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No Good Deed by Domoviye

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07 Feb 2023 01:00 #2625 by DanZilla
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07 Feb 2023 02:01 #2626 by Dreamer
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Below is a stream of conscious commentary I type up as I read the story. There will be details from the story included in it. If you have not read the story yet and don't wish to have details of it spoiled, read no further.

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07 Feb 2023 02:09 #2627 by Naldru
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My first thought was that since they were dealing with a green goblin, what are the chances that Spiderman will stop by?
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07 Feb 2023 02:29 - 07 Feb 2023 03:50 #2629 by Dan Formerly Domoviye
Thank you for the summary. Awesome as always.
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Thanks again.
I hope you enjoy For Those Who Fell just as much.
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07 Feb 2023 02:49 #2631 by Dan Formerly Domoviye

My first thought was that since they were dealing with a green goblin, what are the chances that Spiderman will stop by?
About ten seconds after writing that sentence, I immediately thought of OG Green Goblin.
Decided it was too fun to change.

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07 Feb 2023 04:55 #2633 by Naldru
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My first thought was that since they were dealing with a green goblin, what are the chances that Spiderman will stop by?
About ten seconds after writing that sentence, I immediately thought of OG Green Goblin.
Decided it was too fun to change.
Is OG "old school"?

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07 Feb 2023 04:56 #2634 by Dan Formerly Domoviye
OG: Original.
It can be both.
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07 Feb 2023 05:12 - 07 Feb 2023 05:12 #2635 by Rosalie Redd
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07 Feb 2023 05:20 #2636 by Naldru
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I found your example amusing. In the USA, potato chips originally referred to what Americans now call "French Fries", following the British practice. A chef was annoyed at a customer who complained that his chips weren't sliced thin enough. Even after he cut them thinner, the customer still complained. So the chef sliced the chips paper thin, and was amazed when the customers loved them. Since the restaurant was in Saratoga, New York (popular for harness racing and medicinal waters), they were called Saratoga Chips. So that bag of chips is definitely not the original Potato Chips.

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