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Turkey Day Tragedy (Part 1)
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Afternoon detention at Hawthorne Cottage for Tanya, aww. Ah, good, she knows what the Thornie kids are really like to those who are nice to them. Tanya, stop beating yourself up like this, taking more punishment time isn't helping you. That is some small room for a student, just how small is Koropokkur? Kei Sanui and she is 5 inches tall, whoa, isn't that an inch smaller than even Tink was? A size warper and she shrinks the food down to her size, don't tell me she hasn't learned how to turn it off and is stuck at that size thus why she is in Hawthorne.Part 1: The Start of a Very Long Weekend
--Tuesday, November 22, 2016
----Invictus
Respect for the Elders Day, nice to know such a holiday exists, I should have known it was in Japan. She is dating Primal, dang, the girl has gotten lucky with a nice guy. She has taken two extensions to keep working at Hawthorne for detention, Tanya, you have a martyr complex. Mid-autumn and in a mountainous region, that is the kind of cold that will slap you right awake.
On to the Crystal Hall for dinner, Shisa, Pastel, and Helsing there having a fun discussion. Beef bowl and roasted chicken, I would take multiples of those and the fries myself. Morgana and Erica, the two other big eaters, I pity any buffet that doesn't have Exemplar/Energizer specials with kids like them around. Please say those entities aren't still hanging around in the 2nd sub-basement restroom, I would think they would move out once Sara left. Oof, lying to her friends about the reason she is still on detention duty, Tanya, you need to forgive yourself.
Cally visiting her big brother in Boston, I hope they don't have an adventure, Erica going with her, uh oh. Nothing happening with Bianca, so still not safe to go home, rats. Morgana and Laura going to visit Laura's mom, I hope we get a short story of that and get to read about Laura's little sister some more. Eep, Morgana, and Thulia sound like they need to cool down their relationship literally to prevent any buildings from burning down.
Ouch, Sterling still having issues due to her power, so glad Tanya remembers her. Ooo, sounds like Sterling is starting to get better control over her power to have pulled that off in math class. Kinesio and Feedback can recall her when stoned, she needs to find better friends who can remember her without chemical enhancement.
Sera is in a foul mood, ack, English spelling in English class, even those of us who grew up with it have trouble sometimes, I feel for her. Darn, doesn't hear or notice Sterling at all. Yikes, the chat with Sylph, that godmother of Tanya's can be scary. Sera can't go as she is being tutored in English, aww. Ouch, to say that and not even realize Sterling is there, some powers are cruel to their wielders.
I hope Sterling can feel safe some place besides Whateley someday. Crap, what is wrong with Vic? He's not having long-term problems due to his time down in the tunnels, is he? So cute to see Tanya blushing as she tells Vic she cares. An incident involving her father, no, please not this, not after she has already lost her mother.
Whateley pulls off miracles every day just keeping a school full of mutants intact and the students alive, last-minute flights to get a student home to see their parent who might die is probably far from the hardest task they have had to pull off. Paul Nestor Estwine Memorial Hospital, that is some last name. Silver Sylph there and good thing she is the one getting that hug from Tanya.
An asshole with a kinetic blast tries forcing traffic to speed up and her father tried to talk the man down, only to get blasted for it. I hope the creep gets the maximum sentence, this is road rage on a whole new level. At least her aunt, uncle, and cousin are mostly okay. Not technically lethal, but not nice either, please let her father survive this. Good lord, if they didn't get him to the hospital the injuries could have killed him.
Ouch, broken right hand in the attack for Tanya's cousin. Tanya-Banana, must never let any of M3 find out about this nickname. Bree, now how and why did Tanya give her the nickname Stinky Cheese? Heh, Tanya can fly but not as fast as a plane can. Flight Club stories for Bree, yay.
