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Last Orders (Part 1) by Astrodragon

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07 Jan 2025 18:19 #3985 by mhalpern

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Aww, you think I wont kill a protagonist due to plot armour?
you guys are so cute and adorable..

Also we know they end up in critical condition, and in Doyle.


Even if either of them die, i wouldn't count on them staying dead, Besides there's so much more you can put them through by keeping them alive

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07 Jan 2025 18:27 #3986 by null0trooper

Even if either of them die, i wouldn't count on them staying dead, Besides there's so much more you can put them through by keeping them alive

It's much the same difference as between sheepskin and wool.

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07 Jan 2025 20:51 #3988 by mhalpern

Even if either of them die, i wouldn't count on them staying dead, Besides there's so much more you can put them through by keeping them alive

It's much the same difference as between sheepskin and wool.
Well it they end up all dead, the only thing you can do is go through their pockets and look for loose change, so they'll be mostly dead at worst.

Micro scenes and bad ideas are freely adoptable
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07 Jan 2025 22:13 #3989 by Astrodragon
Dreamer, as always thanks for the wonderful commentary.

The original idea for the portals course was by CPrime;
I loved it so expanded it into a full scene.
Yes, there will be issues with the course, and yes, some
teenage boys will be thinking of a succubus


The spell bracelet shows how a magic item can be built.
You need to modify (if necessary) the spell, design it,
get the materials to make it (luckily cheap for a simple,
limited one like this, and provide the essence to charge
it up. Which is why Mages aren't usually short for cash.

Olrun has clawed his way to the top levels in the cult,
of course he's arrogant.

Vics story is Mal's, this just shows why Vic cant do the
obvious thing and ask one of M3 to cure him. It was a
question he would have asked.

The dance scene is just setting a start point for the group.
No doubt other candidates turned up a bit later.

The swimming was to show how hard it is to convince a fire
dragon into the pool. Thulia is pretty fearless when it comes
to doing things, I felt this was an amusing difference.

The SIM setup is basically a real railway accident, embellished
a bit for Whateley.

Tarot divinations don't usually do well at timestemping the
results. IF if hadn't been Dunwich, they might indeed have
consulted Pat first, but only a few miles from Whateley?


As to what the Cult does next, you'll have to read Part 2
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08 Jan 2025 01:49 #3992 by Apple3141
Which Tarot decks traditionally have duplicates of the Minor Arcana? Two Knight of Swords cards in one layout?

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08 Jan 2025 04:32 #3993 by DanZilla

Which Tarot decks traditionally have duplicates of the Minor Arcana? Two Knight of Swords cards in one layout?

Traditionally decks don't have multiples... when they show up like this it is usually the deck being cheeky and/or mysteriously mystical. Mystically mysterious?
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09 Jan 2025 00:57 #3994 by cprime
I read through the story the night it was released, but I was too interested to do a live commentary. A few thoughts, by section

Warning: Spoiler!
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