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03 May 2022 00:00 #1674 by DanZilla
Fire Over Phoenix was created by DanZilla
Fire Over Phoenix (Part 1)"by Astrodragon and Domoviye can be found in the Gen 2 section or by using the link below... and please remember our authors are doing this for the response they get... please leave comments where you can for appreciated stories or if you have anything to bring to the conversation of written word and readers.

Fire Over Phoenix (Part 1)
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03 May 2022 02:07 #1675 by mhalpern
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Not done yet but
"Oh come on, I'm just visiting and asking the girls' parents a few questions. What could possibly go wrong?"

Thulia is not genre savvy

Micro scenes and bad ideas are freely adoptable
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03 May 2022 04:09 #1676 by Dreamer
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SPOILER ALERT
Below is a stream of conscious commentary I type up as I read the story. There will be details from the story included in it. If you have not read the story yet and don't wish to have details of it spoiled, read no further.

Fire Over Phoenix Part 1 comments
Warning: Spoiler!

Thank You for the story comments appreciated and help me know they are being read and liked. :-) Note: My story comments can't nor are trying to replace reading the stories, simply my way of enjoying them and letting the authors know I enjoy them.
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03 May 2022 06:50 #1677 by Dan Formerly Domoviye
Thanks Dreamer. I was wondering how you'd react to this story.

Warning: Spoiler!


Thanks as always for the comments. They're fun to read.
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03 May 2022 07:52 - 03 May 2022 07:53 #1678 by Astrodragon
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I bet you all think Dom came up with FrankenCorps, don't you?

:D :D :D
Last edit: 03 May 2022 07:53 by Astrodragon.
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03 May 2022 13:01 #1679 by Astrodragon
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Not done yet but
"Oh come on, I'm just visiting and asking the girls' parents a few questions. What could possibly go wrong?"

Thulia is not genre savvy

Well no, but why should she be?
Given time, Morgana and M3 will educate her, but right now she has glaring gaps in her knowledge of human culture
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03 May 2022 16:17 #1680 by mhalpern
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Not done yet but
"Oh come on, I'm just visiting and asking the girls' parents a few questions. What could possibly go wrong?"

Thulia is not genre savvy

Well no, but why should she be?
Given time, Morgana and M3 will educate her, but right now she has glaring gaps in her knowledge of human culture

Well didn't she "study" a lot of anime and manga?

Micro scenes and bad ideas are freely adoptable

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03 May 2022 16:21 #1681 by Astrodragon
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Not done yet but
"Oh come on, I'm just visiting and asking the girls' parents a few questions. What could possibly go wrong?"

Thulia is not genre savvy

Well no, but why should she be?
Given time, Morgana and M3 will educate her, but right now she has glaring gaps in her knowledge of human culture

Well didn't she "study" a lot of anime and manga?

She did, but she was mainly interested in how humans see demon and dragon girls looking, and what they wear
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04 May 2022 09:04 #1685 by Valentine
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Institutional Cannibalism, and not about Catholic Mass, how odd.

FrankenCorp, I wonder if Meatloaf is on the menu. 🤔

I wonder what is on the picnic menu.

So what sort of powers does Fenek actually have? A werefennec? Avatar? Generic shifter?
She seems to have some resistance to drugs, but no Regen. Heightened strength and agility, senses, and a combination of both intelligence and foolishness.

What is it with characters with Iron in their name not being the sharpest knife in the set? If I were him, I wouldn't mention my first attempt to kidnap an unsuspecting 13 year old girl.

A frustrated Thulia is not going to be a good thing.
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04 May 2022 11:59 #1686 by Dan Formerly Domoviye
Iron is a little overconfident, he's had it too easy for a while.

Since it won't spoil anything important, Fanak is a shifter. No avatar for her. And that's a pretty good assessment of her powers, especially the intelligence and foolishness.
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04 May 2022 14:39 #1687 by null0trooper
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FrankenCorp, I wonder if Meatloaf is on the menu. 🤔

"Aw, Mom! Not Meat Loaf again?"

I wonder what is on the picnic menu.

"Picky, picky, picky."
"You can pick your friends, you can pick your nose, but you can't pick your friend's nose."
"Kinky. But, it's not that kind of show!"

A frustrated Thulia is not going to be a good thing.

Or, it could be a wonderful thing. It all depends on your point of view and how far from ground zero you are.
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05 May 2022 01:11 #1688 by Dan Formerly Domoviye

FrankenCorp, I wonder if Meatloaf is on the menu. 🤔

"Aw, Mom! Not Meat Loaf again?"

"Hush up and be respectful. That's your brother you're talking about."
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05 May 2022 08:10 #1689 by Astrodragon
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FrankenCorp, I wonder if Meatloaf is on the menu. 🤔

"Aw, Mom! Not Meat Loaf again?"

"Hush up and be respectful. That's your brother you're talking about."

"But Moooooom!! There's bits in it!"
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