Are we sure Hypatia isn't some sort of devisor-enhanced parrot? Bree is the first person to get Tanya's hair color right without being corrected. *winces* Having to see Uncle Charles and Aunt Mary after knowing the feeling Tanya has sensed from them, disapproving relatives of a marriage without a good reason sucks. Nice way to avoid seeing them from now, Bree I like, her parents I'm on the fence about. Mostest fruit pie, so Hostess didn't take off in their world it seems."I've got that, too," Tanya admitted. "Oh, my math teacher, Ms. Liebeck, has this parrot named Hypatia, and whenever she wants to make a point, she asks the bird to solve the equation instead of the student."
"And does it?"
"Every single darn time. It's embarrassing, really."
Raspberry and vanilla, a nice mix of flavors for a fruit pie. Homework over the holiday, at least Mr. Bergamont is kind to her and doesn't give Tanya any. Bruises all over her legs, yikes, I've been there when I was young, I wish there was a healer there to help out Bree and Tanya's father right now. Ratel training session, good grief, you scare me sometimes, Tanya.--Wednesday, November 23rd, 2016
That expression on Aunt Mary's face, nope, don't like her already. Keeping Tanya fed, oh god, what will he do to finance that during summer vacation? Max Mulligan's Blaster Buffet, sounds like a great place, after what Tanya is dealing with right now she needs something to cheer her up. Double puppy-dog eyes for the win.
Tanya's dad is stable, but no signs of him waking up any time soon, please let that be a good sign. A dedicated healer in as soon as possible, but holiday weekend, I hope Slyph can get one in ASAP. Keeping a wheelchair around when you are married to a superhero, her dad is smart. Seesh, I keep forgetting Slyph is 2 meters tall.
Whoa, this is the kind of place I would love to go to, a place with an arcade in America in 2016, now there is a rarity. Max Mulligan is the retired superhero Maximum Overdriver, plus he knows who Tanya is, but I love the good-natured teasing from people who are family to you. Bwahahaha, the bit with Bree and Tanya, they are such goofs when together. Oof, laws on mutants having to show their MID at buffets, that's rough.
Snozzberries, you couldn't resist a Willy Wonka reference, could you. Boy, she got a lot of food for Bree.
But that is 4 to 5 million calories, and she thinks that won't be enough, dang. No wonder her father says keeping Tanya fed alone is worth the tuition. Special ties and stuff, Tanya wants to fly her cousin up to the games area in the wheelchair. Okay, good limitations set by Slyph, and no big risks are being taken.four to five thousand kilo-calories
Ouch, making yourself giggle when you have a lot of bruises sucks. Now, this is the type of arcade I grew up with, the kind I miss seeing around. Max sure does know the kind of games people love to play. Ouch, having to say goodbye and be reminded of what she was being distracted from, Tanya is going to need counseling after this.
Not comfortable and hid their misgivings, at least her Aunt and Uncle did what was right for everyone right now. I like their team's by-laws of incorporation, more hero teams need them. Driving emergency vehicles for them on occasion makes him a hero in my book. Tanya doesn't think she can stay at home, we need a miracle, and soon.
Nice house. Tomorrow at 9 am, and all that time for Tanya to worry the worst will happen and the hospital will call, but it won't be good news. Love & Capes, this is a huge reference to the webcomic, I love it. I wish it had gotten a TV series like it did in the Whateley Academy Universe. 3 slices at once, good grief, Tanya, eat your food, don't inhale it.
Slyph has robes and PJs at their house, just what is going on? Ah, there for each other to hold and cry when the pain becomes too much because of the loss of Tanya's mom. Finally, Tanya lets it all out, she has been needing to do that since she saw her father.
Tanya is going to gorge on food once she is back at Whateley. Hehe, I loved that game of twisting the lyrics of songs in that way. Safety Lounge for MID holders, better than getting attacked by some bigot while you are waiting. Huh, a nice older gentleman and unique GSD.--Thursday, November 24th, Thanksgiving Day
It is nice he can get that sort of work."That is, it is a normal sort of job but not in a normal way. I am a professional extra for science fiction and fantasy movies or television series."
