconuts at Whateley now?

We've already met Dora and Minerva, soooo...

Athena? :P

One could say she ran a different kind of establishment.

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28 Jun 2022 00:00 #2006 by DanZilla
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Triptych, Part 2: Count Zero Concerto can be found in the Gen 2 section or by using the link below... and please remember our authors are doing this for the response they get... please leave comments where you can for appreciated stories or if you have anything to bring to the conversation of written word and readers.

whateley.academy/index.php/read/story/lasting-impressions
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28 Jun 2022 02:47 #2010 by Dreamer
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Triptych Part 2: Count Zero Concerto comments
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Thank You for the story comments appreciated and help me know they are being read and liked. :-) Note: My story comments can't nor are trying to replace reading the stories, simply my way of enjoying them and letting the authors know I enjoy them.
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28 Jun 2022 06:30 #2011 by null0trooper
Once again, thank you very much for taking your time to read this story and share your impressions!

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Of course, there's that tricky third act to get through before Benjamin and Colombine settle in at Whateley Academy.
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11 Jul 2022 23:59 #2045 by DanZilla
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Triptych, Part 3: Arabesque pour une Garrison Chinoise can be found in the Gen 2 section or by using the link below... and please remember our authors are doing this for the response they get... please leave comments where you can for appreciated stories or if you have anything to bring to the conversation of written word and readers.

whateley.academy/index.php/read/story/friends-in-low-places
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12 Jul 2022 02:03 #2048 by Dreamer
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Thank You for the story comments appreciated and help me know they are being read and liked. :-) Note: My story comments can't nor are trying to replace reading the stories, simply my way of enjoying them and letting the authors know I enjoy them.
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12 Jul 2022 06:53 - 12 Jul 2022 07:05 #2049 by null0trooper

Below is a stream of conscious commentary I type up as I read the story. There will be details from the story included in it. If you have not read the story yet and don't wish to have details of it spoiled, read no further.

Thank you for spending your time on our little crew from the Atoll of Broken Toys!


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Once again, thank you! It's difficult to picture how some elements will land with readers, so feedback like this is invaluable.
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12 Jul 2022 07:29 #2050 by null0trooper

Just how many girls does Benjamin have around the world including Victoria now?

I think Erika Abendritter would choke on the idea, but at least a dozen or so women have his contact information. None of them are safe to cross, but I hope that those you've met so far each have had their own voices.

Looking ahead... No, I wouldn't cross them either.
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