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Born in Fire

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02 Jan 2022 19:50 #1081 by Astrodragon
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Hmmm.. not unreasonable, but the relationships are COMPLETELY different!

Jobe sees Belfy as an 'I made her myself, she belongs to me' toy, rather than as a person.
Thulai sees Morgana... well, keep reading Born in Fire and Where there's smoke thete's fire and you'll find out :D
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04 Jan 2022 00:30 #1100 by Astrodragon
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Part 3 of the story is now up to read and comment on
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04 Jan 2022 03:16 #1101 by cprime
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A few quick thoughts, as usual.
Warning: Spoiler!
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04 Jan 2022 03:29 #1102 by Dreamer
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SPOILER ALERT
Below is a stream of conscious commentary I type up as I read the story. There will be details from the story included in it. If you have not read the story yet and don't wish to have details of it spoiled, read no further.

Born in Fire Part 3 comments
Warning: Spoiler!

Thank You for the story comments appreciated and help me know they are being read and liked. :-) Note: My story comments can't nor are trying to replace reading the stories, simply my way of enjoying them and letting the authors know I enjoy them.
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04 Jan 2022 03:49 #1103 by Dan Formerly Domoviye
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Just want to say how much I love Tanau. She's like the perfect Grandma.

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04 Jan 2022 06:15 #1104 by Court
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Arrokoth is a wonderful name for the imp. I am sure his phone number, or equivalent, is 486958.

People should google "New Horizons Arrokoth", or look up

At least the air on Thulia's Ultima Thule isn't frozen, unlike ours. There is cold, and then there is cold. :)

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04 Jan 2022 06:17 #1105 by Court
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The URL got eaten there. Try https: //

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04 Jan 2022 06:18 #1106 by Court
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And was still eaten.

Let's see if that works.

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04 Jan 2022 06:19 #1107 by Dan Formerly Domoviye
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You need a certain number of posts before you share links. It stops spammers.

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04 Jan 2022 07:11 #1108 by Court
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Still not working. The URL censor here is very, very good. Just go to wikipedia and look up Arrokoth.

(My apologies for cluttering up the forum.)

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04 Jan 2022 09:25 #1109 by Astrodragon
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A few quick thoughts, as usual.
Warning: Spoiler!

Tanua a diplomat... :bigsmile:
Not... exactly. Although she did have a profession that involved close proximity and helping to reduce tension, yes

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04 Jan 2022 09:37 #1110 by Astrodragon
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As always, Dreamer, thanks for the comments.

I think you're being a little unfair to Thulia's parents.
She's their child, she's willful, and she's doing stuff thats getting her into danger. They want to protect her.
Of course, as is often the case, they arent doing too well.
And again, as happens too often, Thulia's rebellion is returned with attempts at more control.

Obviously I considered just having a screaming match and her running off, but that sort of family has been shown a lot, so I wanted to do it a bit differently.
Thank's to Tanau, its gone down from mutual screaming to something that at least allows the family to form a new balance.
There is also a plot reason for having them not split up, thats (spoilers).

Master Siveth is being rather morse subtle than Thulia realises.
She is due a punishment (shes arrived a week late), but what hes done is choose one that might teach her a couple of important lessons.
First is Actions Have Consequences (good luck on this with a teenager, but there's always a chance)
Second is that a lot of the planes and dimensions she can getc cto arent nice, or safe, or pleasant, Again, may not stick.

Come on, you don't expect Bruce NOT to tease her about what they will talk about with such a fancy communication device!


The ferrets are simply, hungry, giant snow ferrets, they arent taken from any particular mythos.
Of course, you have seen them (and Ultima Thule) before...

'Are we sure there isn't a book on rules-lawyering out there in the dimensions that some teens just stumble upon?'
Loopholes memoirs? :D
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04 Jan 2022 15:31 #1111 by Astrodragon
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Dreamer, I missed a question.

The reason Thulia didn't think of a leman bond is that they are old and out of fashion for a long time. So she thought of the more common way of solving the issue, which would be to get married.
If Tanau hadn't come up with an alternative, that would pretty much have been her only option, marriage, or at the least a proper engagement.
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05 Jan 2022 09:56 #1113 by Wendy
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Remember in Heaven and Hell , the Succubus or Lillith’s daughters are the best diplomats in Hell

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18 Jan 2022 02:35 #1168 by Astrodragon
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And the fourth part (and last for this story arc) is up
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