Ugh, that is just an excuse to not hire mutants."Against employing anyone with powers that would make someone else's job, or even an entire department, obsolete, yes. No gadgeteers, energizers, warpers, what have you, using their skills to wreck an industry."
Even small parts are paying parts. Plus you never know what minor background character someone or even the whole fandom might latch onto. Fake it to make it, heh, wise old man here.Billings Throckmore
Even the best actors, technicians, etc. in the world have had to learn this, failure is part of the learning process. Now if only some teachers and parents would realize this and not push their kids until they burn out."Don't try and then fail," he amended. "Failing is part of the process. You mess up, you learn, you get better."
40 hours, all of that in just 40 hours and it felt like a lot longer. Someone with a Healer rating in later that day, good, her father will recover. Dang, the cottage, any of the cottages, is that quiet, Tanya is right about how eerie it is. Ah, all at the Crystal Hall for a big dinner and movie night for Thanksgiving. Tanya, it doesn't matter how powerful you are, Mrs. Savage is one of the dorm mothers you don't argue with.
Gah! All that good Thanksgiving food and still over two weeks until the one in our world, you are making me hungry. Of course, Cookie knows how to behave when food is on the line. Jordain and Hardnose together, the freshman Whitman girls greeting Tanya. Sera and Pastel so far, Shisa had to go with Helsing to some family thing in Boston, interesting. Don't even joke about that, Pastel.
Boy who was a friend, good grief, Tanya, he is your boyfriend, be more brave and admit it to yourself. Please let it not be something supernatural that Vic picked up while in the tunnels that is messing him up right now. Not difficult to pick up new languages, more and more I wish I had even just the mental package of Exemplars. Arrgggh! Not this again, Sera wants to be Tanya's roommate and doesn't realize Sterling exist even when she is sitting at the same table, this sucks.
Great, Sera is feeling rejected by Tanya because of this, I wish there was a way to make her more resistant, even just a little, to Sterling's power. All the physical and emotional fatigue finally catching up to Tanya. What is going on!?! Did Sterling move out while she was gone, since no one remembered she was there did they just remove all of her stuff, or the worst possible scenario, did not having Tanya around to remember her result in Sterling's power going into overdrive and erasing her existence with only Tanya to remember her?
No one knows where Sterling is, Caro's look suggests she doesn't remember her. None of them knew who Sterling was, not even the RA or Mrs. Savage, what the heck is going on? Vic is there to help Tanya who is having a panic attack because of this mess. With some coaxing, Vic remembers Sterling a little. Great, even images of her like a picture on a phone comes out as a blur to Vic. It is a struggle for Vic to realize someone is even there. Where did Sterling go and why?
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She's got the perfect attitude and behaviour.
The entire story is great, from start to finish as well.
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Bree is pronounced like Brie, which is a French cheese that's not nearly as smelly as its reputation in America holds it to be.
Also, kcal (kilo-calorie) is the measurement that much of the world uses for food. The calorie that America uses is actually a large Calorie, equal to 1000 calories normally, so they're the same thing, different notations.
So no, Tanya does not ingest a million+ calories per meal. That would be excessive, even for Whateley.
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Ouch, Becca aka Sterling having to live like this, not seen, not even noticed by most people. Dang, Sera is that affected by Sterling's power, that is scary to have someone not notice you to that level. Faollass talking with Sera and does not even listen to others when they say Tanya has a roommate, good grief. Oh god, they both forgot they were even talking about Tanya's roommate, there has to be a way to get this power under control as living like this is a nightmare, imo.Tuesday, November 22nd, 2016
--Sterling
Shisa and Pastel having an ongoing insult competition and Shisa is definitely winning. With all those phone numbers and no one to talk to, they need to have all students get psychic shielding training. 100 random kids called, I wonder if any of them will call her back.
