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Glyph 4: Putting Pen to Paper
09 Dec 2021 07:41 #930
by Valentine
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I was considering from a carry and concealability for the weapons. Bianca's coat is just asking to have a cut down long gun hidden under it.
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09 Dec 2021 12:13 #931
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I did suggest a violin case
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09 Dec 2021 12:27 - 09 Dec 2021 12:46 #932
by mhalpern
Isn't that the traditional means of concealing Thomson Submachine Guns (with drum magazines, rectangular mags were more in the military issued version, which were more reliable and didn't need to be concealed)?
a bit on the nose, especially for some connected/ dating someone whose connected to Chicago based organized crime
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Replied by mhalpern on topic Glyph 4: Putting Pen to Paper
I did suggest a violin case
Isn't that the traditional means of concealing Thomson Submachine Guns (with drum magazines, rectangular mags were more in the military issued version, which were more reliable and didn't need to be concealed)?
a bit on the nose, especially for some connected/ dating someone whose connected to Chicago based organized crime
Micro scenes and bad ideas are freely adoptable
Last edit: 09 Dec 2021 12:46 by mhalpern.
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09 Dec 2021 12:41 #933
by mhalpern
backpacks are just fine for concealment, it takes slightly longer to access, but that means you've already satisfied the "attempt to flee" aspect of self defense. the coat being fabric without support really doesn't conceal much, but can store a lot of slips and materials
Micro scenes and bad ideas are freely adoptable
Replied by mhalpern on topic Glyph 4: Putting Pen to Paper
I was considering from a carry and concealability for the weapons. Bianca's coat is just asking to have a cut down long gun hidden under it.
backpacks are just fine for concealment, it takes slightly longer to access, but that means you've already satisfied the "attempt to flee" aspect of self defense. the coat being fabric without support really doesn't conceal much, but can store a lot of slips and materials
Micro scenes and bad ideas are freely adoptable
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09 Dec 2021 17:04 #934
by Cryptic
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09 Dec 2021 19:12 #935
by reno
Replied by reno on topic Glyph 4: Putting Pen to Paper
nice story.
i found a small mistake
i found a small mistake
I think that should be miss VioletLike Perfume, Miss Blank was also a gorgeous exemplar, and she too radiated a sense of confidence and competence
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09 Dec 2021 23:51 #936
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She's working to correct that oversight.
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Replied by null0trooper on topic Glyph 4: Putting Pen to Paper
nice story.
i found a small mistakeI think that should be miss VioletLike Perfume, Miss Blank was also a gorgeous exemplar, and she too radiated a sense of confidence and competence
She's working to correct that oversight.
"No Heroes" Part 4: Story link .
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