I really liked the premise of the story. The manifestation was fun to read about. I cannot of course comment on the cultural aspects of Switzerland, so I will have to assume these are accurately written by somebody from the country.
I also appreciated that a mutant did arrive at Whateley in a problematic way that could not be blamed on the MCO. While they are the bogeyman of the Whateleyverse, this story shows that they need not be the only ones.
Sha must be a (very) high level gadgeteer, given how easily she solves some problems, and designed a safe room for herself while trapped in a container makig its slow way across the Atlantic ocean. I hope to read more of her stories, especially the ones where she runs into some of the problems that have been associated with creating a telepresence at Whateley (). Getting to see her interaction with the lab crew is a potential source of fascinating conflict. Quite a few egos in the tunnels after all