Rebecca Sawyer aka Becca, 14 years old, and enduring that for 2 months and being called horrible names by her own mother, that is sickening. Jealous of her own daughter due to her Exemplar figure and not being able to afford a proper bra for her, that is just stupid. Called that by the school, more names by her mother, her skin turns green, and her hair is shiny, metal silver.Thursday, May 19th, 2016
Great, Mom uses meds to calm down but still scowls at Becca. Her dad and Uncle Jimmy are talking about her, they are planning on killing her off and disposing of her body, they are monsters! House-cleaning! You are true monsters to talk about a fellow human like that simply because of an unusual appearance. Her father talked to her about this, they were going to exploit her looks before she became green, and they are beyond sickening.
*eyes turn red with rage* Her own brother Cal talking about her like that, this whole family except for Becca needs to be taken care of. Oh crud, her wishing they would leave her alone is what awoke the power in her that has made her life a nightmare even away from them. Now they are talking as if she doesn't exist, Cal is going to be trained to be a cop, and that is going to end horribly for some innocents I bet. Momma choked on her own vomit as she slept, is that really what happened to her? At least Becca got out of there.
No replies, and Sterling just does that most days until Tanya is back, they need to find a way to improve her living situation. Mr. Duschesne, the history teacher, at least remembers her some. A place where they are glad she came, oh no, not these idiots. Kinesio and Feedback aka Ernesto and Sam, the stoners. Oh, they have medically approved reasons for it, that makes a difference. *eyes bug out* Okay, Ernesto needs the drugs to help with the pain, that is bad. And Sam has a good reason too, that Echo spirit is more than a pain.Tuesday, November 22nd, 2016
Hanging out in this state and besides having Tanya to talk to it is the most social activity she can get, this is heartbreaking. Donuts from Daniel, they got the good snacks; strawberry with white chocolate sprinkles for Sterling, they do remember her. Even just a thought for her and she appreciates it, Isn't there something that Eldritch could make to help control her power until she learned how to control it better herself, something to help her out, as it hurts to watch her live like this.
The response to the visitor at the door, just how baked are they? Kinesio ignoring text from a cute Workshop girl, man, the pain must be really bad. Crud, Jamie is working on figuring out how to fix his Energizer trait and has done so before, but it didn't work out, no wonder Kinesio doesn't want to work with Jamie, anything to avoid the pain. She actually noticed Sterling, dang.
Oh crap, stay as far away from her as you can, Ernesto, or she might knock you out, abduct you, and try to "fix" you again. And I see why Sterling likes to hang out with these two, friends are hard to find for her and these two are some of the very few she has."You don't get it, Sam.; That Jamie?; You're seeing her on her good days.; Bad days, she dricks out like nothing you've ever seen, and ain't no one wants to hang around that sorta bullshit regularly.; She thinks she can 'fix me'..."; Fingers made the air quotes more definitive.; "And I ain't gonna say I'm not broken somewhere in there, but when she gets going... well, soon enough she can't stop to see that her idea's a bad one.; And that's when I... when people get hurt."
2 and a half weeks of no meaningful interaction with fellow humans, puppies, and kittens able to interact with her normally. Mountain Brook Mall and Becca is staying there now thanks to her uncontrolled power. Becca, life gave you a bad hand, you have to play the cards you were dealt and survive however you can. An outfit like that with a figure like hers and no one notices her, just how potent is this psychic ability of hers?Monday, June 6th, 2016
A mystery woman can notice Becca, Agent Serendipity, an interesting state department she works for. Oh, not the actual name of the place she works, she has a sense of humor.
So Becca's power isn't normal, oh boy. Ack! Becca saw the foods they fry at the food court, how does she not have nightmares of that? Huh, so this is how Sterling got her codename."The no-see-um thing.; It's taking a lot of focus just to stay focused on you, and it doesn't quite feel like the usual psi."
