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Rumble in the Arena by MaLAguA

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22 Mar 2022 00:03 #1503 by DanZilla
"Rumble in the Arena (Part 1)" by MaLAguA is available and it can be found in the Gen 2 section or by using the link below... and please remember our authors are doing this for the response they get... please leave comments where you can for appreciated stories or if you have anything to bring to the conversation of written word and readers.

Rumble in the Arena (Part 1)

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22 Mar 2022 03:21 #1504 by Dreamer
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22 Mar 2022 07:36 #1505 by null0trooper

So the clay sculptor is Rusty, is that his name or codename though?

Iron's long gone by now, so someone else can live with the impname.

Mrs. Fey, that isn't Fey from Gen 1, is it, as I would think she would go by Mrs. Rielly if she was married.

Miss Reilly has been shown to be working at Whateley in Gen 2.
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22 Mar 2022 10:29 #1507 by Valentine
Are you ready to ruuuuuuuuuuuumble?

Yeah, I see this whole thing going bad fairly quickly.

How many fights do they expect to get in in 15 minutes? Someone there has taken BMA I, right? They should know about how long a fight will last, and how quickly they can swap in a new set of combatants.

Hey Vic is going to make something for the Art Club, I wonder if it will be something to do with drinks. It's good to see him doing something relaxing. Actually most of M3 seems to need a relaxing hobby, and drinking coffee doesn't count.
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22 Mar 2022 13:22 #1509 by MaLAguA
As always, it's such a joy to read these commentaries.

Really really thank you ^_^
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05 Apr 2022 02:09 - 05 Apr 2022 17:23 #1580 by mhalpern
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Looks at date, come on Gwen, you found someone to initiate and introduce to "Kevin"

Micro scenes and bad ideas are freely adoptable
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05 Apr 2022 03:03 #1581 by Dreamer
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05 Apr 2022 08:15 #1583 by Valentine
Get the girl drunk, then get her to agree to do stupid shit knowing she'll stick with her agreement. Nice "friends."

Vic is in the Art Club, no chance of weird things happening with that.

What a coincidence, the Sindicate is checking out an illegal fight club the same day they are running a feed from Whateley. What are the odds. Given the lack of masks, I'm guessing that the permission granted did not cover the event being held.
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05 Apr 2022 17:30 #1585 by cprime
No in-depth running thoughts on the series, but it's been interesting watching how the plot lines converge.

An open question for me is whether the Bohemians actually got the permission they claim to have gotten. I'm kinda suspecting they didn't, as the footage would have been a bit more professional if they did.

I'm looking forward to the next installment.
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06 Apr 2022 00:01 #1586 by MaLAguA
Thank you all for the comments. I like to see the reactions i get from the events and enjoy the comments given ^_^.

It all helps me keep going.

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06 Apr 2022 11:37 - 06 Apr 2022 11:39 #1587 by mhalpern
I just realized something, in Gen 2 y2, (yeah I know) BMBLB will likely be playing in Poe frequently

(vol 4 ost track 8, only non opener I know the placement of in the OSTs)

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19 Apr 2022 01:45 #1621 by Dan Formerly Domoviye
Rumble in the Arena Part 3 is up and ready to read.
whateley.academy/index.php/component/k2/...-in-the-arena-part-3
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19 Apr 2022 02:08 #1622 by Dreamer
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20 Apr 2022 14:28 #1624 by MaLAguA
Thank you all for the comments ^_^
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25 Apr 2022 21:15 #1634 by MaLAguA
*twiddles his thumbs waiting at the comment section for the feedback of the last part of Rumble that comes out today*
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