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Rumble in the Arena by MaLAguA

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25 Apr 2022 21:16 #1635 by Dan Formerly Domoviye
You should get some nice comments, it's a good one.

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26 Apr 2022 01:43 #1643 by mhalpern
Haven't read the whole thing but this "Oscar Newton" character sounds a LOT like Erik Mahren,

Micro scenes and bad ideas are freely adoptable
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26 Apr 2022 02:36 #1644 by Dreamer
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Below is a stream of conscious commentary I type up as I read the story. There will be details from the story included in it. If you have not read the story yet and don't wish to have details of it spoiled, read no further.

Rumble in the Arena Part 4 comments
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26 Apr 2022 04:15 #1645 by Valentine

Haven't read the whole thing but this "Oscar Newton" character sounds a LOT like Erik Mahren,

Yes he does.

Well the Bohemian Lion seems to have less morals than The Don. The Don at least stuck up for his minions. The Lion looks like he's just letting them hang in the wind.

I hope she remembers how dangerous it is to make a deal with a dragon.
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26 Apr 2022 14:41 #1649 by mhalpern

Haven't read the whole thing but this "Oscar Newton" character sounds a LOT like Erik Mahren,

Yes he does.

Well the Bohemian Lion seems to have less morals than The Don. The Don at least stuck up for his minions. The Lion looks like he's just letting them hang in the wind.

I hope she remembers how dangerous it is to make a deal with a dragon.
Morgana can always bring out some ketchup to remind her

Micro scenes and bad ideas are freely adoptable
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