So much pink, I think Miz Serendipity liked Barbie a lot as a kid. Aww, the first time chatting with anyone is weeks and Sterling finally opens up. Only for fear of her power making her fade from her own memory causing her to subconsciously increase its strength. Whoa, just what kind of psychic power does Miz Serendipity have? Ouch, it sounds like Miz S. has had incidents where mutant kids have gone missing or worse due to the MCO or other organizations. A tragedy last year fighting the good fight for the next generation, what happened then, I forget if it has been mentioned.
Miz S.'s home base is in the basement of an office building, a good place to hide in plain sight. Alabama State Department of Powers Management, I don't like the local legislature. Harrison McDonough, thanks to him ratting out a safe house to local H1!, two supporters and a mutant kid were murdered and the local cops didn't arrest the killers.
Now I wonder who or what Joe is."Don't you worry none.; Joe's a nice guy-shaped thingamajig."
Her brother had all those things for superheroes, yet had that attitude towards his own sister due to GSD, he is an even bigger creep than I thought. Oh, heroes spoke up for mutant rights or came out as mutants, and Cal got rid of the stuff, I should have known. A seven-foot tall metallic mannequin, Joe Chopper, the Mobile Infantry, cool. Darn, Joe is having a hard time picking up Sterling or the noises she makes, this psi effect even works on machines, crud.
Sterling spent an hour with those two and SKUNK-B-GONE helped to remove most of the smell of pot from her, nice invention, I wonder who made it. Huh, so when she is stoned it seems she is more relaxed, and thus her no-see-um power is weaker, people actually waving at her in greeting.Tuesday, November 22nd, 2016
Oof, to come back to that note from Tanya, to know she is alone until after Thanksgiving, no wonder Sterling feels more alone than before.
So because of what happened with her family, Becca is so afraid of new people, that they would just turn on her like her family did, that she is subconsciously keeping the power on at all times. This is what I feared was happening.There was always the worry that she was causing her own problem, cuz she was scared and shy and hiding in the thing that was keeping her away from people in the first place.; That was what the pink lady thought was going on, at least.;
A call back from one of those she messaged earlier, another kid sent to Whateley by Miz S. and Joe Chopper. Jenifer and she wants to talk face to face in her room, why am I suddenly very worried for Becca? She is going up but is as nervous as the day she learned she was getting a roommate, eep.
Just at Whateley for over a month and Becca is watching speedsters running laps, including a girl who is some sort of cheetah or other cat. Reading a lot, but not socializing, ouch; Sterling, you need to try and open up, and get over your fears or it will only get worse with time. Oh, kids forget her that quickly, this is why training in psychic shielding should be required for all students.September 7th, 2016
Sterling's story as told by Miz S. to Mrs. Savage, yeah, hearing all that would make anyone remember the poor girl. Sequoiah sounds like a sweet girl. Aww, dreads meeting her roommate as she fears being seen and then forgotten over and over again. Avsel, Faollass, Ekene, Dawn, the RAs Sequoiah, Bai-Yun, Telekat, and Serval the not-a-cheetah, a good mix of students at the Whitman table. Keep an eye out for Jenifer, but no such girl spotted.
Ouch, takes in a crowd all alone to a whole new level. She is working on pulling back or reining in her powers, but no progress so far. Ouch, Telekat, I know you are being affected by Sterling's powers, but that hurts. Sequioah is there to hug and comfort Sterling, no wonder she is an RA. Tanya notices Sterling and Telekat doesn't so thinks she is acting weird, darn it! Yikes, Telekat has been trying to work on her mental defenses, but nothing works, no wonder they don't have the students all training their mental defenses, it seems Sterling's psi ability is a very unusual one.
Sterling, you have no reason to apologize, you only have this power and have it stuck on thanks to your monstrous family. Introductions to each other for Tanya and Becca, this is the easy part. Oh god, introduced herself to Dawn 3 times already. Oh no, don't tell me Telekat forgot about Sterling again. Dr. Cody needs to see Sterling for a session and she doesn't wish to go, but Sequoiah warns her she will pick her up and carry her if need be. It hurts to see Sterling so depressed all the time, I hope things get better for her.
