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Fire Over Phoenix (Part 3) by Astrodragon

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10 Oct 2023 00:00 - 10 Oct 2023 00:05 #3091 by DanZilla
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Fire Over Phoenix (Part 3)
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10 Oct 2023 01:45 #3094 by mhalpern
so a special order needed by the solstice... I'm guessing it is a gift.


Also Imp is sneaky, using the punishment to reward Thulia with various routes to use once she's cleared to fly over Whateley...

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10 Oct 2023 02:26 #3095 by Dreamer
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10 Oct 2023 09:11 #3097 by Astrodragon

so a special order needed by the solstice... I'm guessing it is a gift.
I couldn't possibly comment

Also Imp is sneaky, using the punishment to reward Thulia with various routes to use once she's cleared to fly over Whateley...


Thulia is cleared to fly at Whateley (more on that in A Tail of Two Dragons). She doesn't yet have the certification to fly outside
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10 Oct 2023 18:39 #3099 by mhalpern

so a special order needed by the solstice... I'm guessing it is a gift.
I couldn't possibly comment

Also Imp is sneaky, using the punishment to reward Thulia with various routes to use once she's cleared to fly over Whateley...


Thulia is cleared to fly at Whateley (more on that in A Tail of Two Dragons). She doesn't yet have the certification to fly outside

that's why I said over Whateley, I presumed she was allowed to fly in the arenas used for Flight class and Flight club.

I'm guessing there's special rules when someone has a larger flight form.

Micro scenes and bad ideas are freely adoptable

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10 Oct 2023 18:57 #3100 by Astrodragon

so a special order needed by the solstice... I'm guessing it is a gift.
I couldn't possibly comment

Also Imp is sneaky, using the punishment to reward Thulia with various routes to use once she's cleared to fly over Whateley...


Thulia is cleared to fly at Whateley (more on that in A Tail of Two Dragons). She doesn't yet have the certification to fly outside

that's why I said over Whateley, I presumed she was allowed to fly in the arenas used for Flight class and Flight club.

I'm guessing there's special rules when someone has a larger flight form.

Anyone who attends flight class can fly in the class area.
Passing a test in flying proficiency allows you to fly over the camous, apart from a few restricted areas.
Off campus requires passing the sort of training for a basic pilots license

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10 Oct 2023 20:01 #3101 by mhalpern

so a special order needed by the solstice... I'm guessing it is a gift.
I couldn't possibly comment

Also Imp is sneaky, using the punishment to reward Thulia with various routes to use once she's cleared to fly over Whateley...


Thulia is cleared to fly at Whateley (more on that in A Tail of Two Dragons). She doesn't yet have the certification to fly outside

that's why I said over Whateley, I presumed she was allowed to fly in the arenas used for Flight class and Flight club.

I'm guessing there's special rules when someone has a larger flight form.

Anyone who attends flight class can fly in the class area.
Passing a test in flying proficiency allows you to fly over the camous, apart from a few restricted areas.
Off campus requires passing the sort of training for a basic pilots license

and she hasn't passed the proficiency test yet... interesting

Micro scenes and bad ideas are freely adoptable

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10 Oct 2023 21:21 #3103 by null0trooper

Anyone who attends flight class can fly in the class area.
Passing a test in flying proficiency allows you to fly over the camous, apart from a few restricted areas.
Off campus requires passing the sort of training for a basic pilots license

and she hasn't passed the proficiency test yet... interesting

She hasn't been on Earth a full two weeks yet! She's lucky to have unpacked already.

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10 Oct 2023 21:46 #3104 by Astrodragon
She passed the proficincy test about 5 min after arriving at the flight area.
The suggestion it took her 2 weeks to unpack her snacks is a calumny :P

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10 Oct 2023 22:22 #3105 by DanZilla
Tut... her snacks were capable of unpacking themselves.

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10 Oct 2023 22:24 #3106 by Astrodragon

Tut... her snacks were capable of unpacking themselves.

A wizard did it

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11 Oct 2023 10:03 #3107 by Court
"subtlety wasn't really a common dragon trait"

Nonsense. You just have to define "subtle" properly. Turning everything into a plain of slag IS subtle. For a dragon.

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11 Oct 2023 12:52 #3108 by Astrodragon

"subtlety wasn't really a common dragon trait"

Nonsense. You just have to define "subtle" properly. Turning everything into a plain of slag IS subtle. For a dragon.

Perfectly subtle by the standards of a Workshop engineer

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11 Oct 2023 16:16 #3109 by mhalpern
subtlety can be taught, usually, though she isn't officially in a team yet, and hasn't taken team tactics. Though one particular group (and likely their successors of the same name in General 2) "cutely" manage to avoid that particular lesson...

still there's always "How not to be seen" Monty Python...

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12 Oct 2023 12:29 #3110 by mhalpern
so how long until Thulia gets her spell printing thing set up (it transposes stored information onto a physical media- in an exact and repeatable way, it's a printer) and how long until others who understand the implications of it find out?

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