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Horse Play by E. E. Nalley

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21 Mar 2023 00:00 #2708 by DanZilla
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21 Mar 2023 04:25 - 12 Apr 2023 15:55 #2713 by Dreamer
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21 Mar 2023 05:06 #2715 by E. E. Nalley

How did he afford all that as a serviceman?

They say, 'write what you know'. I know exactly what this china and the cherry wood hutch it's in look like. Lanie is based, however loosely, on me and my grandpa presented my grandma with that set. This is extremely fine china. If you're into china, you know the thinner it is, the higher the quality and expense. The coffee cups are probably 3/16ths of an inch thick. They're EXTREMELY delicate. And, as I wrote that passage, it hit me like a thunderbolt, "How DID he pay for that?"

I don't have an answer, and, as they've both passed, no one to ask to get first hand knowledge of. But it does make me wonder.

As for Lanie and Tansy's 'pet' names for each other. Part of it is teasing and good nature-ed and part of it is Tansy perhaps as a side effect of her telepathy is somewhat Aurally inclined. Or it could simply be like a lot of girls who were constantly ordered to be 'good' is turned on by vulgarity. But, either way, it's only playful times with her spouses.
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