Yup, that is Dr. Cody, a big bear of a man thanks to Kodiak. Only Miz S. Sequoiah and Dr. Cody have resisted her power for long. So until Sterling begins to heal the pain in her heart it will be nearly impossible for her to gain any true control over her power, rats. Relax and let go of the anxiety, yikes, easier said than done is an understatement. Sterling, it is this type of thinking about yourself and other people that keeps the hurt going.
Oh crap, she is having flashbacks to before her skin color changed and the type of attention she got then. Rushes back to her room unnoticed only to be greeted by Tanya who introduces herself, Sterling introduces herself in turn. They will be good for each other.
4 months there and Whateley still isn't home, ow. Becca, you have to open up to others, to not be afraid they will simply use and abuse you like your family did after you manifested. A junior in room 347, Jenifer definitely stands out in the crowd, but I wonder why she has that scar on her face. Lost one girl last year and almost lost a second, crap.Tuesday, November 22nd, 2016
And she has seen Becca a bunch of times but didn't realize how special that was. Jenifer Chalmers, Becca is telling her all her troubles. Scarlyt, oh crap, not one of the Bohemians! Please, Tanya, get Becca away from her before it is too late.
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Okay, Scarlyt is a lot worse than I thought to treat her roommates like this. Darn it, Becca cried her eyes out and revealed her backstory to Scarlyt, ended up falling asleep in her arms, and is still there in the morning. And Scarlyt's thoughts about Becca, she needs to be watched closely around other students, I wish Fubar still was at Whateley.Wednesday, November 23rd, 2016
--Scarlyt
Copycat power and she is going to use it on Becca, this is very bad. *tries not to throw up* Okay, you are one sick little girl, Scarlyt, to manipulate other people like that. Oh, good, Mrs. Savage has those means, no wonder she is a dorm mother. Raylynn Meade aka Scarlet, when she is as big a B as Scarlyt thinks then this is someone to avoid. A dimorphic shifter who changes with a hot shower, Ranma 1/2 reference perhaps?
Seesh, so few words, and already feels like one of the most heated catfights I've ever seen. Ah, so Raylynn turns into a male named Raymond when she takes a hot shower, definite Ranma 1/2 reference then. Crud, she is using Becca's "no-see-uhm" power, this is the worst possible scenario for a girl like Scarlyt to have access to that power. Assaulted Raylynn who doesn't even realize anyone did it, this is only going to get a lot worse before she is caught.
Scarlyt getting food for her and Becca, only for Macarthur Price to show up to bug her. She slept with him for access to his powerset, good grief, I thought her Scarlyt had more sense than that. And he is creepy as hell to boot. Idiot has an issue with the scar across her face without Glam to disguise with magic, he needs a lesson in how to treat women. So based on what Scarlyt feels about Becca's power, it isn't some flavor of psionics, but something else, but what? Warper-psi hybrid power, yikes, no wonder it is so powerful.
Becca wearing one of the blouses she stole while living at the mall, I don't like how Scarlyt is being nice to manipulate her for her plans. Becca needs people to talk to, I just wish it was someone who really cared about her. Raiding Glam's closet for a fashion show for Becca, what could possibly go wrong? Oh, so keeping the full extent of how your copycat power works from the testing wonks, not smart, Scarlyt.
The Bohemians have that many apartments in the Whateley underground area, yikes. And one just for Glam's wardrobe, is it Veronica Lodge level of nuts with the amount of clothing?
This, is why if you are wealthy you limit the allowance you give your kids.The wardrobe, for example, was a full suite with kitchenette and toilet, but its main feature was the racks upon racks of clothing.
Daisy Dukes and a flannel tied up in front, I want to hurt her family for breaking Becca like that, she has been groomed by them and hasn't broken it yet. An even skimpier pair of shorts and a denim top, good grief. Hhm, used Becca's power to try and mess with the camera taking a picture, but it still picked up Scarlyt and Becca clearly. She sent that photo to Mocker, when Becca finds out this was a huge betrayal of her trust.
She has other borrowed powers she has someone taken permanently from the sounds of it. 6 slots for permanent powers and 3 already taken, now that is a dangerous form of copycat power. *eyes bug out* Whose power did she steal to gain the power she used to retrieve that hunting knife? She is a cutter!
Why does she think about her body that way, is she some kind of body thief who stole the body of the original owner? Tattered soul in order, this is very dangerous if it isn't just metaphor.A shiver passed throughout her body at the exquisite torture of a body that would never be wholly her own, though she might enjoy claiming it in all ways.
A little burger joint and cafe in the tunnels, just how many restaurants are in the tunnels area now? Oh, so avoiding anyone who might question what Becca is wearing, I really don't like you, Scarlyt. Becca is in an outfit like that, good thing her "no-see-uhm" power works so well or no one attracted to her without a hundred feet would stop staring. Biker girl dominatrix with that riding crop for Scarlyt, eep.
Scarlyt, are you trying to become a porn star with how you eat, tone it down a bit. Oh no, taking Becca to one of her apartments in the underground for a nap, Scarlyt better not pull something on her while she is sleeping. Okay, they need someone to map out the underground and find all these hidden doors.
Becca is shy about being seen naked, and you should tell her that the quilt reveals more details she realizes, Scarlyt. Oh crud, Becca thinks Jenifer is nice and not like what other people say about her, this is going to end badly. Cuckoo Channel's Knock-Out #1, you colossal bitch! Becca trusted you! Becca said you were like a real big sister and you have thoughts about the matter like that, you are the worst. Mocker calling and dang, the "no-see-uhm" power does work on pictures, it is just those with the power can still see themselves in them, but no one else can even detect anyone in the picture. Even his skills couldn't crack the image with new programs he made to do so no less, this is an insanely powerful ability.
Jane "Knock-Out" Chorley owns a jacket like that, it is like a pet with less feeding and upkeep needed. Just because something is weird doesn't mean it isn't safe, Scarlyt. Irving and Ira in Illinois sounds interesting. Ah, an anti-mutant bigot using his act to spread the hate, sickening. And the idiot considers mutants a different species, that isn't how being a mutant works! Ugh, companies like that are going to find out the hard way they had customers who have mutant relatives and friends they like.
Scarlyt, do you just hate your fellow mutants and see them as only toys for you to use and toss away?She still bought NMT-2000 products when she could, if only to support the cause.
She is playing this garbage to test the "no-see-uhm" ability, great, I hope her use of the no-see-uhm has no fallout on Becca. Ah, about to lose her grip on the power unless she pulls back, good. Messing with Valentina aka Eurydice of the Amazons, aww, for once I want to see someone be messed with by Scarlyt. Sera following behind Eurydice, this is bad, how does Val plan to twist her against her friends?
Clairaudiance, so Scarlyt listens in on Sera and Eurydice's conversation. Sera wants to date Tanya and is doing everything to get her to notice her, girl, you need to just be her friend and nothing more, she has Vic already. Val, you saying those things to Sera, I hate how she manipulates people like this and destroys friendships in the process. Sera is obsessed, her relationship with Tanya is going to end badly at this rate. Oh, so lie about the status of your relationship, once Tanya finds out you did your friendship will be over, Sera.
I really wish the staff would crack down on their activities, especially on Val and her power.Val and her 'sisters' were lost in their own fantasy land of imagined grievances and petty power harassment.
An antidote for the knockout spray you used on Becca, you are just as bad as Val, Scarlyt, if not worse. Becca is shy about anyone seeing her naked thanks to how her family treated her and talked about her. Becca, you need to find someone else, anyone else, who will remember and talk with you. Oh, great, Scarlyt thinks this is a date, and that Becca has a preference for elder sibling figures.
It is scary how powerful the no-see-uhm effect is, seeing it in action each time is a minor shock when they are in public. Remove the memory of things on purpose, oh crap, please tell me that is not what happened to Becca and that she is a prisoner in Scarlyt's dorm room or one of her apartments. Dinner at the Crystal Hall and sitting close enough to spy on the girls from Whitman, is this how even those who should remember Becca have forgotten her because Scarlyt used the power actively on them?
Lambykins is not a safe pet name from someone who is supposed to be just a friend or elder sibling figure. Crud, Becca in tears, and Sera lobbying to be Tanya's roommate again, this needs to stop. Great, physical and emotional trauma, so Scarlyt is messed up due to past incidents and seems to be taking it out on anyone she can manipulate.
Darn, this discussion got Becca to realize something about herself it seems. Walk away and find someone else who will really appreciate you, crud, this was Scarlyt's plan all along, to get Becca to admit her feelings, but realize Tanya could never return them in that way so Scarlyt can swoop in and have Becca for herself. Argh! Becca moved out of Whitman and fell for Scarlyt's plan that quickly, she manipulated an emotionally vulnerable girl who was alone at the time and got her. This sucks. And the thoughts of Scarlyt about Becca, I don't care what kind of trauma you have yourself, manipulating an innocent who is hurting like Becca in this way disgusts me.
Oof, losing everything after she manifested, no wonder Scarlyt is such a wreck. And thinking about her "friends" that way, is she in counseling? The fact you are restraining yourself for now, I would respect if it weren't for all the manipulation and using Becca so you can copy her power. Ugh, they kissed and Becca initiated it, this is a toxic relationship and I wish Becca would realize that before it is too late.Thursday, November 24th, 2016
You know what Becca's family was like, the mental and emotional state she is in, and yet you don't feel guilty about manipulating her for your own benefit. All her stuff can fit in one suitcase, the more you learn about Becca the more it hurts to not be able to help her. Oh crap, this is when it happened, Becca goes and packs up her things and Scarlyt uses the no-see-uhm actively on everyone who can remember Becca to erase her completely from their memory. Ugh, Scarlyt, I wish you had never met Becca, she has become dependent on you and it is scary to see from the outside.
I don't like what is going on, please let the effects be reversible, please let Scarlyt's plan fail in the end. Mrs. Savage, Sequoia, Telekat, and Bai-Yun are all there and I agree with TK's sentiment. Hehehe, I love it when Ratel messes with illegal activities at Whateley, the creeps deserve it. Darn it! Get them thinking about Sterling and then eliminate all memories of her while they are on the surface. Barbara "Pullapart" Barracks, if she is someone Glam would want to recruit this girl is bad news. I should have known Becca wouldn't up and disappear without someone else manipulating her and also making everyone who should remember her forget everything about Sterling.
You scum, calling it training when it is a form of brainwashing and manipulation. Red wine, she is going to get Becca drunk, as if things weren't bad enough already. Of course, it is Tanya who bumped into Scarlyt, now we just need to rescue Becca and make her realize what Scarlyt has been doing and done to her and others with her power. Snarl and thinking of Becca that way, you are not a massive bitch, you are a complete psycho whose own sense of right and wrong has been broken. I can't wait until Tanya takes you down, I just hope that Becca wants to be rescued by then.
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Scarlyt getting food for her and Becca, only for Macarthur Price to show up to bug her. She slept with him for access to his powerset, good grief, I thought her Scarlyt had more sense than that.
They hooked up back in Dorms of Our Lives, Season 5:
After several minutes of nothing but televised gossip, the door to the side room opened and Scarlyt slunk out, adjusting her clothes as she joined Janet on the sofa.
"So, how does he rate?" she asked.
The redhead's shrug spoke a thousand words, none of them of a particularly complimentary nature. "He has an exemplar's stamina, but he does not know how to use it -- or anything else -- to its best effect."
You know a guy's bad news when he has to beg to be used and it's not that kind of relationship.
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